Virman FF: love triangle ❤️ part 4 updated - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update aenna:) 👏👏👏
looking forward to next part...as precap seems very interesting...😉😳
thnx 4 pm dear:):):)🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi... update was awesome. Virman convo was nice. Sorry for late reply. A bit Busy. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyyy guysss first of all i wish u all a vry happy holi...
nd now it a tym for update so here u go...


PART - 4

RECAP- viren comes closure to manvi nd wispers near her ears
Viren- manvi i...
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Viren pulled manvi by her waist nd wispers near her ears

Vi- manvi i...

M- ( still closing her eyes ) u wat viren..

Vi- manvi i want to say dat..

M- yes viren m listening ( breathing heavily ) bolo

Vi: manvi i want to say that we r getting late lets go ( he says nd move away )

M: ( open her eyes suddenly ) what !!!

Vi: what happened baby? ( smirking )

m: nthg umm... i.. i thought u were..( stammers)

Vi: yes yes u thought i was what?? ( raising his eyebrows)

M: ( feeling embarresed) umm nthg lets go..( starting walking )

before manvi could go further viren cought her hand nd pulls her towards him. now manvi's back was touching his chest. viren places his hands on her stomach nd hugs her from back.

Manvi gets surprised by his sudden action. she hardly speaks

M: vi..viren what r u doing lets go we r getting late...

Vi: ( places his head on her shoulder ) dont u wana no dat what i was telling u before ??

M: no lets go..( try to come out his grip)

Vi: ( holds her more tighty) no first listen to me

viren comes near her ears nd wispers

Vi: manvi i wanted to say dat today u r looking gorgeus just like a angel... plzzz dont do dis to me

M: ( turns towards him ) what hv i done

Vi: u only hv done everything baby..

M: me what r u saying ??

Vi: m saying dat if u look dat much beautiful den i will not able to resist ur charm..hayeee yr mai to mar hi jaunga...or fir agar tumhari baat sach ho gai toh??

M: kon si baat???

Vi: yahi ki tum hum. hum tum... or mjhe tumse pyaa ( was interupted by manvi )

M: bas bas aage mat bolo aesa kuch nai hoga na mjhe na tumhe...ab chale

Vi: yup after u mam...

M: haha.. u r such a cartoon...now lets go..

viren & manvi both drive towards d party hall...

Scene shift

here khushi was in her home ready in her black jeans nd a read cute top...she was waiting for virat from half an hour but he not even recieving her calls. khushi was mad at him and was continusly calling him..

K: oh god kaha reh gaya ye LD mai ise chodungi nai hadh hai kum se kum phn to uthana chahiye

khushi was murmuring to herself wen suddenly she smells sumthing vry gud

K: ye kis cheez ki khusboo hai. i think its jalebi. omggg kaha hai

she turns nd found virat was holding a box of jalebis nd giggling seeing her mad by dis khushi gets more angry

K: haslo tume kuch or thodi aata hai i mean seriously virat m waiting for u from half an hour nd u were not even attending my phn call. itne busy the ki mera phn tak nai uthya gaya ( speaks angrily )

V: sry yr jalebi i was busy in d office nd den i got stuck in traffic or ye mumbai ka traffic i tell u ...

K: oh plz now stop giving me excuzes...

V: ok now stop it if u will not talk with me properly den forget about dis jalebis

K: ok ok wese bhi i dont want it

V: woh to dikh raha hai . jaise tum meri jalebi ko dekh rai ho mjhe nai lagta ye 5 min bhi or tikegi...

K: ok ok jao maaf kiya sirf is jalebi ki waja se ( while eating )

V: now lets go come... ( dragging her towards his car ).

they both also drove away for d party..in d car khushi was blabbering contnusly nd dey both were teasing each other wen suddenly khushi says..

K: omgg virat i cant wait for manvis reaction after seeing u..

V: hmm..( says nthg )

khushi noticed his expression... nd thinks to stop d topic here

In party hall as viren nd manvi enters. and every1 over dere starts glaring them. all d boys were not even moving dere eyes from manvi. nd after seeing d boys viren places his hands on manvis waist nd give a deadly glare to all d guys in d party. manvi saw dis nd starts laughingg...

what happened miss manvi chaudary y r u laughing.- viren said.

M: i m laughing over my possessive boyfrend...i mean seriously viren u r getting jealous ??? ( smirking )

Vi: what me or jealous hv u lost it u no na dat its just dat i dont lyk any guy drool over a girl who is wid me..

