ArHi FF: Between two Strangers - Thread 2 - REMOVED

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

good that they are back together... nice update..

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#612

awww, so cute, like the way they play with each other, the whipping cream, her concern, his flirting, the ice cream, too cute...

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humi

@babyhumz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Thank you for liking my work! Welcome to my paradise!

Which chapter are you referring to? There are 2 chapters on plane, one is initial first chapter and the second is the most recent one to NY?

oh yh there are tow chapters on it 😆 which one do i like better... i cant pick 😆 i like both😉 but i guess the NY flight would win... it really was a maha update.. but what i love the most was that it was different. i don't think anyone has ever don't those things on a flight😆 in a FF

second flight wins!

you got amazing work!

and thank you for welcoming into your paradise it really is like one 😃

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Appy, I am now really worried about you dear. I dont know how you will react for whats coming after marriage. But I love to hear your emotional side...

I must say no one can beat you in writing romantic sequence...😳

oh no way dear... itna bhi ucha mat utha yaar... there are so many writer who write romantic stuffs brillently... but i cry when a romantic scene is really touchy... and sometimes i tend to get touchy in scenes when other people find it romantic... lol KC (who writes Fate-Mate) is aware of this... lol i cried buckets in one love making scene in her Its started with Rs 300... lol she said everyone found it sensual but only you found it emotional... probably for me true love always have losts of hidden emotions and you never know who a person reacts to it. in real life i am a very practical person, but i am extremely emotional which i hardly show it to the people around me. But today your writing made me cry... this can be a very romantic piece but i could feel the hidden emotions... this how i am... i totally get into each character and analyse if i were there in their place how i would have reacted :)

Hats off once again. You brought out Khushi's emotions too well... Arnav ki to baat hi kuch aur hai... Barun's eyes are more than enough to imagine and cry :)

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#615

Beautiful update ... I jst cherished each n every Arshi moment... It ws passionate, luvng n comforting chapter... Awesum... 👏

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#616

Aha!! finally done!

that was sucha relief i tellya !! :)

Thanks for the update!! :)

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Lavanya

@lav.0301

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

simply superb...welcome back arshi...😊

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dis_arshi

@dis_arshi

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#618

that was so amazing...

am glad that u didnt drag their fights much..i dont wish to continue it either...

i mean its enough of their verbal fights..they just hurting themselves

now they have to move on right?

hope this trip will solve each of their problems :)

i loved it :)

take care!!!!!!!!

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fleurs

@fleurs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#619

Awesome update & thanks for the PM 😊

Khushi worried for Arnav was well portrayed…..hmmm……so he's making use of every situation to be lovey-dovey………..wipe off the cream with hands restricted………so sad Khushi is smart 😆 😆 😆

Prefix of "Handsome" wouldnt hurt.

Haan woh tho banta hain, Handsome Sugarless Boy!

Loved Arnav's new name. ...just adorable wants to be called handsome 😉

Khushi, come back or else I am going to lick it off myself and remember its SUGAR. You will be guilty all your life, I swear!

Ooohhh! What a trick…...Enjoyed it so much

Arnav chiding himself for being so vulnerable that he felt he was losing his control & amazed when Khushi told him to step out of his thoughts as to how she read his mind, jealousy kicking in when the chef was praised was awesome... his reply was fab

I dont know. I am a Man and my hormones dont permit me to have any such feelings towards men! But yeah, if you ask me about the receptionist, she is pretty damn HOOOT... 😆

Arnav thinking of his promise to Mr.Gupta that he would bring back the old Khushi was nice…...but hope he remembers the main reason haunting Khushi & doesn't hurt her in any instance

Whats wrong with you? No one ever told me before that its wrong.

Awww...…Khushi is so innocent. Arnav warning her not to lick her ice cream & the lady in the elevator pointing out that Arnav was indeed right was lovely

Arnav opening up the trial room incident didn't seem right at the first place…..but good, things didn't turn up bad…...Arnav trying his luck to make her share her pain with him was thoughtful

Love to read more