Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I #7 ~ Chapter 30 (Last)

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Sharwari

@misscutegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

hey nice updates..!!
thank you so much for such a wnderful piece..!!
Read intro for MKM2 eagerly waitng for it..!!
Nd u shuld continue writing about arhi as der many fans out der lyk me who wil NEVER get bored of arhi..:)!!

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Huny

@huny.thebest

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

a beautiful ending to a beautiful story dear...

loved every part of it...

n about more stories on arhi... would loved to read more from u on arhi... plz continue...

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

dear anon

i started out late on ur story and caught up it time for the last 10 most happening chapters...i enjo yed this story greatly and i would further say that it was soothing and relaxing to read urs 😃...i am with u in ur next journey of arshi as arshi is very close to my heart and ur way of bringing them to life is just beautiful...👏

About todays' grand finale - how much ever we try to describe the power of ASR it would fall short...but to have it from the mouth of a scribe makes us simply feel the magnitude of it - and this is rightly shown in the case of Akash Roy.a fitting reply...inclusion of payal and nk was well laid out...the baby steps of khushi in the corporate world as Mrs. ASR was out and out enjoyable...😃

well i can go on to describe each and every scene of todays' chapter but i seem to be falling short of words.Anyway congrats on the completion of MKM-1 and from the intro of MKM-2 it sounds to be very interesting..well looking forward for MKM-2 😳

All that i want to now say is PLS CONTINUE SOON 😆

TC and BYE

ps : thanx for the pm - i really appreciate it

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Deepa.Nayyer

@Deepa.Nayyer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

I just loved...they love each other very much...

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Firstly I'm sad because I got late to check..
I'm not unhappy for MKM-1 to end because it's a beautifully perfect end to this beautiful story. It gives a proper closure to their love story.
This was an awesome and befitting end filled with care & concern - felt during the party & then in Hawaii. 😊
Arnav's protective & calculative streak - the way he dealt with Akash.😊
Him being naughty the way he locked all her clothes in cupboard.😉
Romance was everywhere be it the glances he shared with her in the party or when they made love in Hawaii.😳
Khushi's complete love for him - it was described beautifully at the end with her immense love for him even after knowing his shortcomings.😊

This is an amazing story. I'm sure MKM-2 will rock too like this.👍🏼

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful story with all of us. A big bear🤗 for you.👏
It's writers like you who have kept ArHi and IPKKND alive in our hearts with your beautiful work even when the show has ended.

PS: I always want a PM for all of your work.

PPS: Don't even think about stopping ArHi stories ever. I know new shows are coming but no show or leads can match Arnav-Khushi and IPKKND.
PPS: For ArHi stories - its more the merrier😛

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Brilliant... that was a perfect farewell to one of d cutest story ive read ever... i for one totally loveedd their wedding and d way he treated her and everythng else in that gentlemanly way... it was equally fun to read about d childish antics of khushi in disneyland..it totally goes with her character... the families warm n comfy atmosphere at d end was a great read.. needless to say tht i loved their lovelyalone times d most...obvsly...;-) thanku fr writing this one n am too happy to hv come across it :-) looking frward to mkm2.. and hey am nevr evr gonna gt over with my arshi obsession so u will hav to keep writing always...lol.. ;-);-)

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keyboard123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Absolutely loved the ending! Can't believe it has already ended. Beautiful story! Thank you so much. Can't wait to read MKM-2!! Already sounds interesting!