Smitar's OS:Knowing Khushi#2 Part 13 (Last) Pg 63 - Page 54

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Posted: 12 years ago
Such a sweet ending to a sweet story. Khushi was constantly chanting to herself like a mantra to be strong while meeting her Arnavji so she can take what she came for and disspear from his life even though she was hurting in a big time. Arnav asking whether she will miss him and insisting she should first answer his question before asking the same from him that was such a sweet moment.

And finally Arnav taking the initiative and asking her the big question and the answers Khushi gave in return,more like an insight in to what he is getting himself to was so damn adorable and by disclosing that she is an orphan she showed her honesty and looked for a negative reaction form Arnav but what he revealed made her forget everything and consoled him by offering a hug and promising she will never leave him. Everything was written exquisitely and Arnav's remedy for Khushi's increasing heart beats was so cute and Khushi's reaction for that was even more adorable!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just loved it !! Thanks . Khushi understands Arnav so well ( he compares him to the small 2 years old child !! )
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the last part...
hope u continue soon dear...
thnks for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Fantastic...

Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
rashmi dear...
loved all ur comment post for the each update...
all your comment shows the update frm new angle...
as much as i like to read smita di's SS/ff...i like all ur thorough comments on her work...keep it up...
thnks for PMss...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey really very nice part hats off to ur imagination.Arnav's confession is just awesome.Arshi's state of mind u write it very good i m appretiate.But somewhere disappointed bcz its a last part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i have become addicted to your stories...they are just awesome...loved this very much...waiting for the next os...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice story..but ended so soon 😔
anyways waiting for next story 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome.. Fabulous.. Superb.. mind boggling...

I love your writing so much that i get withdrawal symptoms every time the ending is near...

Beautifully ended though... Waiting for another fabulous story..

Please write soon and get me out of my misery...

Congratulations for another amazing story and hope to read you real soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome !!! read all the 13 parts in one go... it was very sweet OS... loved every part of it.. Arnav, Khushi and their sweet love story... loved it 😊


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