M: oh dat mean u r possessive for every girl woow interestinggg

ok ok now stop it lets hv a drink - viren said

they both walk towards d bar nd viren order a vodka shot for him nd a soft drink for manvi as manvi cant handle alcohol. but manvi even doesnt lyk any1 drinking so after knowing dat viren ordered a shot for him she pounce on him

M: viren wat d hell is dis? how many times i hv to tell u dat plzz dont drink infront of me without my permission.

Vi: manvi yar m just taking 1 shot promise i will not drink more. nd why i always hv to take ur permission for drinking??

M: becoz m saying i will only allow u drinking wen i will be drinking not in every party.

Vi: oh plzzz manvi u no what especially on dat day wen you drink i hv to be in my senses becoz i think u no dat u cant handle it nd u no wat u do after u r drunk...

M: oh hello aesa kuch bhi nai hai . i dont do anything.

Vi: oh reallyly den i think it was not u on priti's party who started acting lyk basanti nd gabbar remember???

M: omg viren it happened only once. you r behaving as if i always do dis..

Vi: yes baby u always do dis... i no u will not remember dat now but next tym wen dis will happen na i will definately record it..

M: Fine do what ever uu want !!!! m going.

V: acha manvi m sry yar i was just kidding pakka ab nai bolunga . ja kaha rai ho

M: kahi nai i was just going to stant in dat corner here d music is too loud..

Vi: ohkk lets go den..

viren nd manvi both go nd stands in d corner of d party nd starts talking nd teasing each orther. nd here both virat nd khushi enters d party. virat was amazed to see all his old frendz dere nd specially rohan. dey both come towards rohan nd virat hugs him

V: omgg rohan m meeting u after 2 years i mean u r still d same buddy..

R: hey u too hv also not changed a bit. nd thanx to khushi who bring u here .

V: ok ok thanqq u jalebi for insisting me to come here.

K: virat my name is khushi u will not tell me jalebi infront of all nd if u do den i will also call u LD nd dat too with fullform.

V: plzz khushi promise ab nai bolunga..

R: yr wese LD ki fulform hai kya??? i hv listened dis so many times aaj bata hi de

K: haan haan mai batati hu. LD is

V: khushi stop or i will ( cut by khushi

K: ok ok i will not say rohan actually even i cant say d fullfom of it wo to sirf ise ek insaan bula sakta hai or wo hai..( interupted by virat )

V: khushi plzzz

R: ok mat batao dono now go nd enjoy d party

virat and khushi move towards d bar nd were having soft drink wen khushi says

K: virat lets go nd meet others...

V: khushi plzzz lets stay here na.

K: virat plzzz lets go na bhul jao sab kuch now lets go. u said u moved on den prove it..

V: kk lets go..

both khushi and virat move around party..

Scene shift

viren was now flirting with manvi. nd was teasing her.

Vi: manu kya kr rai ho kitna khaogi?? ( manu wat r u doing? how much will u eat )

viren stop calling me manu or else i will kill u - manvi said irritatedly

Vi: acha acha nai bulata tum to meri jhasi ki rani ho meri sherni...

M: ( starts laughing ) tum mjhe hmesha un names se kyu bulate ho jinse mjhe...( suddenly stops )

Vi: jinse tume kon . kon bulata tha

manvi starts looking here nd there nd change d topic

M: koi..koi nai wese tum aaj kal kuch jyada flirting nai kr rahe

Vi: ab tume meri flirting se bhi problem hai huh???

M: nai maine aesa kab kaha wo to mai...

manvi stops as viren was coming closure to her.

Vi: oh to tume koi problem nai hai meri flirting hai huh?? ( coming towards her )

viren pulled mnavi by her waist . nd now dey were just inches away from each other. viren was just going to kiss her wen manvi turns her face nd by dis viren kisses her cheeks . manvi starts laughing

M: hahahah...

vi: manvi mai nai chodunga tume

M: pehle pakdo to sahi..hahah..

manvi was just going to run wen viren hold her wrist nd pulled her towards him nd pinned her to d nearest wall

Vi: i think tum kuch keh rahi hai?? ( i think u were saying sumthing )

M: viren leave me. wat r u doing?? koi dekh lega plz chodo .

but viren was viren he started coming close to her nd manvi starts breathing heavily nd closes her eyes
nd wen she coses her eyes she saw a pair of two hazel brown eyes looking at her. she smiles nd viren thought she is ready so was just going to kiss her.

nd here khushi take virat wid him nd den she saw viren nd manvi she takes virat wid her to viren nd manvi. wen she saw viren was going to kiss her she stops nd look at virat
virat confusingly looks at her nd ask her what happened by his eyes but khushi says nthg nd look straight virat also sees in khushi direction nd was shocked to see manvi wid viren

nd dere viren places his lips on hers nd kissed her then suddenly manvi opens her eyes nd was shocked to see viren kissing her she just push im wid a jerk..

