Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I #7 ~ Chapter 30 (Last) - Page 60

Just read this story in one go...what a fantastic writer you are! I hadn't discovered this story till now, now that I have read it, I will definitely say it is the one of the best stories of ARHI so far! Great job..plan to read more of your work!

This is one of the best ff I ever read ❤️

I can't help but still feel the little ache for MKM-I ended. The only relief is that we have MKM-II from you and I'm holding on to it to never let it go.
I really don't have any idea as to why you never wrote before. You have nailed it from the word "GO". I wonder how you controlled yourself from writing when I'm sure your mind must have been overflowing with ideas.
Kudos and lots of love for writing this beautiful, beautiful story.
And once again just for making it more clear - I'm never ever going to fall out of love for ArHi stories. They introduced me to IF, to long discussions, to the world of VMs & FFs and I have no plan to say goodbye to this beautiful world, not even for any other show.
No other show has captured my heart like IPKKND and I don't think any show will be able to do that.
Once again thank you for this unique and heart touching story. 😊

came across this ff yesterday and boy one word i can say right now is BRAVO 👏

Loved how he got her to love him and made her his forever...
I commented in earlier threads but writing here for the latter part of the story
He was craving for her to tell him that she does and she did in the most unassuming way and so innocently and then he just couldn't stop the flood of emotions and tells her in the most romantic way ever that he love her leaving her in awe of him and his feelings for her... It was a very beautiful moment of the story... Very touching and heart warming...
I liked the flirty Arnav making her blush everytime and also how she discovers this new side of him and feels so special...
And finally they get married... Like their camaraderie and domesticity u portrayed...and of course the chemistry and romance...
However I hv one complain to make why was Arnav so mean to akash, it was his mother after all not him who did wrong to khushi (although he didn't stop her, but still)...

The bonding that arhi share and the slow developments in their relationship and how they find love was so beautifully portrayed... I like the little phrases that u use to explain a situation or an emotion, they are so original and realistic, like how one actually feels them in one's life, it makes you think and u feel yeah that's how it is... And they also bring the whole story and characters alive... it gives an impression of you being a deep thinker and a very perceptive person... U are an amazing writer...
Arnav did make Khushi his by wooing her and winning her heart and soul...
Lovely story...
Congratulations... :)

That was an awesome story. Loved how everything worked out for them in the end and how they got a beautiful family.

One word for this story AWESOME!!! Loved it to bits...glad i found this story...pls add me and pm me on further of ur stories...thanx

OMG, this story was AWESOME... I just loved it, beautifully written.
It was a simple n sweet story wid lots of shades n also lots of positives to derive...
Thanks for d wonderful story...