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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shriya_taarey

loved ur concept dear pls continue
n ya do pm me
pls jaldi

stay blessed!

Thank you dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the concept s super cool... plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tani is a punjabi grl,it sounds gd...Wt?Rey atndg tani's mrg to mt hs parents?Damn intrstng.Update sn dr.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

Tani is a punjabi grl,it sounds gd...Wt?Rey atndg tani's mrg to mt hs parents?Damn intrstng.Update sn dr.

Thanks dear ... I will update it soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shanae_Diamonds

Wow... It's awesome!! I liked the concept very much!! And i eagerly wanting to know about the whole marriage that was in te Precap!! I have like a million questions!!! Is she gonna get married?? How will it stop!! Will she get hurt!! Or she runs away?? I'm so confused!! Plz plz plz update soon!! I know u said u'll update after ur other FF is finished… but i just can't wait!! Plz update soon!!! ❤️

Aapko aapke questions ke answers Bahut hi jalad mill jayeinge dear:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Soubd very intreating plz upload :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi my sweeties I m back after long unwanted vacations ;)... So want to start with a fresh story ... Here is the first chapter of my new Taarey story that is Teri Orre...

Chapter 1

Rey was at his apartment in Mumbai and he got a phone call from an unknown number ...

Rey- arre yeh kiska number hai ... He picked the call but the voice from the other side was very familiar.

Rey- hey dad aap ho... Lekin yeh tou Indian number hai... Iska matlab aap India mein ho... Kab aaye aap?

Rey's dad- Rey itne saare questions Ek sath ... Haan yeh Indian number hi hai or main Aur tumhari mom India mein hi hain kall raat hi pahunche hain...

Rey- what??? Aap kall raat se India mein ho or mujhe abhi bata rahe ho... This is not fair dad and mom ne Bhi mujhe nahi bataya ke aap log India aa rahe ho? Ok boliye konse hotel mein hain aap log main lene aata hoon...

Rey's dad- woh Kya hai ma beta time hi nahi mila tumko batane ka...and hum log Mumbai mein nahi Chandigarh mein hain...

Rey was surprised- Chandigarh mein!!!! Kion wahan kion ho aap... Ab yeh Kya baat hui dad ...?

Rey's dad- beta hum yahan pe Ek shadi attend karne aaye hain... Sirf 2 weeks ke liye hi hain yahan...

Rey- Shadi!!! Kiski????

Rey's dad- woh mera Bahut hi achha dost hai Baldev singh Shergill uski beti Taani ki Shadi hai... Balke humne hi Rishta karwaya hai... Ladka London se hi hai ...

Rey- oh theek hai... Lekin aap Shadi ke baad tou Mumbai aaoge na dad...

Rey's dad- nahi Rey woh possible nahi ho payega... Iss liye Maine tumko phone kiya hai tum yahan Chandigarh mein aa jao... Ek tou hum Bhi mill lenge and secondly tum yeh Shadi Bhi dekh loge... Bali Bhi tumse milna chahta hai... So tum kall hi aa jao...

Rey- ok dad main kall sham takk pahunch jaonga... Mom kaisi hain?

Rey's dad- she is fine... Shopping ko gayi hui hain... Nahi tou tumhari baat karva deta... Ok then son see u tomorrow ...

Rey- Ji dad... Bye and take care.

Rey's dad- bye beta...

Rey was so happy and he called to the travel agent to book his ticket and luckily he got a ticket next day in the afternoon. Then he makes a call to his best friend Swayam.

Swayam - hi Rey what's up dude?

Rey- hey Swayam I have a gud news...

Swayam - tou Kya sharon maan gayi... Mujhe pata tha ke tou usko mana lega... Wah yaar dost ho tou tere jaisa... Thank you Rey ... You r great meri jaan... Tu nahi jaanta tune aaj Kya kiya hai mere liye ... Tune meri love story ki gaadi ka pehla gear daal diya mere dost Ab tu na dekhna baaki ke gears main kaise daalta hoon... Love u mere yaar mere bhai...

Rey - oye Sharon ke Sharry ... Break lagao ... Kya tumko Sharon ke bina or kuchh soojhta hai!!! Kya yaar Swayam koi or news gud news nahi ho sakti Kya?

Swayam bit his tongue and closed his eyes - hey sorry-2 dear ... Ok bolo Kya gud news hai...

Rey- mom dad India mein hain...

Swayam - wow that's also a gud news yaar ... Kab aaye woh log ... Main aaj hi unse Milne ko aata hoon ...

Rey- nahi tu unse Milne nahi aa sakta...kionki...

But isse pehle ke Rey apni baat complete karta Swayam hairani se and udas ho ke- kion ... Tu naraz hai mujhse kionki Maine pehle Teri baat poori nahi suni or beech mein hi Sharon ki baat shuru ki thi... Tou uske liye main sorry Bol chuka hoon ... Tu mere sath aisa nahi jar sakta... Haan Bol deta hoon main tumko...

Rey was irritated now- hey Bhagwan Swayam tu kabhi Bhi poori baat sunta hai meri ... Hamesha hi meri har baat mein bolta hai or uske do-2 bure result hote hain... Ek tou main apni baat karte-2 bhool jaata hoon and doosra mere phone ka bill Bahut jiyada aata hai... Kionki tum baat ko itna kheench jaate ho... Jao mujhe tumse baat nahi karni...

