Smitar's OS:Knowing Khushi#2 Part 13 (Last) Pg 63

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

Smita,

You see 13 is not a good number 😆😆😆😆😆.

Its a fantastic story, atleast one epilogue is needed..

Plz give one epilogue to this beautiful story.

plz...dear. think about it. One Epilogue chahiye !!!!!!

Plzzz 😊

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

What a wonderful and beautiful part!!
Great job! The monologue of each of them while Khushi was walking towards Arnav were very well written!!
The ending was so sweet:-)

Brilliant OS!!!
I cannot wait for the next one!

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

That was a superb last part
Pls do continue with ur OS and SS, we desperately need ur daily doses of arhi stories
Thank u thank u so much for the lovely stories
Pls continue soon thanx again

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TeriKhamoshiyan

@TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

luved it!! omg..the ending was so sweet...luved khushi's personality throughout the os!! thanks for the pm and plz do continue to write more stories soon, if u do then plz pm ur future links..willl be wating !! plz do update soon!

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

awesome ss... seriously smita you are the best...

god I was missing your ff " keeping khushu" like hell... can you give me it's link.. I am not able to find it's link.. I real till 79 or 80 parts maybe... and am missing it very much

I love this ss.. very sweet and loving... just love this khushi... arnav is right she is child in a woman.. arnav is also very sweet

plz pm me the link of "keeping khushi" and smita's next ss. plz

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

loved it ...such an adorable and fantastic update ...keep on writing...

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@SuperstarSanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#517

End already.. 😲

I started reading just 2 days back.. I enjoyed it so much.. and now it's ended today itself.

I am going to miss this story.😔

But it was a wonderful & superb adorably cute end. how Khushi's face was devoid of smile when she entered his cabin & how she also noticed his gloomy face.

The conversation that followed.. 👏 truly amazing. This badnaam munni is Arnav's.. and he doesn't care of what world says.. 😃

loved how Khushi demanded to do all that Girlfriend and Baaifriend do😳 only if she knows what all they do.. 😉😆😆

You ended it on perfect note. Do PM the next OS. I would love to read it.😊