Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I #7 ~ Chapter 30 (Last)

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

loved the story

the way he "took care" of aakash was too good!!! he didn't even back out on his promise

the honey moon along with the kids was both adorable and romantic

the end where you made it sound like a perfect fairy tale ending was beautiful

I will be more than happy to be part of MKM 2

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kristin

@sweet_5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

I had to like console myself before I read this chapter, This story was just awesome,

I know you want a review and constructive feedback, I'm sorry if this word is overused and plain but honestly my review is summed up in this one word:

BRILLIANT

FRICKIN BRILLIANT

I don't even know what else to say, I just love the way you centered your story on these two, I mentioned this before but the absence of other characters just worked for me. This was a nice ending! thank you for including the honeymoon! And thank you for only devoting a little bit of the chapter at Akash and his mom, ugh so over them

I personally feel the Arshi love will continue in this forum regardless of the show not airing anymore, this whole fan fiction fourm is mostly Arhi writers, and you can see from the likes and comments on numerous FF's that we are still obessed and will be! This will go down as one of the best shows ever!

You writers make me so happy! so don't stop! i will gladly read all your stories even if they go into a season 10 for goodness sakes!

I'm just excited for season two of MKM! Wooo

Keep doing what your doing!

- Kristin

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

That was indeed one of the best chapters
Just loved it, that was a great last chapter
Will miss this FF surely, I'm a die hard fan of only arshi stories so don't stop keep them coming
Thank u sooo much

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soumayamishra

@soumayamishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

loved the story...

this is one of the best story i have read on if...

will we get an epilogue????????????????????

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thulasi_arshi

@thulasi_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

thks 4 pm😊

at first i could not understand the actual meaning for''take care of''😕

later got with akash😳🤣

"Don't they say that when you start loving a person's shortcomings, then you are truly in love."well said..

written beautifully❤️

nice ending🤗

dont forget to pm MKM 2😊

i'm always here to read arshi stories❤️❤️

keep writing 👍🏼🥳

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Oh I can't believe this has already come to an end! =O

*sigh*

But that was a perfect ending! I am SO glad Khushi has finally found her happy ending with Arnav and Adit and Adya. If anybody deserves it, it's her.

This is probably very juvenile and childish of me but after reading about the fate that awaited Akash Roy, I felt like sticking out my tongue at him and saying 'Ha!'

This was a wonderful story and I look forward to Making Khushi Mine II.

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glimmernglitter

@glimmernglitter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

that was a perfect ending... and dont evcen think of stoppin writting... as there are many people just like me, who love to read your workss...

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

That was a blissful ending..

Loved how Arnav protects his family from media glare..At wedding reception, that conversation between the two journalists gave us the insight of being Arnav Singh raizada, the business tycoon and Kushi's Arnav. His ways has not changed by his marriage, but with Kushi he is soft, kind-hearted, understanding, concerned, and above all a man in love.

The disneyland scene make me chuckle...i could visualize and grumpy Arnav and 3 children singing rhymes and running around excitedly.

Adya and Adit are so understanding *chuckles* ..they know that their parents need quality time together ;)

But the part about Akash pained me..it was like seeing a ruthless ASR who punishes people around him if they dared to pain his family and loved ones..i hope ASR will not be this harsh to Akash...he will mellow down and get Akash off the hook..

Overall it was a feel good chapter and am looking forward to part II series..

thank you dear...

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bunnylovessunny

@bunnylovessunny

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Like some have already written, this IS the best chapter of the story :) (Although, I must admit that I'm sad that it's over, but like they say all good things must come to an end and this end could probably not get any better than what it already is :)

Arnav Singh Raizada is a dream, a very wonderful dream that makes you go all happy and excited and makes you feel so good about everything in the world. He has been my personal favourite in this story. I'll tell you why...

From being the 'I can't stand you for a minute' Rude Arnav to being the 'I can't stand without you for a minute' Loving Arnav, Arnav Singh Raizada has been revealed so beautifully to the readers that you can't help but fall more and more in love with him, just like HIS Khushi has, as the chapters went by. You showed us how a man can truly change for HIS woman. You showed us how a man, howsoever arrogant and ruthless and cold he claims to be, can melt like a puddle and expose his every vulnerable stance to HIS woman. Every little detail that you put in words to express how Arnav was feeling was magical! He became MY man although Khushi finally DID become HIS!

Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada stood out to be a strong, beautiful, smart and sensible woman right from the very beginning to the end. I always admired your Khushi. The only changes that I saw in her were how she came forth to learn to love her Arnav from making herself believe that he never existed in her life at all. How Khushi became Arnav's Khushi :) sighs...

I'm glad the Roy's are going to learn the hard way, but more about them later!

I love how you portrayed Arnav's power, it was jubilant and impeccable! And I'm glad Arnav always knew how to set his priorities right, he is a perfectly flawed man !!

The honeymoon, ofcourse was the BEST part of all! DISNEY LAND, my dream to see Arnav and Khushi have fun (Well Khushi did! More than Adit and Adya if I must add! :P) with their babies came true and A BIG THANK YOU FOR THAT! :D That was the most adorable part of the chapter :D And what to say about their love life, well DO NOT DISTURB!! :D :D :D

I sat back with a proud sigh as I finished reading the last few lines of the final chapter! It was picture perfect. Arnav and Khushi are eachother's in every damn aspect! I LOVE THAT!

That is the most adorable little family ever and a BIG thank you for making this last chapter a memorable one :D

Thank you Anony_mous for MAKING KHUSHI MINE :) it was one hell of an exciting, joyous, beautiful, amazing and emotional ride :) There are a very few stories that one can enjoy in the forum and MKM is one of my personal favourites.

Thank you again my dear for penning down this beauty!

ps: I really hope you could take some time and write down a few words in continuation and call it an epilogue, that would be just awesome.

I can't wait to read MKM 2, it's already got me hooked :D

I'll always cherish MKM whenever I read it after today :)