ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T2 (CHP 6 -12) - Page 42

hey,,i am commenting on your story for the first time and i loved it till now..one thing i admire about all you stories is that khushi too is educated and independent and not a damsel in distress.hats off to you...and about this chapter, amazingly written as all your other works..mutton seekh kabas are my fave too and you made me hungry.. khushi is truly a surprise package in this one..too good👏👏

qwesum update lovrd it wat u did u send them to south mumbau to have seekh kabab i tnink thay had seekh at bade miya near get way lol than piont for tea haha m waiting for hubby to cum n take me but m gonna have ice candy too lol coz we stay just 15 min away frm there if we use bike soo m al set to have sum time with hubby n baby at queensnaklace

Great update! I'm glad we finally get to know who Sujoy is, but will he be making an appearance anytime soon?

Khushi's character is so strong yet so vulnerable. Too bad her dad has messed her up so much she can't learn to trust and love. The fact that she's opening up to Arnav is a good thing though!! You showed Arnav's thoughts after their evening, but what did Khushi think about it?? Hope that will be part of the next chapter!

Also you details of Marine Drive and Bombay make me miss the city and India in general. Great descriptions and the picture at the end was beautiful.

The mutton rolls reminded me of the good things in life. It's been ages ince I had it. Though I always read and comment on your blog I decided to visit the thread too. Love all your stories but this one has more thrill and drama. Loved your description of Bombay which people like me haven't visited.

awsome update dear...

wow. Both r in tough exterior bt crazy inside. D night out was beautifuly written. Sum1 is behind khushi. Waitng 4 nxt update

Loved the easy camaraderie between Khushi and Arnav. I hope their friendship develops a lot more before it turns into something more serious. Go as slow as you want as it's refreshing to read two people getting to know each other.

Wonderful update...liked the entire arnav and khushi interaction...they are knowing each other...last part seems interesting...

Awesome n loved Arshi together..

Waiting for them to get close...loved your pix of Marine Drive, reminds me of Home...thx yaar To good!