Taarey SS: Finding yourself prt 4-- pg 18 - Page 8

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Part 3


At the institute, the kids were all playing in the common room and Taani was watching them with a smile on her face. Karan came up to her with a cup of coffee for her and one for himself.
K (handing Taani coffee): for you
T (smiles and takes it from him): thanks
K: you know I've never seen the kids gel so quickly with someone
T (smiling): they are amazing
K: yah they are, but you are too
Taani gives him a quizzical look
K: I mean, I saw you with them in class, how you handled them, that was so amazing. You didn't treat them like charity.
T: why would I do that
K: trust me a lot of people who come here don't really want to be here, they are just here to make themselves feel better about themselves. And the kids pick up on that
T: woh sab toh mujhe nahin pata, but i absolutely loved spending time with them and working here, bahot der ke baad khud ko itni achi feeling aarahi hai, bahot der ke baad lagta hai ke main kisi aur ke liye nahin but apne liye khush hoon. And charity, i don't think I'm doing a favour on them, i think they are doing a favour on me, bahaot der ke baad i felt like a little kid again (smiling even more) bahot der ke baad I'm feeling like me again, like Taani, complete, shayad maine apne aap ko kahin thoda sa kho diya tha, but aaj mujhe lag raha hai ke maine apne aap ko dhund liya.


While she is saying this, Karan is just lost in her, lost in her eyes, in her smile, in her innocence, in her words. He had never met anyone like her before. Taani looks over at him and sees him lost.
T (waving her hand in front of him): Karan
K (snapping out of it): huh, haan, sorry
T: kahaan kho gaye aap?
K: nahin kuch nahin, bas aise hi kuch soch raha tha
T: actually Karan mujhe aapse kuch zaroori puchna hai
K: haan bolo na
T: woh actually mujhe bhai ko batane ka mauka nahin mila ke main aaj raat ko yahaan ruk rahi hoon, aur yahaan pe network ki itni problem hai, is there a way i can contact him.
K: umm we have a landline in the reception, but uski line bhi kuch aisi hi hai, but try kar sakte hai
T: chalega, bhai bahot pareshaan ho rahe honge
K: theek hai chalo, main tumhe dikhata hon ke phone kahaan hai
Taani and Karan go to the administration area and there is a phone there and Taani quickly dials Swayam's mobile.
T (out loud praying): bhai pick up pleasee, pick up, hey krishnaji please bhai phone utha le
Karan is once again lost in Taani
Here Swayam and Rey are pacing in Swayam's house worried. When Swayam's phone rings, Rey runs to Swayam but they see a strange number, Swayam picks it up.
Sw: hello
T: hi bhai, thank you krishnaji
Sw: TAANI
Rey and Swayam both sigh in relief and Rey tells Swayam to put it on speaker and he does.
Sw: Taani tum kahaan ho, yahaan pe hum kitne pareshaan hai
T: bhai main yahaan ek school mein hoon
Sw (because of the bad connection he couldn't hear her properly): kahaan ho
T: bhai yahaan school mein, bhai yahaan network bilkul bhi nahin hai
Sw: Taani i can't hear you, network kahaan nahin hai
T: BHAI YAHAAN NETWORK NAHIN HAI
sw: par tum ho kahaan, aur ghar kab aarahi ho
T: bhai mujhe yahaan kaam hai, mujhe aaj raat yahaan hi rukna hai, main kal subah ghar aajaogi
Sw: kab aaogi?
T: KAL SUBAH BHAI, KAL SUBAH
sw: tum kal subah aaogi, lekin Taani tum ho kahaan aur theekh toh ho na
T: bhai main bilkul theekh hoon aap chi...
And the phone went dead.
Sw + R: hello, hello Taani
Sw: lagta hai cut gaya, thank god atleast woh theek hai
R: par woh hai kahaan
Sw: yeh toh kal subah hi pata chale ga.

The next morning when Taani reached home, she saw that the house was empty. She saw a piece of paper on the table with a message on it,
'Taani, I will see you in college, had to go early for rehearsals. Swayam'
Taani smiled reading the note, thinking for the first time her brother actually let her know where he is, she put the note back down on the table, then proceeded to get ready and leave for college.

