Virman FF: love triangle ❤️ part 4 updated - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
omg omg it was so damn gr8 and interesting 😛😉 😃

viren loves manvi like hell I guess, so sweet of him 😳

and what a precap? they will kiss??? 😲

and waiting for our virat's entry 😳

update soon ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
AWESOME👏
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Awww dear great n lovely story... sorry 4 being late... title suits the story in every way... loved the trio of them i-e maanvi khushi n viren.. viren is such a cutie pie he hadn't kissed or hugged any girl yet... i know he flirts but i think he is the one woman man types... i guess so😆😆... waooo he now loved her... but mere virat ki entry kab hogi😭😭.. mein tou abhi se un ka love triangle imagine kar rahi hun😆😆.. hahahhaha... as per ur precap virat's entry is in the next update... plz make it soon... hawww viren n maanvi will kiss eachother... n virat's entry waooo thats cool... plz dear continue ASAP...thanxx 4 the pm...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutiepie2244

<font color="#990099"><font size="5">Awww dear great n lovely story... sorry 4 be<font size="5">ing late... title suits the story in every w<font size="5">ay... loved the trio of the<font size="5">m i-e maanvi khushi n viren.. viren is such a cutie pie he hadn't kissed or hugged any girl yet... i know he flirts but i think he is the one wom<font size="5">an man types... i guess <font size="5">so😆😆... waooo he now loved her... but mere vi<font size="5">rat ki entr<font size="5">y kab hog<font size="5">i😭😭.. mein tou abhi se un ka love triangle imagine kar rahi hun😆😆.. hahahhaha... <font size="5">as per ur precap virat's entry is in the next update... plz make it soon... hawww viren n maanvi will kiss eachother... n virat's en<font size="5">try waooo thats cool<font size="5">... plz dea<font size="5">r continu<font size="5">e ASAP...thanxx 4 the pm...😊😊</font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font>



thanxxx alot nd i still dont no d reason of ur late comment
u didnt tell me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Aenna



thanxxx alot nd i still dont no d reason of ur late comment
u didnt tell me




Dear my di made 2 posts n she also pm'ed u... u didn't read that i think... if not i will tell u now that i was admitted in the hospital 4 many days... was seriously ill... but now m fine... plz read that post u will understand everything...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutiepie2244




<font color="#0066FF"><font size="5"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dear my di <font size="5">made 2 post<font size="5">s n she <font size="5">also pm'ed u... u didn't read t<font size="5">hat i<font size="5"> think... if not <font size="5">i<font size="5"> <font size="5">will te<font size="5">ll u now t<font size="5">hat <font size="5">i was ad<font size="5">mitted in the ho<font size="5">spital 4 many days... was seriously ill... but n<font size="5">ow m fine... plz read that post u will understand everything...</font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></
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i hv told u in ur previous reply to my story dil hai tumhara dat i hv not read any pms or anything in last 2 weeks so nd wen i came dere were so many pms so i just read d update from d replys . so may be dats y i didnt no but seriously m sry i didnt able to convey my msg dere in ur post but ya after listening to u dat u r fine m feeling gud hope u always be fit fine nd happy.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Nice update. Loved it. Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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m trying to update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preity_d

<font size="3">omg omg it was so damn gr8 and interesting 😛😉 😃

viren loves manvi like hell I guess, so sweet of him 😳

and what a precap? they will kiss??? 😲

and waiting for our virat's entry 😳

update soon ⭐️

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thanxxx alot preity...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hiii guyss without any bak bak here u all go with part 3

PART - 3

RECAP - khushi thinking how to realize manvi her luv for viren nd den she thinks to call her best frend..
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khushi- ( dialled a no. ) o god jaldi phn utha yr warna baad me mjhe hi sunaega...

and here d guy was sleeping peacefullyy in his room wen suddenly his phn started ringing.. first he ignores it
but then opening his eyes slowly he saw d caller id nd gets up wid a jerk

guy- hello ( speaks hurriedly)

K: hell..ooo... ( speaks lyk singing) uth gaye aap jahapanha... itna kasht dene ki kya jarurat thi khudko aaram se uthiye itni jaldi kya hai ??

guy - shut up jalebi... ek to late uthaya upar se itna bol rahi hai

K: hawww L.D tu mjhe suna raha hai i knew it khud late uthega or sara naam mere upar daal dega huh!!

