An ArHi SS: Scandalous *Thread Two* - Page 97

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic :) i cant wait :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amezing update loved it now what is Shaym is up to 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 5:

Hello hai bye bye Mamiji bhi yahan hain'😊.

Hai khushi yeh tumne kya kar diya ASR ke saath???😉 Thank you once again for writing about payal and khushi's bond. It was so sad that they (the forget full CVs) never made khushi and payal talk to each other like sisters after their marriage. It was annoying that after showing an extra ordinary bond between the sisters they never worked on it. So a big thankswa for this.⭐️

Good advice payalia, I guess that this is what any elder sister would tell her younger sibling''

Nahi don't tell me that the snake wants to prepone the wedding. 😡

Arnav beta shayad ab dus din se bhi kam din baki bache hain.

Ahh toh actually farak padta hain'.khushiji.

Loved the chapter and dying to know how this one unfolds.


Liza

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Posted: 12 years ago

6 (part 1)

So Arnav baba is in Khushi's house to make her admit 'Farak Dadta hain'

Par beta our khushi is very strong girl she will fight you very step of the way'😊So khushi's heart is playing with her and confusing her mmm😉

Hey nice I don't think I mentioned this earlier I love this independent smart Di who is looking after her Chotey for a change 👍🏼 and not just sobbing away to glory because he didn't tell her and go out''''..

The thalwala dash''''hey you have done a fab job of describing another beautiful scene. 👏

I always thought that the original was executed beautifully and trust me when I say that even your version of these great scenes are simply awesome'''.👏.You go girl'. ⭐️You are truly brilliant.

Khushi and payal bonding time again''.Just love it. This is exactly what sisters who are close to each other will do, not hide things from one another'. Thankswa for writing this.👏

So arnav and khushi are in a room alone together. 🤬 Wow. Aah the 'aney do' loved it.


Liza

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 6 Part 2

So khushi gives in is it??? 😉Nahh

Breaks off with snake (he seems to be ok in this FF but aadat se mujboor hence will stick with snake till I am sure that he is a good guy)

So khushi is off to the well'.😳The first kiss''yipeee

Mmm so khushi has not given in completely'.👍🏼

What 'the snake' (see I was right) has not broken the wedding. What the hell does he want????


Liza



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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 7:

What is wrong with you Garima'. How can you force your daughter (whom you claim to love very much) to marry somebody that she doesn't want to' Ya but I guess I get the mother's POV how can she give her blessings to her daughter for a relationship where the man doesn't even believe in marriage' Hey I really liked the way you wrote Garima's perspective as khushi's understands it.👍🏼

Just when I was starting to understand you mummyji you go and emotionally blackmail your daughter to marry someone of your choice????😡

Hey I love this Payal with a backbone. Arnav beta terna bad karo aur apna Bluetooth on karo. Otherwise gayi bhais paani main...

So good arnav baba is on his way to get his love😉

Ok so I was not expecting this 'the kiss' is caught on camera.😲Arnav stopping Buaji another of my favourite scenes.

You know I have always overlooked shortcomings of Buaji in the show cause otherwise she was such a lovable character but I am happy that you are capturing it. ⭐️

So Arnav and khushi are going to be akele akele in the penthouse'ok ..🤬

The hug was too cute. I love this protective caring arnav.

So the siblings are close to each other but are not attached at the hip me like it...👍🏼

OK there is no way that shyam is anji's spouse I can count on you not to be predictable'. Lets see.😕


Liza

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved all the parts...
fab FF...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok finally the "Scandal" in Scandalous breaks out...

I like arnav and anjali's relationship in this story. Its much the same, yet Anjali is no longer airy-fairy-pooja lady..and gives GOOD advice. He has very good reason to look up to her, no? Saving his ass always. And I like to see that arnav is concerned about her well-being. You haven't just neglected that part..you know.

Oh payal sweetheart..you still havent found your akashji, have you? Rabba-vey wala love hai tum nahi samjogi! And so I love her..
"I'm your sister, and all I want is for you to be happy. I cannot see you in tears"
payal that is..cause she is genuine, she is just a product of her surroundings..and her advice is quite sound. Yes I was taken aback by how enforcing (cant find a better word ah) it is as khushi will blindly follow it.
This has been one of my favouritest scenes so far...yes after the first pool scene ok. The way you described how khushi felt..that was a sort of first, because when you tell it to someone that is when you admit it to yourself too. And no matter what advice, I am glad khushi has someone else to share all this with..I mean it would be nice to have another person, who would tell her "par this is rabba-vey wala love dont let it go", but might be overkill at this stage. Like how you kept it.