At college, the gang was sitting in the canteen after rehearsals, and everyone was busy in conversation, however, Rey's eyes were glued to the entrance of the canteen. He hadn't seen Taani for the past 2 days now, the day before yesterday, he had cancelled their date, and yesterday she was busy somewhere. Also he was still worried about her, even though she had called, he had heard her voice, but he knew he wouldn't be completely satisfied regarding her safety till he saw her with his own eyes.
V: Rey, Rey, tu kahaan khoya hua hai
R: (still staring at the entrance) kahin nahin
Nil: toh tu baat sun kyun nahin raha hai dude
R: (still staring at the entrance) sun raha hoon main
Sw: Rey, uska kal phone aagaya tha nah, woh theek hai
R: (looks towards Swayam) yah dude, i know, but..
Only then Taani enters the canteen, Rey sees her and rushes towards her and hugs her tight. The gang all sees this and the boys do their CHEMISTRYYY sign.
Taani who was really surprised by Rey's reaction
T: umm Rey, aap theek toh hai nah
R: (letting her go, but holds her hand) haan main theek hoon
Rey and Taani walk towards their friends, hand in hand, and join them, they sit down but Rey keeps Taani's hand in his.
Sw: Taani tum thi kahaan kal, aur line bhi itni kharaab thi, kuch samaj mein nahin aaya
N: Yah, Taani where were you? We all pareshaan getting.

T: Woh actually guys, VP sir is setting up a collaboration with..

Bh (interrupting and standing up): Kya VP ne gaali di, uski toh

Gang: BHARATTT!!!
A: Abe, gaali nahin hai, bethja

T (smiles): Toh VP sir is setting up a collaboration with a charitable trust which runs a school for underprivileged and orphaned children, and he wanted to me to be the first volunteer to go there.

Sw: But Taani, you should have informed me before going.

T: Bhai, maine aapko phone kiya tha, aap sab ko kiya tha, bahot baar, but none of you picked up the phone.

The gang look a bit guilty.

R: Taani, actually woh team meeting chal..

T (interrupting): Rey, mane aapse reason nahin poocha, I understand aap log busy hai, its fine.

Before anyone says anything else, Taani's phone beeps and she reads the message.

T (smiles): VP sir ka message hai, I have to go and meet him in his cabin. Main aap sab se baad mein baat karti hoon. Bye.

Taani gets up and leaves to go to VP's cabin.

Aas: Guys, aapko Taani aaj kuch alag types nahin lag rahi

Sh: Haan guys, she seems much happier

Sw: and understanding

R: haan, maine uska phone nahin uthaya, us baat pe naraaz bhi nahin hui

Bh +A +V +Nil: Kuch toh garabar hai boss.

Here Taani is in VP's cabin

VP: So, Taani, how was your experience.

T: Sir, it was just amazing, sir thank you, thank you so much for giving me this opportunity,

VP: Seems like you liked it?

T: Sir, I absolutely loved it, those kids are so amazing sir, and they are just brilliant. They are so talented, loving, and so pure at heart. Sir the feeling that I got there, I've never felt like that before, it was just so fulfilling, and the children are so eager to learn, it is such a nice thing to see. Sir, I actually wanted to ask you, that could I please continue doing this, because I really want to continue volunteering there, it was one of the best experiences of my life, I actually felt like I'm doing something with my life. And I know it is early to say, but for quite a few days, I have been confused about what I want to do for a career, and after yesterday's experience, I think I now know.

VP: Wow Taani, I am so happy to see a person in your generation feel like this, and of course you can continue with it, it's your free time, you can do what you want in it. And I am very happy to hear, that you wish to continue with this.

T: Thank you sir.

VP: OK, Taani, I would also like for you to put up the details about this programme on the notice board, so whoever wants to also volunteer knows about it.

T: Fine Sir.

VP: OK, you may go, and congratulations for finding your passion.

T (thinks for a second) passion (and then smiles and says out loud) Thank you sir.

Over the next couple of days, Taani was so much happier; she had been regularly volunteering at the school, and now had become all the children's favourite teacher there. She had especially grown very fond of and close to Rahul and Shreya, and they had of her. The three of them had become the best of friends, people may find it weird, that she was friends with such little kids, but she enjoyed herself soo much when she was with them. She would head there after college every day, and would come home in the evening. Even the gang, Rey and Swayam could see how much happier and lighter Taani looked. However, they were all concerned as to what was making her so happy all of a sudden. The only thing which upset Taani was that the notice had been posted on the notice board for four days now, but no one in the whole college except for her came to volunteer, not even for an hour. She was really disappointed by this fact. One day the dance team were gathered in the rehearsal hall, talking about their financial budgets when Taani came in.

T: Hi guys, I'm glad I found you here, actually VP sir wants to know if you are still going to represent St.Louis in the upcoming inter college Dance Fest.

Sh: Yah, of course, why wouldn't we?

T: Actually VP sir, wasn't sure, since all of you are a professional group now.

R: That is there, but of course we will still represent our college.

T (smiles): That's great, that's what I thought too, I'll inform VP sir tomorrow morning.

Taani turns to leave, when Swayam calls from behind.