guy - oh hello tune mjhe late uthaya upar se itna bak rahi hai pata nai kitna bolti hai

K: LD ab chup ho ja ye to tera hr baar ka hai ek to pehle phn na uthao uske baad mjhpr bil phado ab agr aese hi baat krega na to baad me mjhe hi blame karega ki maeri flight teri waja se miss ho gai.

guy- omgg meri flight jalebi kitna bolti hai tjhe to mai aakr dekhunga byeee

K: ok byee... ( cut d call nd shakes her head ) bilkul pagal hai

here d guy stands up from his bed nd walks towards d window nd streches his arms

guy - gud mrng london... aaj nai bahut khush hu m finally going back i mean i just cant wait to go india back, cant wait to go back in those beautiful memories ( smiles ) nd bitter also ( smile escape) but yes wo sab past tha or now i hv moved on not really but ya sumwhere nd now i m gona start my new lyf in a new collage wid new nd old frendz... i hope sab acha ho or hoga kyu nai aakhir VIRAT VADERA aa raha hai sab kuch to acha hona hi hai
( virats gets ready nd leave for d airport )

Scene Shift

here manvi was in her room thinking about viren wen suddenly her phn rings
she picks up d call nd said

M: hii mai bus tume hi yaad kr rai thi

Viren: haye meri jaan itna mat yaad karo ki mai hiccups se mar hi jau

M: shut up viren tum drama kare bina kuch kr nai sakte

vi: sry acha ye batao mjhe yaad kyu kr rai thi ( raised his eyebrow )

M: are wo mai party ke baare me soch rai thi ki agr hum party

vi: haan han bolo party cancel kr de to yahi kehna hai na
M: hmm pr its ok agr tume jaana hai toh i mean...
Vi: no its ok maine isliye tume call kiya tha ki agar tumhara mann na ho to koi baat nai hum nai jaenge
M: reallyyy thanqqq sooo much viren
Vi: are matlab mere sath na jaane se itni khush ho huh ??
M: nai aesi baat nai hai wo actually m feeling very low soo dats why ( cut by viren)
Vi: wat?? kya hua tume . tume theek ho na ??
M: Relax viren mai theek hu dont worry its just a minor headache
Vi: ok dats fine. acha suno aaj nai pr kal to chalogi na
M: kal pr kaha??
Vi: are wo rohan ne party aaj ki jaga kal rakh di hai dats y
M: ohooo... tabi mai kahu mjhpe itni meherbani kyu jarur kuch or hi baat hogi warna tum mere liye party cancel karo Impossible...

Vi: yr manvi aesa nai hai yr ab party cancel nai bhi hoti or tum mjhe kehti ki tume headache hai to
bhi mai yahi karta

M: yahi karte ( raising her eyebrows)
Vi: aaa.. wo..mai.. i mean haan party cancel nai pr tume medicine jarur de deta
M: what??? u r disgustinggg ( she cut d call in anger )
Vi: helo helo manvi are suno to... hahahaha..pagal hai bilkul mai to mazaak kr raha tha ..

Next Morning...

virat's plane lands in mumbai nd he checks out from d airport nd on his way to his car where his driver was waiting for him with his name board . he dialled khushis no.

K: helo
V: hii jalebi
K: hey virat hv u reached mumbai kaha pr hai mai lene aau ??
V: are nai yr dad to hai london me pr yaha humare ghr ke driver ko pehle hi bol diya tha mjhe lene ke liye mai abhi bahut thak gaya hu soch rahu hu thoda rest kr fir mjhe yaha dad ke office bhi jana hai unke business partner se milne or isliye socha tjhe col krlu mai tujhse raat ko milungi

K: ok u go nd rest see u in evening byee
V: kk byee...

At d collage

manvi enters d collage nd directly go towards her class wen in her way khushi bumps with her..

M: aahh kya kr rai hai jalebi hmesha teda meda chalti hai bilkul apne naam ki tarha
K: sry na maine dekha nai tha. wese kya baat hai aaj kafi tym baad tune mjhe jalebi bulaya aaj to pure din se sun rai hu

M: pure din kyu tjhe sirf mai jalebi bulati hu or koi thodi na.
K: bhul gai mjhe tu or..( cut by manvi )
M: umm... wo mjhe late ho raha class ke baad milti hu byee..
K: are ja kaha rai hai mai bhi class me hi aaungi..
M: ohkk to chal jaldi

they both enter in d class nd sat together
in between d class manvi said

M: oye tu kal aai kyu nai thi ghr maine kaha tha na ki mai party me 8 baje jaungi tu fir kyu nai aai??

