Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I #7 ~ Chapter 30 (Last) - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww!!!!!!! A very nice toe-curling last update...:-)A fairy tale in reality..wat more can be said..hmm... this FF is definitely one of a kind..
Thank you for mkm-1😊
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Eagerly w8in to read mkm-2...
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Posted: 12 years ago
what an update...WOW👏...its been a gr8 journey to be wid ur story throughout...lyk any other story i thot may be sum day u wud abruptly end this story for nt getting the desired response bt u proved me wrong...girl u completed the story and i jus loved ur funda dat even if the readers wont lyk ur story u wud still post it for urself...😊

Thanks a lot for a last long update wid even a loinger Thank U note at the end...i havent seen anyone who wud hav posted such a long Thank U note after ending their story...👍🏼

Congratulations and Thank HYou for already coming up wid MKM-2...m sure u will get a much better response for dat story tooo...It does not feel lyk as if the 1st season is over...Thanks a lot...👍🏼

Coming back to the story...

I just loved the converstaion between the reporters who wer hell scared on asking Mrs. ASR any question...it showed the fear they had in them for ASR(this even the onscreen show cud not depict😆)...and then the Lovely , awesomely and romantic honeymoon was so...🤬❤️☺️
Poor Akash wud not hav thot wat Asr was holding for him in Future...😆😲
and the cute little Adit and Adya wer the best thing that happened to the Story...❤️

Keep up the good work and keep writing such good stufff...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely end yaar,,,,,,
]thank you for this update
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Posted: 12 years ago
an amazing FF with an amazing ending...👏
please...don't stop writing stories regarding ARSHI...
I am still on this forum...stalking over ONLY the arshi stories...because of you awesome writers with the awesome stories of ARSHI...thanks a lot for writing this wonderful story...keep writing...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ouhh!! i am speechless!!

this has been one the most beautiful FFs i have read so far!

my heart always constricted thinking abt how lonely they must have felt with all the family members leaving them... thats the worst feeling ever!!
i still remember when i read most of the chaps in one go ... i cried so much when Nani died...
i dont know what made me feel so ... but i felt shattered ... but slowly as the family life progressed i felt better ...

i am sorry i am not in my full form to be able to write more... the epilogue again brought me tears... Happy wala tears that is...
and i am feeling so content ...
i would like to cherish this feeling for some more time ... and i shall comment again... Pinky Promise!! i know i wanna write so much more .. but like i said .. later... i am gonna re read the FF all in one go and then comment again!! :)

Thank you so so much for sharing this with us!! :)
I am good stalker ... but i will buddy you nevertheless :)

So looking fwd to MKM2 ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful end..
Loved the revenge ASR planned for Mr Roy..


Thank you for such an amazing story
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part.. loved it.. perfect ending..
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Posted: 12 years ago
The ending lines were so perfect - can't be any better. Must say the last chapter wants us to wish that the story continues. But as you say all good things come to an end, this story too had to end.
Must say you scripted the entire chapter very well - the reception , Aakash Roy fiasco , Disneyland and the honeymoon. But the parting shots took the cake.
Loved it to the bits.
I am eagerly waiting for MKM - 2. Please make it even better than this one. You have upped the expectation quotient.
Update MKM - 2 soon.
Take your time and a few chapters to etch out the characters.
I pledge my support with you through this new journey.
All the best !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
no the story ended 😭😭 but hey what an ending it was...she is truly his in every sense now and he did all that by just being himself...

please write MKM-2 soon and dont you ever doubt that people dont want to read Arshi stories anymore...let there be 100 new shows but Arshi FFs are the only stories i will ever read here on IF...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww, is this the last chapter, already? I'm going to miss this wonderful, intelligent, well written story.
Best of luck on all your future ventures. Do pm me, if possible, about the new story you are planning to start soon.
Edited by siamesecat - 12 years ago

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