Virman FF: love triangle ❤️ part 4 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice yaar awesome pleasee continue soon...
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was fab aenna... i really loved it... the whole khushi manvi convo seemed so casual n realistic... really felt like two buddies are discussing something... i m loving the concept... viren is manvi's bf... that is great...!!! virat the third angle of the love triangle... thats gonna be fun... update soon n pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What!!! viren is manvi's bf????Hmm,another concept. girl u r really creative.I should b careful b4 writing ma story.
coz meri to pehli story hai😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey it is an interesting concept... plzzz continue soon nd do pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Virman : Love Triangle <3

hiii guysss m here with a new update i really hope u all r enjoyingg my storyy... sooo here i go i wont ... make u all wait more...

PART- 2

RECAP - manvi: oh so aapko meri yaad aa gai MR VIREN KAPOOR

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Vi: hey manvi u r talking as if u were missingg me ( smirking )
M: oh plzzz mai or tume not at all
vi: kk so why were u being jealouss of those girls
m: me or jealousss.. hv u gone mad u no dat both dont lyk each other den y i will be jealouss
vi: ya ryt wese khushi can u just go back nd sit on d another seat i wana sit here wid manvi
k: ya sure wese bhi arnav is here. u guys enjoy ( winking to manvi )
m: hey khushi ( cut by viren )
vi: kya hai manvi thodi der mjhse bhi baat krlo
m: aaj bad tym hai mere se baat krne ka baat kya hai

viren was just replying wen professor enters d class. viren stop talking den between class he wispers

V: manvi jo baat dil me ho kya wo bol deni chahiye ya nai ( wispering)
M: bol deni chahiye bolo kya bolna hai
vi: i wana kiss u now!!!
m: ( shouts ) what!!!

professor- wats going on manvi why did u shout
m: no nothing sir woh.. wo ( stammers )
vi- nothing sir i was just asking her ki KISS ( as he speaks manvi give a deadly glare )
i mean ki kiss chapter pr hain

professor - wat ?? m teaching here nd u even didnt no on wat r we studying
vi: no sir wo.
p: no stop it i saw u both were talking since d class started i ignored it but now its a limit just get out of d class!!
m: no sir we will not do dis again
p: no just get out
vi: manvi sorry bol do
m: no manvi chaudary kabhi kisi ko sry nai bolti
vi: haye isi ada pr to mai fida hu
m: chup ab chalo

they both move out of d class. nd viren take manvi to d garden of d collage nd dey both sat dere

m: kya hai ab seedhe seedhe bako kyuki tum aaj mjhe bada yaad kr rahe ho kya baat hai
vi: yr manvi tum agar itna sochogi na mere bare me to tume mjhse Pyar ho jaega!!
m: oh plzzz.. mai or pyar no waysss apna dhyaan rakho kahi tume na ho jaye mjhse pyar
vi: hahahah... pyar wo to hone se raha..
m: bolo ab kya baat krni hai
vi: i wana kiss u ( speaks in low voice )
m: kya bol rahe ho bhang pi hai kya . ya aaj tumhari titliyo ne kiss krne se mana kr diya
vi: dono me se kuch nai hua its just dat i wana kiss u isme kya galat hai bf hu tumhara or wese bhi we hadn't kiss from such a long tym
m: oh hello we just kissed day before yesterday remember
vi: i no dat was our first kiss can u believe it. in our full 3 months relationship we kissed only once
m: u no na viren y we r in relationship or wese bhi in my whole lyf i hadn't kissed any of my bf becoz i didnt lyk any1 kissing me except my to be love
vi: really den y u kissed me ( smirking) sach me mjhse pyar ho gaya.kya
m: oh shut up wo to isliye becoz i trust u kyuki tume bhi meri tarha pyar me koi interest nai hai pr baki ladko ki koi na koi expectation ban jati hai dats y
vi: ok ok ji ab meri baat suno
m: oh haan tum batao kaha jana hai jo mjhe makkan laga rahe ho
vi: mai koi makkan nai laga raha its just dat kal mere frend rohan ki parry hai to mai tume puchne aaya tha chalne ke liye tum aogi na
m: mjhe lag hi raha tha pr viren mai jaanti hu ki hmari relationship isliye hai taki hum luv ke chakkar se dur rahe or ek dusre ki help kre kahi jana ho ya parties bas we show every1 dat we r in relationship but trust me dis tym m not free or mai bas isliye tumhare sath 3 months se hu kyuki i want to concentrate on studies nd isliye tume bf banaya taki tum mjhe disturb nai karoge or apni un titliyo ke sath busy rahoge
vi: yr manvi plzzz yr rohan ne disc me party di hai or waha sirf couples allowed hai
m: to chale jao kisi or ke sath mai hi kyu
vi: manvi u no ki sabko pata hai ki hm relationship me hai to mai kyu apni super hot gf ko chod kr kisi or ke sath jau
m: oh plz viren m not in a mood of partying
vi: plzzz yr manvi dont be a spoil sport
m: kk i will come
vi: ( hugs her ) wooow dats great i will pick u tomorrow at 8 pm
m: kk

