Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I #7 ~ Chapter 30 (Last)

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veggie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

One of da most Amazing and well written story EVER!!! :D

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GunM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

WOW...a really beautiful and amazing story

the love Khushi had is every girls dream

and also superbly written👏

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Cathy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

Hi there,

You just found a fan in me of your story and writing. Loved this story to bits. Had found it yesterday and then I sat up until quite late to read how much ever I could before completing it now. Loved the Arnav and khushi portrayal in this story. Its been a cute, sentimental, and sweet ff. I guess my favourite part of the story would have been when you described them getting engaged to each other in the presence of God and their kids. They had only each other to call their own, to celebrate the happy occasion with and your description absolutely tugged my heart.

Thank you for this wonderful FF.

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inspiringstars

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

What a lovely story! Of fairy tales and prince charmings! Of realities and dreams! Of love and passion! Of life and family!

Its beautiful how they both knew each other from first, there was no love at first sight, but they gradually fell in love, respect came in time, the love following. But what I liked the most was its a believable story, very realistic. Very human, and true! Nothing extra ordinary but still so so beautiful! I did not see rabba veys, or dramatic stage falls, or any other breath catching moments - except the real ones, which really happen to people, like getting angry at your fiance's late arrival, jealous with your fiance's friend, wanting to own your love in every possible way. It was just very very real, and it touched my heart!!!

I loved this story,

Pankti

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aglaeca9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

the best update n ff on arshi i hv evr read...
generally i read few arshi ff's bt ur jst amazing writer..
really madly in luv wid dis ff❤️..fantabulous ff
so beautiful,sumtyms emotional sumtyms hilarious...etc..etc..
jst can't explain it in words..nw dis is one of my favorite one..
superb job..🤗

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rehnu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#586

awww awesum fabulous and superb story

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sida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

read it in one go.
that was just superb.
an awesome piece of writing😊

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anu1017

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Posted: 12 years ago

#588

Really loved mkm1 read it all in one go you are an amazing writer, big fan of mkm2 hopefully you will never end mkm series and start mkm3 once you are done with mkm2😊