Swayam- ok baba m sorry ...Ab yeh ladkion ke jaise baat karna band karo ... Or poori baat batao and I promise ke jab takk tum apni baat poori nahi karoge main beech mein nahi bolonga ... Paka promise yaar... A gentleman's promise...

Rey- oh really... Do you think that u r a gentleman?

Swayam - oye matlab Kya hai tera... Hoon main gentleman ok... Ab baat kaun kheench raha hai...

Rey- ok-2 tou suno... Mom dad dono Chandigarh aaye huye hain... Wahan unke kisi dost ki beti ki Shadi hai ... Or mujhe Bhi jaana hai... Maine kall ki ticket book karva Di hai ...

Swayam- matlab Aunty uncle Mumbai nahi aayeinge? Or tu kitne time ke liye ja raha hai?

Rey- nahi woh nahi aayeinge yahan... Or mujhe Bhi one week lag jayega...

Swayam- oh theek hai... Kitne vaje niklega tu?

Rey- hmm around 12 vaje ghar se niklonga 3 o'clock ki flight hai tu 11 vaje takk aa jaana ... Theek hai airport chhodne tu aayega na?

Swayam - ok theek hai pahunch jaonga boss... But don't u think one week jiyada nahi... I will miss u yaar...

Rey- oye best friend hoon main tera boyfriend nahi... Tu na apni Siren ko miss kiya karr ok... Chal Ab rakhta hoon mujhe dad ko call back karna hai... Kall milte hain... Bye.

Swayam - theek hai bye...

Rey dialed the same number from which he got the call few hours back. But the call picked up by a girl.

Girl- hello g kaun Bol raha hai g?

Rey was surprised- Ji main unka beta Bol raha hoon jinka yeh phone hai...

Girl- Ji!!!!!! Kya kaha aapne ... Aap uske bte hain jiska yeh phone hai... O g Lao g mera beta Bhi hai or mujhe hi pata nahi hai g ... Kab huye the g aap...

Rey- matlab ??kaun Bol rahi hain aap???

Girl very proudly- Mera naam Taani hai g Taani Shergil... Aap kaun Bol rahe ho g??

Rey- bond James bond Bol raha hoon main...and he laughed.

Taani- very funny g ... Aap mujhe ullu bana rahe ho g... Aap james bond kaise ho sakte ho?

Rey- kion? Kion nahi ho sakta?

Taani- kionki mujhe pata hai g James bond ko na Hindi bolni nahi aati hai g...

Rey smiled- very intelligent you r... Waise main Mr.Vikrant Singhania ka beta hoon main...

Taani - Kya!!!! Aap Rey ho g Vicky uncle g ke bte...Sachi mein... Kaise ho g aap... Aap ke baare mein uncle g se Bahut suna hai g...finally aapse baat ho hi gayi g... Haye uncle g keh rahe the ke aap Bhi meri Shadi mein aane waale ho g... Kya Sach mein aap aa rahe ho g,...

Taani was speaking continuously and Rey was thinking- hey Bhagwan ye ladki kitna bolti hai... Swayam ki behan hai bilkul ... Bechara woh ladka jiske saath iski Shadi hogi... Mar giya woh tou ... 24 hours isko jhelna padega...

But his thoughts breaks inbitween when Taani asked him- O g sun rahe ho Rey g aap...

Rey- aww haanji sun raha hoon g... Tou aap ho Taani jinki Shadi hone ja rahi hai... Congrats

Taani- thanks g...

Rey- Kya aap mere dad ko bula dengi Plz ...?

Taani- nahi g abhi nahi bula sakti hoon g kionki main na market mein hoon aapki na main ghar pahunch ke baat karva deti hoon g... Theek hai g?

Rey in the same tone like Taani- Ji theek hai g ... Ghar pahunch ke baat karva dena g... Taani g... Main wait karonga g... Tou main phone rakhon g???

Taani smiled- Ji theek hai g ... Waise Kya aap meri nakal utar rahe ho g?

Rey- na g na main aapki nakal nahi utar raha g... Woh Kya hai na g mujhe na aapka yeh style Bahut achha laga g ...

Taani- Sach mein g?? Thank you ... Main ghar pahunch ke aapki baat karvati hoon g.. Bye-2 g

Rey- bye-2 hai g Taani g...

Rey phone rakhne ke baad- God g Kya ladki hai yaar main uski leg pulling kar raha tha or woh mujhe thank you Bol rahi thi... Hmm Bahut hi innocent lagti hai ... Haan bolti thoda jiyada hai... Pata nahi kaisa hoga woh ladka jiske saath iski Shadi ho rahi hai... Iske jaisa hi ho tou achha hai... Warna pata nahi... Hey-2 Rey tu uske baare mein itna kion Soch raha hai ...? U ok man... Come on yaar packing Bhi karni hai tujhe... Chal-2 don't think too much...


So my dear friends I hope aap logon ko yeh pasand aayega g meri iss new story ka first chapter:)... Plz give ur feedback g:)

Precap- Taarey first meeting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the starting, awww it was too cute, reyams phone convo was cute, swayam kept on interrupting him loll

N taarey's phone call was tooo adorable!!!!! They haven't even met n soo much chemistry loll

Can't wait for the next part n their meeting,

I'm soo curious to know how this FF will proceed since taani is getting married, please cont soon

P.s. yayyy I'm the first to comment
Edited by miss_neha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start loved it cant wait tooo read more plz update soon :)
Edited by ajaved - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyce start...plz continue xoon
thanx fr the pm

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