ArHi FF: Between two Strangers - Thread 2 - REMOVED - Page 63

Originally posted by: appy_indy-KD

oh no way dear... itna bhi ucha mat utha yaar... there are so many writer who write romantic stuffs brillently... but i cry when a romantic scene is really touchy... and sometimes i tend to get touchy in scenes when other people find it romantic... lol KC (who writes Fate-Mate) is aware of this... lol i cried buckets in one love making scene in her Its started with Rs 300... lol she said everyone found it sensual but only you found it emotional... probably for me true love always have losts of hidden emotions and you never know who a person reacts to it. in real life i am a very practical person, but i am extremely emotional which i hardly show it to the people around me. But today your writing made me cry... this can be a very romantic piece but i could feel the hidden emotions... this how i am... i totally get into each character and analyse if i were there in their place how i would have reacted :)

Hats off once again. You brought out Khushi's emotions too well... Arnav ki to baat hi kuch aur hai... Barun's eyes are more than enough to imagine and cry :)

Originally posted by: disnie

that was so amazing...

am glad that u didnt drag their fights much..i dont wish to continue it either...

i mean its enough of their verbal fights..they just hurting themselves

now they have to move on right?

hope this trip will solve each of their problems :)

i loved it :)

take care!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: fleurs

Awesome update & thanks for the PM 😊

Khushi worried for Arnav was well portrayed'..hmmm''so he's making use of every situation to be lovey-dovey'''..wipe off the cream with hands restricted'''so sad Khushi is smart 😆 😆 😆

Prefix of "Handsome" wouldnt hurt.

Haan woh tho banta hain, Handsome Sugarless Boy!

Loved Arnav's new name. ...just adorable wants to be called handsome 😉

Khushi, come back or else I am going to lick it off myself and remember its SUGAR. You will be guilty all your life, I swear!

Ooohhh! What a trick'...Enjoyed it so much

Arnav chiding himself for being so vulnerable that he felt he was losing his control & amazed when Khushi told him to step out of his thoughts as to how she read his mind, jealousy kicking in when the chef was praised was awesome... his reply was fab

I dont know. I am a Man and my hormones dont permit me to have any such feelings towards men! But yeah, if you ask me about the receptionist, she is pretty damn HOOOT... 😆

Arnav thinking of his promise to Mr.Gupta that he would bring back the old Khushi was nice'...but hope he remembers the main reason haunting Khushi & doesn't hurt her in any instance

Whats wrong with you? No one ever told me before that its wrong.

Awww...'Khushi is so innocent. Arnav warning her not to lick her ice cream & the lady in the elevator pointing out that Arnav was indeed right was lovely

Arnav opening up the trial room incident didn't seem right at the first place'..but good, things didn't turn up bad'...Arnav trying his luck to make her share her pain with him was thoughtful

Love to read more

After reading this chapter few times, I agree somewhat that the trial room conversation was not needed but if you think from past few chapters perspective, thats one of the many things that bothered him and hurt him most. He could have conveniently shared intimate moments with her on that couch but he wasnt sure yet if she is going to slam it as mistake again in future. He needed that little confirmation or her approval to proceed further, to whatever happened next.

Also, its too early for him to discuss or demand her to share her pain, since she doesnt know that he knows most of her past.

Thanks dear for encouraging my work 😛

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Awee you were bang on my thoughts baby. When I write scene about Arnav, I imagine his eyes and the way he expresses through them each and everything his heart says. I find it difficult to work with Khushi character because she is all about words...

I have read many steamy sequences by other writers. I did enjoy few but only for the first few times, later their choice of words or description became too predictable. But when I started reading your stufff...offf screamed hot and passion with intensity to the core. Give yourself little credit Appy. I havent read 300 rupess so I cant say anything about. Now you made me curious to read her work. I started reading her Fate Mate per your suggestion in a thread but I didnt had patience to wait for months for a update. Sorry no offense to the writer. I am just one impatient soul...LOL

Love you always, more today :)

Deep.