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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: masam




Don't want to spoil the mood but Your Highness is not happy about a dirty OS.

So if you still want, I could post a milder, casual version.


Beggars no choosers M - whatever crumb you throw my way, I will happily and greedily grab it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

I am convinced Masam does not love me, she finished STB and did not care to share a cuppa with me even, I am heart broken and sipping this cup alone (her cup sits in front of me)





The whole MUG was for you and others. Sachi main!
And I love this cuppa.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vgedin


Beggars no choosers M - whatever crumb you throw my way, I will happily and greedily grab it :)



😆
Just give me this weekend then.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vgedin


Beggars no choosers M - whatever crumb you throw my way, I will happily and greedily grab it :)


many of us beggars are waiting for those crumbs...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Masam, Masam, Masam...

I am finally here with my comment for Spilling The Beans.

I am sorry for being this late. But I know dearest M will forgive me. It is hard to escape my charm 😳

Now to the story.

I had been getting regular updates for this story since you started. But I never got around to reading it. The reason is prejudice. Prejudice against reading anything that is not Arnav and Khushi. When I stopped reading If Only, I still wanted to read your work. So, I turned my attention to STB... and at a time when you were just about to end it.

And I want to kick myself for reading this so late.

There is something different about reading STB and reading other ArHi FFs. Coz while you read it you know that this actually happened. That there is a panty boy Arnav somewhere who has a strange sense of humor. That there is a bas***d Khushi somewhere with a sharp tongue. That it is actually possible to meet your future mother-in-law for the first time while you step out of her daughter's bedroom while that said daughter is wearing your shirt. Main hoti to sharam ke maare mar jaati. ☺️

But this was just the start. I won't even call this a roller coaster ride. Coz even roller coasters follow a set route, though it turns you upside down. Reading about your Arnav and Khushi is like being in a jar with coffee beans and getting crushed with them- your story is so eventful. But who wouldn't want to be in a jar with coffee?

I really adored Aman- Arnav relationship. He would call Aman his bitch all the time, would turn to him when he would want someone to just listen to his problems, all all the teeny tiny things in between 😎. Aditi Arnav's relationship is uber cute. Apart from his mom, he gives the most respect to Aditi. They get along so well and make Aman jealous all the time. That was fun to read. 😃

Your Arnav is a pura ka pura Mamma's boy 😛. Bas! But Mamma is good too. She is mature and knows how to handle Arnav and doesnt judge Khushi. 👍🏼

I actually liked Anjali a lot. She was 50% pagalpan and 50% Sayani Di. 😃 Tumhara Shyam toh lost soul hain. Bas! 😆

I really liked it when Aakash rudely pushed out Amar away (He deserves a lot more than that though). That was really considerate and perceptive of him. And Payal lets Khushi be most of the times, letting her decide what is best for her. ⭐️

Garima is an ideal mother and Shashi is an over-protective father. May God help your Arnav. 😕

Your Khushi was such a clumsy, confused soul. No wonder she stumbled into his arms. The rest as they say is history, but in this case it was chemistry and a little biology too. Both your Arnav and Khushi are crazy, meant to be for each other types, inspite of all their differences, perspectives on life, a cheat of a fiance, and a clingy acquaintance. 👏

The scene in the bathroom in the traditional day party where he pulls at her saree was so ArHisque... I could hear rabba ve in the background... 😳

And you showed the gradual change in their relationship, the ups and downs, their connect, their focus for each other, the way they come to accept each other as THE ONE for them, and all that beautifully and comically. 😆

But the two scenes that had my jaw dropping to the floor and me blushing red as a tomato were when he tore her panty and pocketed it and when in his house he hooks his hands into her bra. ☺️ Both in the middle of the freaking day! 😲

But your Khushi is no less. At least after marriage. She changes work place to keep the spark between them alive, she initiates sex in a boring party and etc...

My favourite dialogue from the entire story was the "bitch, witch and the little stitch" one ⭐️

Aww they will have a baby... Do let us know about their little bundle of joy 🥳. Please congratulate them on my behalf.

PS: Commenting as you read and just commenting once are two different things. I know I have not done justice to this story at all. But maaf karna 😊

PPS: Such stories are meant to strengthen your belief in true love 😊

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Masam, Masam, Masam...