Ok what the...Shyam stop being sooo desperate yaar! Matlab shaadi prepone karvadi...the adrenaline is pumping through my veins. Shyam is moving closer..3 days to the wedding, and arnav just fell back a step..scandal. Dekhte hai kisme kitni hai destiny? Kiska saath degi khushiji...to learn more keep reading scandalous?

Now to the scandal...gosh lavanya is turning out to be a sheetal! I kind of like it..villans are fun dude, specially in disguise of beautiful models seeking revenge.

And the maha confrontation. Juhi its like I dont even know the real asr-khushi anymore, all I know is what you give us..And you know when you see a rabba-vey sort of confrontation scene of their's and its only got like 2-3 ranges of emotions. But this one has it all...

To begin with the batameezi scene! The word marriage! The misconception that the world revolves around him! The story of lavanya! The explanation of the word "seeing" (I laughed)! The New girl (reallly good tv show..if u like quirky,indie,weird people)! And the FARAQ question! The final challenge!

But there can only be one winner..Khushi admitting her feelings fully, not just about faraq but about marriage. That was perfect (I know I overuse this word..par bhavanao ko samjo!!)
"I am choosing that which is most important to me, and I am rejecting the transient something that seems to exist between us, in favor of a permanent, lifelong bond.."

This is exactly why I was apprehensive about arnav:
"I will have you, no matter what it takes."
This is clearly not taking him anywhere..but I wonder if this is also why we love ASR secretly, cause he hasnt stopped pursuing her?

I dont know why I love this dialogue...
"So despite everything that is, and everything that could happen between us, you are still going to go ahead with this marriage?"

Ok AAP? ab there is a fourth hero? Juhi that is just on a whole new platform of scandalous.

Hitashi

ps. Thread 2 wooot!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loving it, read till now in one go...love how the story has developed...love Anjalis role in it, active role n also Payals :))
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Posted: 12 years ago

Holymotherofgod Chapter 6 is huge! And it begins with "caramel eyes" who within like 2 minutes is charming his way through the family..

Oh Buaji thank you with your shaatir dimag you brought arnav babua and sanka devi together! Nandkishore ki jayi ho!

Or in this case the credit goes to ASR, that man is something..be with khushi so she cant get married. Let the eyes talk, touch, oogle.

I love their challenges..I am so excited, I dont even want to comment.

OH btw the syringe, its the diabetes thing..right? Cause ASR dont need no drugs for rabba-veying!

I cant believe arnav already told anjali about khushi!! See he is also unclear on this 'want' business.


Ah exquisite choice indeed "A deep mauve silk fabric with gold threadwork"!!

The temple scene!! Wonderful..you never fail to add a rabba vey to the simplest things..

Payal makes a comeback..and is shocked to see the first live rabba vey moment of her life! And soon 20 million of those follow..I like the scene where she observes khushi at night. So simple yet hits home.
"Payal didn't know how she was supposed to deal with this." - Join the club bro!
I knew I would like this payal..I love that you have given her this role in the story. I hated to see khushi the only martyr while payal stood by looking constipated in IPK. "I'll do anything to take away your pain..." I really enjoyed their conversation as usual.

Then khushi goes back to being her chirpy (I dont know if its the right word here) self, as soon as its decision time..and sangeet ve's the night away. I love the range of emotions you show in her..I can feel the final battle of hogwarts going on within her...their eyes and desire, the rage, her parents.
"She hadn't known that he would have to do almost nothing in order to make her change her mind."
"her greatest battle was going to be the one she was fighting with herself."
"Silenced by the weight of an affection, a gratitude that she would never let herself forget..."
And I could even feel Arnav getting affected by the "family" clause
"the man standing by the kitchen door"
"all he could do was continue his assault on her senses"
Really good transition between scenes.

Damnit you describe the eyes & looks so well.."an unwavering love..." vs "everything that she wanted to deny."

And finally the meeting after a long day of avoidance...
"Hadn't she closed it when she left?"
This reeks of ASR!
The whole thing was so perfect..but what surprises me as always is khushi..
After all, this would be the last time, wouldn't it?
And whats even better is you brought the "Aane do" scene. ahhh
The aptest way of describing it all:
"This man who was her dream, her fantasy...and her nightmare, all at once."

Then I fell off my chair..not because I was in 50 shades of gutter..par "Sheetal is ready with the mehendi cones"
You are the best. I bow down to your super excellence in writing this story.

Arnav gave a low blow..but I guess, anything to make her realise that "You belong to me, Khushi Kumari Gupta."

Cant wait to see what happens when Shyamji appears.

Hitashi

ps. This story is wayyy too popular for me to expect consecutive comment spots! And you know why..

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