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Chapter 1:


{I will call Kripa.. Tanya in this fan-fic until everyone learns that she is Kripa...}


You see 3 kids playing video games. Then you hear a sweet voice calling.


V- Bhim... Bali... Prateek.. tum theno abhi tak jage hain?


Then you see the kids quickly hide under their covers. Then you see a lady walk in. She is very beautiful. Then you see her face and it is none other than Kripa/Tanya. She looks and turns on the light. She smiles and goes by their beds.


T- Chalo utho... Nichi awo...


All three get up and stand infront of Tanya. Tanya holds all of their ears.


Bhim- Bh

Bali- B


T- Kya rahe the tum sub?

B- Aunty hum to kelrahe the..

T- Itne raat ko tum kya kelrahe the?
Bh- Hum video games kelrahe the...

T- Tum theno kabhi nahin sudrunge...

P (holds his ears)- Sorry mama.. Hume maaf kar do..


Tanya lets go of their ears and remembers Angad.


*Flashback*

(sorry I'm making this up)

Angad accediently comes home later than usual. He finds Kripa waiting for him by the window. He goes to her and hugs her.


K (not looking at Kripa)- Jow... Mujhe tumse baat nahin karne hai..

A (makes her look at him and holds his ears)- Sorry Kripa... Mujhe maaf kar do..

*End of Flashback*


B+Bh- Aunty..


Tanya snaps out of her thoughts. She hugs them all.


T- Maaf kar diya.. Ab soo jow..


All three of them go to bed and Tanya kisses all of their foreheads. She smiles at them and turns off the lights and goes to her room. In her room she thinks about how Prateek is starting to act like Angad.


T- Ab to Prateek bi muhje tumahri yaad dila ta hai... mein kya karo Angad? Jitna mein tumhe bhulna chati hon.. itna tum yaad ate hon..


Thinking about Angad, Tanya goes to sleep.


Tanya gets up and gets ready. She decides to see if the kids are ready. She goes in their room and sees the kids all ready and making cards. Tanya wonders what they are doing. The kids see her and hide the cards.


T- Ye sub kya tha?

P- Kuch nahin mama..

T- Sab tumarhe haath dekho.


All of them show their hands and Tanya sees nothing.


B- Dekha..

Bh- Kuch nahin hai!

T (not convinced)- Theek hain...(changes the subject) Chale nasta karna hai na...

Bacha party- haan chale.. varna Nishant chacu chiliange...


The kids giggle and Tanya gets a smile on her face as well. Ever since she left Angad, the only reason she smiled was these kids. She loved them all a lot. Especially her Prateek. Their Prateek. The only living memory of Angad that she had.


At the breakfast table Nishant looks at his watch.


N- Kaha hain sub?

Bua- Ate honge Nishant..

N- 2 min 34 sec late hain..


Then all of them come. He looks at Tanya.


N- bet jo sub or nasta suru karo...

Bua- Nishant tumne to kaha tha ke...

N (inturrupes)- Koi baat nahin.. Ek bar late ho to...

B (whispering to P and Bh)- Yeh Nishant chacu ko kya hua hai?

P (whispering)- Pata nahin.. Lagta hai watch karab hogaya...


The kids giggle.


T- Bacho.. chup chap kana kalo...

bacha's- Theek hain..


Everyone eats. Soon everyone is done eating. The kids go into the room and play. Buaji goes in her room too. Tanya was about to go when Nishant stopped her.


N- Aap bura maat manye.. par kya hum lunch pe ja shakte hai?

T- Mein...

N- Please maana maat karye...

T (smiles)- Theek hain.

N (smiles)- Thanks...




Later that day. The kids, Buaji, and Tannu had gone out. Only Nishant and Tanya were at home. It was close to lunch time so Nishant came out of his room and found Tanya in the kitchen.


N- Tanya.. aap kya kar rahi hai?

T- Kahna bani rahi hon..

N- Iske koi zaarat nahin hai... Sub bahar kayange..

T- Par...

N- Chale?

T- Haan.. Chale..


They go into the car. They talk along the way.


N- Tanya.. aapne bacho ki bouth achi parvarish ki hain.. Phele to wo bilkul shatan the.. par aab kitna masum hain..

T- Theek kahan aapne... ye to pyar ke saath asai hua hai... pyar bacho ke liya booth jaruri hai...

N- Aur bado ko...

T (looks at Nishant)- Ji??

N- Mera matlaab Tanu be sudar jaingi... dheri dheri..

T- Haan... Tanu bouth achi hain... bus thoda pyar ki saath vo bilkul musum hogi.. Sub ka sunegi... (smiles)

N (smiles)- Paata hain.. Aap bouth achi hai Tanya..


Tanya smiles.


N- Lo agaye..


Both get out of the car and go into the resturant. Tanya and Nishant order food. Tanya's back is facing the door. All of a sudden Kanan comes in. She is ordering food (like in McDonald's or any fast food resturant). Tanya turns around to face the door and looks for the waiter. Then she spots Kanan looking at the casheir person. Tanya is shocked and turns back fast before Kanan could see her.


T (thinking)- Yeh Kanan yahan per kya kar rahin hai? Aur kya Angad be hai?


Nishant looks at Tanya's worried face.


N (worried)- Kya hua Tanya? Aap theek hain na?