I am finally here with my comment for Spilling The Beans.

I am sorry for being this late. But I know dearest M will forgive me. It is hard to escape my charm 😳

Now to the story.

I had been getting regular updates for this story since you started. But I never got around to reading it. The reason is prejudice. Prejudice against reading anything that is not Arnav and Khushi. When I stopped reading If Only, I still wanted to read your work. So, I turned my attention to STB... and at a time when you were just about to end it.

And I want to kick myself for reading this so late.

There is something different about reading STB and reading other ArHi FFs. Coz while you read it you know that this actually happened. That there is a panty boy Arnav somewhere who has a strange sense of humor. That there is a bas***d Khushi somewhere with a sharp tongue. That it is actually possible to meet your future mother-in-law for the first time while you step out of her daughter's bedroom while that said daughter is wearing your shirt. Main hoti to sharam ke maare mar jaati. ☺️

But this was just the start. I won't even call this a roller coaster ride. Coz even roller coasters follow a set route, though it turns you upside down. Reading about your Arnav and Khushi is like being in a jar with coffee beans and getting crushed with them- your story is so eventful. But who wouldn't want to be in a jar with coffee?

I really adored Aman- Arnav relationship. He would call Aman his bitch all the time, would turn to him when he would want someone to just listen to his problems, all all the teeny tiny things in between 😎. Aditi Arnav's relationship is uber cute. Apart from his mom, he gives the most respect to Aditi. They get along so well and make Aman jealous all the time. That was fun to read. 😃

Your Arnav is a pura ka pura Mamma's boy 😛. Bas! But Mamma is good too. She is mature and knows how to handle Arnav and doesnt judge Khushi. 👍🏼

I actually liked Anjali a lot. She was 50% pagalpan and 50% Sayani Di. 😃 Tumhara Shyam toh lost soul hain. Bas! 😆

I really liked it when Aakash rudely pushed out Amar away (He deserves a lot more than that though). That was really considerate and perceptive of him. And Payal lets Khushi be most of the times, letting her decide what is best for her. ⭐️

Garima is an ideal mother and Shashi is an over-protective father. May God help your Arnav. 😕

Your Khushi was such a clumsy, confused soul. No wonder she stumbled into his arms. The rest as they say is history, but in this case it was chemistry and a little biology too. Both your Arnav and Khushi are crazy, meant to be for each other types, inspite of all their differences, perspectives on life, a cheat of a fiance, and a clingy acquaintance. 👏

The scene in the bathroom in the traditional day party where he pulls at her saree was so ArHisque... I could hear rabba ve in the background... 😳

And you showed the gradual change in their relationship, the ups and downs, their connect, their focus for each other, the way they come to accept each other as THE ONE for them, and all that beautifully and comically. 😆

But the two scenes that had my jaw dropping to the floor and me blushing red as a tomato were when he tore her panty and pocketed it and when in his house he hooks his hands into her bra. ☺️ Both in the middle of the freaking day! 😲

But your Khushi is no less. At least after marriage. She changes work place to keep the spark between them alive, she initiates sex in a boring party and etc...

My favourite dialogue from the entire story was the "bitch, witch and the little stitch" one ⭐️

Aww they will have a baby... Do let us know about their little bundle of joy 🥳. Please congratulate them on my behalf.

PS: Commenting as you read and just commenting once are two different things. I know I have not done justice to this story at all. But maaf karna 😊

PPS: Such stories are meant to strengthen your belief in true love 😊




You are definitely forgiven. And I loved your ramble 🤗

Thank you!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nnhk


many of us beggars are waiting for those crumbs...😃


H.. How did I miss this? stands in queue.
Waiting ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Allah ke naam pe de de masam ,
wo jo stb ki OS baaki hai..


After so many months , my weekends are without STB dose.. Suffering from strong withdrawal symptoms..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shree10

Allah ke naam pe de de masam ,
wo jo stb ki OS baaki hai..


After so many months , my weekends are without STB dose.. Suffering from strong withdrawal symptoms..


Shree ek gana tu ho jaye Masam key OS ki khatir...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I miss the story soo muchh

loved ur new OS : US

it had a connection to this story =D

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