Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I #7 ~ Chapter 30 (Last) - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear, thanks for the pm.

The most fabulous chapter ever. You deserve a standing ovation.👏

Your last chapter was simply mind blowing, their wedding party was so well described.

Arnav gave right treatment to Akash for misbehaving with Khushi.

Arnav is a man in the true sense of the word. His love has no barriers at all. He shows his appreciation of Khushi even in public.

I can totally imagine an excited Khushi at Disneyland. Wow Arshi had a very hot, passionate and erotic honeymoon.😉


PS
Hey dear Please give us an epilogue. Please
I wanted to read how Arshi's children develop a bond with Adit and Adya. Also how Arshi as parents behave with their own children and Adit and Adya.😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated my comments on Pg. 24.
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Posted: 12 years ago
AAww, that was so, so sweet. I've loved everything about his heart warming story and this lovely ending left me with a big smile on my face.😃

Thank you for this lovely, gentle, heart-warming love story!



Really looking forward to MKM2. Hurry up!😊
Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful ending. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent end yar
loved this SS a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
While reading the update I just loved the length of it, so I was just reading taking breaks in between thinking that would increase the length even more 😳 Yes I am like that. I feel so bad its ending so soon. I know as a writer you think soon 30 chapters is NOT soon, but as an addicted reader even 50 chapters to this yummy SS would sound TOO soon to me 😳

The way Akash is dealt with kudos I liked it too much. It would have been nice getting Akash's mom also slightly insulted too publicly eh 😉

The kind of clothes Khushi had to wear I love the Arnav in your SS too much BAS! Khushi being bold now that is called cool.
I just loved ❤️ Arnav's possessiveness towards Khushi YUMMY

I know what I am asking is too much but is an Epilogue possible for this as you did not show Khushi getting pregnant ? After all the HOT nights & high level of intimacy Arnav & Khushi have gone through... Pretty Please 😃 Adit & Adya are after all adopted not real na...

I wanted to mention from a long time I am not good at giving lamba chauda comments how much ever I love the update... But sometimes I land up giving long ones when I cannot resist... Like the current colourful one... 😆

Seeing MKM - 1 I have some serious expectations from MKM - 2 😃 you know what right... 😆


About the thank you note... ⭐️
I never expected you to mention me 😲 😆 that was a welcome surprise in the morning...along with the update... 🤗
😳 A friend in need is a friend in deed 😛 if I really like the story, it goes with my thought process & if the writer is new I will help her / him to any extent possible... 😛 as long as she / he is willing to take the help too... You & me seem to have similar thoughts at all points of discussion. I have found a lovely friend in you... ⭐️ who has a great taste in writing Yummy & delicious stories...

Yes very importantly my help continues in the next SS too 😃 👍🏼 dont have to worry about that. Yes I might most probably stop reading stories once ChanChan starts... not sure though...

Thanks alot for mentioning in me 😳 with the Title IF - Angel ⭐️ means alot to me... I am really glad I could help you so much ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Senorita Sanaya




About the thank you note... ⭐️
I never expected you to mention me 😲 😆 that was a welcome surprise in the morning...along with the update... 🤗
😳 A friend in need is a friend in deed 😛 if I really like the story, it goes with my thought process & if the writer is new I will help her / him to any extent possible... 😛 as long as she / he is willing to take the help too... You & me seem to have similar thoughts at all points of discussion. I have found a lovely friend in you... ⭐️ who has a great taste in writing Yummy & delicious stories...

Yes very importantly my help continues in the next SS too 😃 👍🏼 dont have to worry about that. Yes I might most probably stop reading stories once ChanChan starts... not sure though...

Thanks alot for mentioning in me 😳 with the Title IF - Angel ⭐️ means alot to me... I am really glad I could help you so much ❤️




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Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
dont u ever stop writing about arnav khushi ...how many more ideas and its better...totally loved d update ...sohis stares and grumbling is out of effect or can say der warranty has ended as far as d biggest child of his family is concerned ...loveeeddd ittt
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update. Perfectly written. I loved reading it.
Arnav introduced khushi to the world, at the end of party she realised she has to be a loving wife and mother in home and for outside world she has to be Mrs.ASR. Loved the disneyland part where arnav s taking care of 3 kids. Khushi must hav missed all this fun in her childhood. Khushi feeling jealous of nanny, lol. Khushi moving downstairs and arnav with 2 angels in his lap, and they smiling at her, that was an amazing picture. At last he made her HIS. Hey, pls inform us when khushi's results are out.

Thanks 4 dis wonderful story.
Pls dont stop writing about arhi.
Edited by nnsunn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful end dear - it was an Arnavlicious treat - he is strong, protective, stern, romantic, naughty, tender, passionate - everything! Loved it! Will miss this story..

Can't wait for MKM-2 :)

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