T (looks at Nishant)- Ha... Mein theek hon.. Bas purani logon yaad araya hain..

N- Oh.. Aapko apka purani yaadein mitani chihe...

T- Koshish kar rahi ho par nahin ho pata...

N- Mujhe pata hain... baut muskil hai...


Soon they finish their food and start heading home. When they got home it was around 2. When Nishant opened the doors, everything was dark inside. Tanya stepped in. Then she heard voices yell surprise as the lights turned on and she saw everything decorated. Yes, it was Tanya's B-day that even she had forgotten. Magicly a smile appeared on her face as she scanned the decorations done by the kids and buaji. Nishant came and stood besides her.


N- Happy Birthday Tanya!


Tanya hugged Nishant happily. Nishant smiled a little and hugged her back. Kripa hugged everyone and gave the bacha's kisses on their foreheads. Buaji kissed her forehead and Tanya touched her feet and Buaji gave her the blessings. Everyone was happy.


T- Thank you everyone!

N- Theek hain... Aaj sham ko ek party hai... yahan hongi.. ye decoration rakna..... maine kuch dosto ko boliahe...

T- Theek hain...


Angad holds a pic of Kripa. He has a mad face.


A (yelling at the pic)- Kyu mein tumko bula nahin sakta... kyu bar bar tum meri nazaro ki samne ati hon?? Kyu Kripa ku?? Tum to chali gahi par apne yaadein kyu na le gi?? (you left but why didn't you take your memories with you?) Mein tumse yaad nahin karna chata!!!! Chali jo meri demak se!! Chali jo!!!!


Later at Nishant's house, Tanya is getting ready. She wears a pink sari. She gets a flashback.


*Flashback*

It's Kripa's B-Day. Angad is sick. Kripa talks to her dad.


K- Hello..

S- Happy Birthday beti...

K- Thanks dad... Mein to bul hi giy the ki aaj mera b-day hai..


Angad is listening. Kripa hears a sound and looks back to see Angad.


K- Main Chalti hoon dad..

S- Ok..


Kripa hangs up.


Later that night Angad had given Kripa the best, most valuble, and most beautiful gift ever.

*End of Flashback*


T (thinking)- Kitne saal bitee par tumari yaad abhi tak ahrahi hain...

P- Mama!!


Prateek comes running in and hugs Tanya. Tanya hugs him back. Then she kneels down so she is about the same height as him.


T- Wah... mera beta tayar ho gaya!

P- Mama.... Nishant chachu aapko bulariya hai!

T- Theek hai.. chalo!


They walk down the stairs. Some guests started arriving. They were talking. When they get down the stairs, Nishant walks up to Tanya.


N- Aap bouth achi lag rehi hai!

T- Thanks... (looks around and sees more people walking in) Aapne itne sare log kyu buluya?

N- Yeh mere dosto hai...

T (smiles)- Haan par sub ko buladiya?

N- Haan...

T- Aur kyon aniwala hai?

N- Mera buisness partner... par vo kabhi time pe nahin ata...

T (confused)- Kyon?

N- Angad..

T (shocked)- Angad??

Ta (who was listening comes)- Chachu you mean Angad Khanna the rockstar?

N (looks at Tanu)- Haan...

Ta (hugs Nishant)- Oh!! Chachu I love you!!


Nishant smiles and hugs Tanu gentley. Then he gets a call. He looks at his phone and the name Angad is flashing on it.


N- Lo agaia uska phone...


Tanya puts on a fake smile while Tanu is all smiles. Nishant picks up the phone.


N- Kya reh gaya?

A- Vo acually... Meri Dadi ki tabyaat kuch theek nahin hai to main Mumbai ja raha hoon..

N- Par tunne to kaha tha ke tum Tanya ke liya ganagayaga... aaj unki B-day hai..

A (thinking)- Aaj Kripa ki bhi B-day hai... (to Nishant)- Haan par mein Dadi ko akela nahin chod sakta hon... unhe meri jarraat hai..

N- Theek hain... Atleast Tanya ko wish karo...

A- Haan par phone to usko de...


Nishant gives the phone to Tanya. Tanya reluctantly takes it.


A- Hello..

T-------

A- Um.. mujhe maaf kar do mein aapke b-day mein nahin aa sakta... meri Dadi ki tabyaat kuch theek nahin hain... Par mein aapko kuch kehna chata hon... Happy B-day Tanya..

T------

A- Hello... aap sun rahi hain na... Hello...

T (changes her voice)- Bye...

A (confused but before he could say bye Tanya had turned off the phone and talks to himself)- Ajeb ladki hain...


Brain Twister- Does Angad recognize Tanya's voice as Kripa's? When will Angad and Kripa meet? And where?
Kashiish thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
that was g8 mispa di 😉 love it post the next part soon lol 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: kyph05

that was g8 mispa di 😉 love it post the next part soon lol 😆 😆

lol!😆😆you can post next😆😆😉

mpatel97508 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thansk!😳

Rim_ thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
cool...i like ur version betta den ektas so far lolz...cont sooon.... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
hey maulii.....
that was an awsome part....do cont sooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
great part mauli 👏
our ffs better not end up exactly the same 😉
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
u gonna continue or no.. cuz u arent continueing many of ur other fanfics.. or all..... dunno

but this is awesome soplz do continuee

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