~FORBIDDEN DESIRE (UL II)~#5 Ch 11 Pg108 13/03 EXT - Page 58

awesome so painful and intense, arnav's feelings were portrayed so beautifully.

Very touching & emotional update.

i was expecting arnav to b possessive towards her,,, lol i evn imagined tht he might kidnapp her on the wedding day,, n they both getting eloped from d rest of the world,,

I loved the chapter with the cute childhood memories. Now it is Arnav's turn to take care of her as she used to do it for him. Great update as usual. I loved their dadi and even the Doctor, who liked it after seen him sitting next to her.

Please continue soon.😊

Appy Indy ...

Nooo!!! U can't get her to marry someone se other then Arnav...nahiiinnn!!!

Ok I am too hight from Sugar...'wonderful, fantastic awesome update... So love what dadi is doing and being supportive to them... And plotting things so that they end up with each other...

Ok yaar ... Keep up the good work. Chalo goood night... MuAaahhh

i jus startd to feel happy..

wowww...nice...

why arnav is letting her go

u made me cry di...! 😭
While i was reading d xtension part,tears started to
roll down my cheeks...
My heart is aching for arnav...his condition is
making me feel sumthing void in my lyf...may b i am
over reacting but trust me di i am litrally crying nd thinking dat if i can den i would have deffo make
him undrstnd dat his khushi needs him d most at
dis point of tym...his guilt is not letting his head
function practically...he is thinking dat now if he
xpresses his love to khushi her lyf will get
destroyed...little does he knw dat his walking away from khushi will make her shatter rather i should
say will make an end to her lyf coz her lyf nly mean
her Arnu to her...
The flashback is also awsum...i am totally in aww
after reading dat part...i mean how can a girl love
sumone so dam much dat she does not care how dat person is bhaving wit her...she loves him sooo
much dat she is alwaz ready to face his wrath...her
d character of khushi simply amazes me...truly LOVE
should b lyk dis...here khushi's unconditional love
finally make arnav realise that person whom he
hates is d same person witout whom his lyf is simply dark...the power of khushi's love is so
immense dat today arnav cums to dis conclusion
dat all d things in d world is totally lie nd d truth is
dat he loves her madly... Kudoos to u di 👍🏼
Hats off 👏 ⭐️
u r simply a fantastic writer who can evoke dat
much emotions in readers hearts dat they becum
emotionally attached to ur stories...same has
happened wit me di...ur writing,ur scene selction nd
description r simply way too addictive...
I am lucky dat i have got d oppurtunity to read such marvellous works...! 😊