Sw: Taani, tum kahaan jaa rahi ho? Actually we had some work with you

T: With me?

Sh: Yah Taani, actually hume humare budgets mein kuch problem aarahi hai, and we all know you are really great with budgets, so we were wondering if you could help us.

T: Oh (stays quiet for a minute thinking) Umm, aapko kab help chaiye hai, kyunki abhi toh mujhe Karan ke saath jaana hai, umm actually woh trustees se kuch resources ke bare mein baat karni hai

R: Yeh karan kaun hai?

Sw: Aur kaun se trustees, college ke liye?

T: Are nahin, woh joh school mein main kaam kar rahi hoon nah, wahaan ke liye, toh main aaj toh nahin kar paungi, aap mujhe kal de dena, main college ke time pe karni ki koshish kar doongi

Taani's phone rings.

T: Oh, Karan aagaya, mujhe jaana hai, bye guys

Sw: Taani, lekin tum ghar..

T (while walking out of the door): Karan, mujhe chod dega bhai, bye

Gang: Bye

The gang looked confused and disappointed.

N: Taani, having no time to help us.

R (jealous): Aur yeh Karan kaun hai?

V: Par Taani toh hamesha humari help karne ke liye tayaar rehti hai na

R: Yeh Karan kaun hai?

Aas: Aur woh toh GS types hai, use humari help karni chahiye hai

Sw: Woh GS hai, aur yeh humaara personal kaam, this doesn't come under her responsibilities

R: Guys, Yeh Karan kaun hai?

Si: Actually, we never thought ke humare ilawa bhi Taani ki life hai

Sh: Exactly, woh sirf humari help karne ke liye hamesha free toh nahin ho sakti nah, she has other priorities in life.

R: GUYS, BUT YEH KARAN HAI KAUN?

All the gang look at Rey with slight amusement on their faces.

R: WHAT?

Sh: Rey, stop being jealous

R: I'm not jealous, woh koi anjaan ladke ke saath ghum rahi hai, I'm worried about her.

V +Nil (sarcastically): Yah Worried

R: Guys, I'm telling you, she has really been acting differently this past week. I even thought of a date for us, to make up for the last time I cancelled on her, but she was too busy. Usne aaj tak mere saath time spend karne ke liye mana nahin kiya hai. Aur ab yeh Karan?

Sw: Guys, woh sab toh mujhe nahin pata, but yah even I've noticed Taani bahot alag behave kar rahi hai, pehle jin baton pe mujhse gussa hoti thi, daant ti thi, jaise main jab main late aata hoon, inform nahin karta ke kahaan hoon etc, lekin ab toh un baton pe react tak nahin karti.

R: Aur Taani ke life mein toh hamesha se hum hi priority rahe hai, ab achanak se uski life mein kuch aur important ho gaya hai

Sw: Pata nahin guys, all of a sudden use kya ho gaya hai

Nil: Toh pata karte hain na guys

Gang: KYA?

Nil: Haan pata karte hai, tomorrow, let's all go to the school she is volunteering at

Ri: But hum wahaan kaise jaa sakte hai

A: Guys, maine notice boald pe pala tha, ke koi bhi wahaan volunteel kal sakta hai (Guys, maine notice board pe para tha, ke koi bhi wahaan volunteer kar sakta hai)

R: Ok guys, toh kal hum sab bhi woh school mein jaayenge, right?

Gang: RIGHT!!

Edited by miss_neha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww loved it dear really an awesome update😊...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was amazing!!
And i culdnt stop laughing at... 'yeh karan kaun hai?'
lolzzz
please continue soon!! I m loving this bubbly taani!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice karan is falling for taani
nice n i luv tht taani is happy with her
work awsm n i luv taarey hug n thn
now gang will go to see y taani is soo happy nice
n i luv rey get jealous n dis dia..hehehehehhe
.R: GUYS, BUT YEH KARAN HAI KAUN?
hhehee awsm thanks for PM n do put nxt prt
soon n yeah do PM me again kkk
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hahah neha this was too gud especially
rey's dialogue ye karan kon hai 😆 luving
this jelous rey ...awsm updates ...update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wah luvd it neha..superb update..cntnu soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
it was a nice update...
waiting 4 next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Neha this is mind blowing Taani is so happy and content and she found her passion yahh. Karen is a sweetheart aww he falling for Taani hmm. Jealous Rey lol all he think about who is Karen Am loving this. And the gang hmm now that they need Taani for something they all know her what a shame. Im glad that Taani didn't leave her work to help them. I love this SS much, Neha u doing an extra ordinary job plz continue soon.
PS I think u should forward this SS to cvs on how to develop Taani as an individual
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my god it was amazing di and i am really loving jealous rey ...pls continue soon and pm me

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