K: are yr mjhe laga tujhe jana hoga to tu tayar wagera hogi dress choose kregi to tym to lagega na bus isliye socha tjhe thoda tym akela chod du

M: kya yr ek bar puch to leti wo actually part cancel ho kr aaj shift ho gai thi to mai bore ho gai upar se kal headache ho raha tha.

K: awww m sry yr agr teri tabiyat theek nai thi to col kr deti kher chod wese bhi mai arnav ke sath thi

M: ohh to ye hai main reason jalebi apne makkan kum dhakkan ke sath thi huh??
K: hmm wo arnav ko milna tha isliye
M: kk wese mai or viren aaj party me ja rahe hai to tu bhi kyu nai chalti ??
K: kon si rohan ki party
M: haan
K: nai yr waha couples allowed hai mai kaise ??
M: kya matlab tune sach me arnav se break up kr liye woow... ( excitedly )
K: oh shut up aesa sochna bhi mat wo actually aaj use kahi jana hai to isliye wo to hoga nai to mai kiske sath aaungi??

M: to tu kisi or ke sath aa ja
K: yr lekin are haan idea.. i will surely come now
M: kya hua kon mil gaya??
K: hai bus tu party me miliyo..
M: okk chal ab class khatam ho gai hai or 3 baj rahe hai upar se ye viren ki itni missed calls aai hai lagta hai party me jane ki baat ke liye hogi. chal bye 8 baje milte hai party me .byeee

K: ok byees ho ja shuru party ke liye...

manvi leaves nd khushi dial's virat no. nd there virat was in d office in his cabin nd den his phn rang

K: hey LD kya kr raha hai??
V: nai jalebi bus coffee pi raha hu bus abhi free hua hu
K: ok great to kab milna hai??
V: umm abhi to 3 baje hai 5 baje tak mile ??
K: nai i hv a better idea actually yr mjhe ek party me jana hai nd dere is couple entry to plz tu chal

V: wat?? plz dont tell me dat u r still single...
K: no m not but mere bf ko kahi jana hai to plz join me na plzz
V: ok ok i will wese bhi mumbai itne tym baat aaya or no party dats not fair so lets party
K: yes...chal tu mjhe 8 pick kr liyo
V: ohk be readyy byee

Scene shift

in manvis house as manvis parents live out of india so she live alone here

manvi was just readdy in her sexy red strapless dress which come upto her mid thighs. she was wearing her red heels nd her long earing matching to her dress nd a small pendent nd was holding her small read cluch. her hairs were open nd rolled from d bottom. she was looking smokingg "hot" . she just checked herself last tym in mirror wen her door bell rang . she shouts

M: Tarun door open kro
T: yes mam

tarun opens d door nd saw viren he let him go towards manvis room as he already know him.
viren enters manvis room..

Vi: manvi r u ready ( speaks directly after opening d door nd den his jaw dropped after seeing manvi) manvi tum..

M: han viren mai hi hu aese kya dekh rahe ho??
Vi: ummm.. wo nthg.. umm u look gorgeous...
M: oh thanxxx
Vi: chale ( coming towards her )
M: haan lekin darwaja udar hai to idhar kyu aa rahe ho??
Vi: ( coming close to her ) kyuki tume kuch kehna hai.
M: haan to bolo..( moving backward )
Vi: ( held her hand and pulled her by her waist ) itna dur kyu ja rai ho ( wispers in her ear)
M: umm...wo..mai..tum.. ( she stammers )
Vi: haan haan bolo kher pehle meri suno ( breathing near her earlob )
M: viren kya kr rahe ho???
Vi: nthg kuch kehna hai??
M: haan to kaho ??
Vi: ( wispering in her ears ) Keh du pakka??
M: ( closes her eyes ) hmm

Vi: Manvi I...

To be continued...


PRECAP -Virman meeting... nd virat saw viren manvi kissing...

😊 😊 😊 - Luv aenna

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