manvi stands for going wen viren held her hand nd stands toi

m: ab kya hai ??
vi: tum kuch bhool rahi ho... kiss
m: (pushes him ) shut up m going m getting late bye
vi: bye... (thinking - pata nai kyu manvi i wana kiss u hug u i dont no u no wat dat was my firrst with u yes i hv never kissed any1 except u i no ki tume lagta hai mai bahut bada flirt hu pr wo mai shayad sirf tume jealouss krane ke liye krta hu aajkal. pata nai kya ho gaya hai mjhe i no ye pyar nai ho sakta we both dont believe in luv pr pata nai kyu ye viren kapoor pehli bar sirf ek ladki ke bare me soch raha hai or wo ho tum ) kher chod viren aesa kuch nai hai

he moves to d canteen to his frendz nd here manvi was wid khushi in d class . dey were having free period so khushi was just blabbering nd manvi was lost in her thoughts

k: acha manvi tjhe pata hai aaj arnav ne mera haath pakda fir se
m: no response
k: manvi sun na mai kab se bol rai hu pr tu jawab hi nai de rai ( by dis manvis chain of thoughts broke )
m: oh han kya keh rai thi tu
k: wo mai keh rai thi ki viren loves u ( smirking )
m: wat ??? ( shocked)
k : are pagal mazaak kr rai hu hahaahahh apna chehra dekh hahah...
m: tu... aaj tu nai bachegii khushi ki bachii
k: are khushi ki bachi to tab hogi jab arnav mjhse shaadi karega ( while running )
m: wo to tu bhul ja ( chasing )
k: (stops in her track) hawww manvi aesa mat bol
m: jo sach hai wo sach hai
k: ( while sitting besides manvi on d bench) nai plzzz mai sirf arnav se shaadi. krungi
m: dekhte hai wese tu kya bol rai thi
k: mai haan wo pata hai aaj arnav ne fir se mera haath pakda
m: hey bhagwaan ye to aathwa ajuba ho gaya . arnav kya koi salmaan khan hai jo usne hath pakda to itna khush ho rai hai. pagal hai tu bilkul
k: tu to rehne de tjhe kya pata tune kabhi kisi ke sath romance thodi kiya hai
m: oh plzzz ye sab cheeze maine bahut ki hai remember is collage ka hr handsome lage mera 1 hafte ke liye bf reh chuka hai
k: manvi i no pr wo romance bhi koi romanvi hota hai jo feeling lekar na kiya ho jisme uske pass aane se teri dhankane tham jaye or ( cut by manvi )
m: han han or bol kaano me music bajne lage . jaise mom dad ne paida hote hi kaano me machine laga di ho jo ki hr romantic momemt pr gana bajane lage.
k: o ho manvi bas kr tjhe kabhi koi romantic moment me kuch alag sa feel nai hua kya
m: ( close her eyes ) nd see too hazel brown eyes ( suddenly opens her eyes
( thinking ) aaj achanak mjhe uska chehra kyu dikha i mean bas ek eye lock hi to tha usme kya romantic tha ufff mai kyu itna soch rai hu. wese wen i first kissed viren mjhe thodi different feeling to hui thi pr may be meri first kiss thi isliye omggg mai itna kyu soch rai hu inke bare me. manvi focus u hate luv true luv itni asaani se nai milta

manvis chain of thoughts were broken by khushi

k: oye manvi kaha kho gai kisko yaad kr rai thi
m: kisi ko nai chal ab class over ho gai hai
k: acha ji kuch to baat hai bata na kiske sath bitaye hue romantic scene yaad kr rai thi ??
m: khushi plzzz yr pareshan mat kr m getting late ( walking towards parking area)
k: acha acha nai krti bye kal milte hai tere ghr pr as tomorrow is weekend
m: han pr jaldi kyuki kal wo 8 baje tak mjhe viren ke sath jana hai
k: oye hoye kya baat hai dating shating hmmm
m: oh plzz yr party hai koi or kuch nai
k: kkk ji byeee
m: byeee

manvi drove her car back to her house nd here khushi thinking

k: yr ke manvi kab samjhegi ki ye viren se pyar krti hai mjhe hi kuch krna hoga are usse pehle i shud col my bst buddy yr warna to m gone...


to be continued...
end of part 2

PRECAP- viren kissed manvi nd virats entry...

plz dont kill me for precaps half part. but half part was gud also virat is cominggg
be happy nd enjoy...

- luv aenna 😊

leave ur big comments...nd make me happy now 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow dear... looved it:)👏👏👏👏
awww... viren is so sweet... he havent kissed or hugged anyone... he is so in love with her... looved it dear:)
here in this part.. i loved khushi too.. the way she got happy for just arnav holding her hand was so cute...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
now looking foward to see what khushi does to bring viren and manvi closer... and i think she somewhere succeed as ur precap tells it... they kissed... lovely yaar...😳
but still wanna see vrman together...😉
hope to see manvi falling for virat soon...😳
awesome update dear:)👏
thnx 4 pm dear:):):)🤗
Edited by shilpa09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update Aenna..luvd it..Viren is so cute..Luvd Maanvi n Khushi's convo, SALMAN HAYE....juz wondering, is dat guy who's hazel eyes Maanvi saw, was it Viraat's??? n I think dat khushi's best buddy is Viraat...mayb, will get 2 knw wen u'll update..😊Yey Precap Viraat's entry..but kiss...😕...neways luvd it..Plz continue soon,,,will b waiting..thnks 4 da pm..😊
Edited by Artii159 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love;y update. Can't wait for Virat's entry. plzzz plzzz plzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon.

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