Vi: manvi wat happened??

M: viren how dare u i told u dat dont touch me without my permission den why did u...

Vi: manvi u only closed ur eyes nd i thought u said yes so i..m sry

M: umm its ok m sry i just

Vi: its ok

here virat was shocked lyk hell nd here khushi wSas happy but looked at virat nd got confused to see virat shocked she wave her hand in front of virat nd brought him back from his thoughts.

K: virat kya hua lets go nd meet manvi

Before virat could say anything khushi dragged him towards manvi nd viren

K: manviii

M: oye jalebi tu aaa ( she stops wen she sees virat )

khushi saw dat nd tells viren dat rohan is calling him . viren moves towards rohan nd here khushi breaks d silence

K: manvi ye kya ho raha tha yaha ( slightly hits her shoulder with her )

M: kya??

K: wahi u nd viren ki..

M: woh..wo..nthg...( says while looking at virat)

khushi follow her gaze nd speaks

K: are manvi virat tum dono itne tym baad mile ho nd abhi no hi helo kya hua

virman together - hi , helo.

Khushi starts laughinggg nd virman also joins her but suddenly stops after looking at each other .

K: manvi virat tum dono baate karo mai aai

Virman - are ruk...

but khushi leaves from dere leaving virman alone . dey both were looking here nd dere.. feeling uncomfortable..but den virat breaks d silence..

V: manvi how r u

M: ( suddenly looks at him ) m fi9 nd

V: me too. wese kafi badal gai ho tum.

M: huh??? kyu kya hua ??

V: nthg bas aaj kal ki sherniya badi hot dresses pehne lagi hai to m shocked

M: what tumne mjhe sherni bulaya u pervert tum to bilkul badal gaye ho bilkul bander dikhte ho..

V:oh shut up manvi bas karo wese hum fir se frends ban sakte hai.kya ??

M: huh???

V: han manvi mai sab kuch bhulana chahta hu plz lets starts fresh

M: ( smiles ) sure frendz..

dey were talking wen suddenly viren enters.. nd places his hand on manvis waist . both virman feels uncomfortable...

end of part 4
to be continued...

PRECAP - virat : I luv u manvi...

wi wish a vry happy birthday to kushal...

- luv aenna.. 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayy im first!!!!
wow wonderful update!!!!😃
viren is so naughty😳 i thnk he luvs manvi already...
nd manvi too...
i loved khushi nd virat's fights.. dey're cute😆
wanna knw wats LD??😕
oh soo virat nd manvi knw each other frm before...hmm ur stry is becuming very interesting...😉
plzz plzz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm...
Edited by shruthi13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Aenna...Awesome update as usual...Does Viren hve ne feelings 4 Maanvi? I hope not..uske liye Jeevika hai na..par woh hai kahan?😛 Luvd Viraat n Khushi's frndship, Jalebi n LD..wat is LD ka full form..I think dat sum1 who calls him wid de full form of LD is Maanvi...I guess dey were in a relationship, or probably 1 of em had luv typa feeling 4 de other, but he/she broke his/hers heart...😆 sorry m juz predicting silly things...but it really seems lyk Maanvi has sumthin 4 Viraat, as she saw HIS(Viraat's eyes) as Viren was goin 2 kiss her...Issh, u really made them Kiss... poor Viraat, he actually saw them kissing..but thnk god Maanvi didn't kiss him back..😳😃😛..ok so dey were frnds but sumthin happened, I wonder wat..I won't guess, cuz u hve 2 update ASAP..😛...Haye da Precap...Viraat luvs Mannu,..Yay, ab hua na LOVE TRIANGLE...😆...Unless Viren has no feelings 4 her...which m sure he does..😭..😆Aweosme update Aenna...plz plz plz continue soon, n do pm me...Thnks a lot 4 dis awesome update n 4 da pm...continue soon..😊
Edited by Artii159 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update 😊
So virman already knw eachother and am guessing they have some past...

Frends again thts going to be fun 😊
LD ka fullform kya ho sakta hai ? 😛
Sumthing lambu i guess 😛

Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

nice update 😊
So virman already knw eachother and am guessing they have some past...

Frends again thts going to be fun 😊
LD ka fullform kya ho sakta hai ? 😛
Sumthing lambu i guess 😛

Update soon



Thanxxx and keep guessing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb updt...so virman know each other already...intresting...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow what an update interesting😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow super update plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon can't wait to read next part 😊

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