Virman FF ~LOVE IS IMPERFECT~ last part on pg 113 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love is incapable of adjustment
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Nice concept..! liked both the updates...Waiting for the next:)
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i liked the concept its goin to be very interesting
Virat and manvi sumthng diff
Pls update soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update 😭😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow dis is juz amazing...very interesting concept..luvd it..luv Viraat's attitude, n our sweet Mannu...u made VirMan met..thnks a lotz, really an amazing story..plz continue soon, will b waiting 4 ur pm...thnks a lot 4 da pm..😊
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its a telugu muvie mr perfect..
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hey guyzzz i gt a break of 2 days before ma next xam so i thought of updating.. i was nt very satisfied wid dis update... so here it goes

Part 3

Virat POV

I was back to India, back home. The only place where I can forget all my worries and stay happy. After meeting everyone at home I went to my room to get fresh. The two things I miss in Australia other than my family is my room and mom's food. I quikly got freshened up and headed downstairs to have dinner. I was walking towards the dining area checking my phone if I got any phone calls. I didn't realize that someone was coming from the other side until I bumped into them. That person was going to fall down so I immediately held the person. That's when I realized that it was a girl. She had her eyes closed maybe she feared of falling down. She held onto my arm for support and I had my hands around her waist. She was indeed a beautiful girl. Suddenly she opened her eyes. We both stared at each other for a while until she realized the position we were in. I made her stand and set her dress. She then spoke,

Manvi: tumhe dikhayi nahi deta kya? Aakhein hai ya button? Khambe jaisi ladki tumhare samne chal rahi aur tum dekh nahi sakte??

Virat: o hello mujhe dikhayi deta hai par shayad tum nahi dekh sakti isiliye toh aake mujhse takra gayi.. aur kya keh rahi thi? Khamba? Tum toh itni choti ho dedh futiya.

Manvi: kya kaha tumne mujhe? Dedhfutiya huh? Aur tum kon ho? sunder ladki dikhi ki nahi aa gaye line marne chep kahinke..

Virat: sunder ladki?? Kahan??( looking around everywhere) kahin tumhara matlab tumse toh nahi?? Tum sundar nahi tum Bandar ho.. apna chehra dekha hai kabhi aayine mein?? Poori bandariya dikhti ho'

Manvi: ( with shocked expression) tumne mujhe bandariya kaha? Tumhari himmat kaise hui?? Aur vaise tum ho kon?? Aur yahan kya kar rahe ho?? tumhe andar aane ki permission kisne di?? Tum chor ho na kisi ne nahi dekha toh ghus gaye ghar mein' aur tumhare haath mein yeh kya hai?? Phone?? Tumne ghar se phone chori kar liya ?? ruko main sabko abhi bulati hoon' dii uncle aunty jiju jaldi aao ghar mein chor ghus aaya hai.. Saying this she catches his arm tightly so that he doesn't go anywhere.

Virat tries to speak but she doesn't hear anything. Hearing Manvi's voice everyone comes near her.

Jeevika: kya hua manvi?? Kyun chila rahi hai? Aur chor kahan hai?

Manvi(pointing towards virat): kahan matlab kya di aapke samne hi toh khada hai..

Everyone look to the side where she points and atart laughing. Manvi is confused as to why everyone is laughing and Virat is fuming with anger and keeps glaring at Manvi.

Manvi: kya hua aap sab has kyun rahe hain??

Jeevika: are Manvi yeh chor nahi yeh toh virat hai.. tere bachpan ka dushman aur mera bhai..

Manvi looks at Virat

Manvi(looking at jeevika): yeh Virat hai?? Jeevika nods and smiling at her.

Manvi( looks at Virat): tum Virat ho??

Virat frees himself from her clutches.

Virat: haan main Virat hoon. Ab kya certificate dikhaon.

Vanshika( smiling): Manvi tumne Virat ko nahi pehchana??

Manvi: are aunty bachpan mein kitna cute sa tha par ab dekho kaise chep jaise dikh raha hai.. kaise pehchanungi ise?? (looking at Virat and again towards Vanshika) koi kahega ki yeh aapka beta hai'

Virat: sab kahenge tumhare alava.. waise mom aap bhi kamal karti hain.. kamwali ko bahut sar pe chada ke rakha hai aapne.. mujhe chor bula rahi hai..

Hearing this Manvi gets shocked and opens her mouth in O shape. Everyone is trying to control their laughter.

Manvi: kya kaha tumne??? Kamwali?? Kamwali hogi tumhari biwi.

Virat: par meri shaadi nahi hui hai..

Manvi: toh tumhari hone wali biwi.. tum bilkul nahi badle na.. tab bhi mujhe tang karte the aura b bhi kar rahe ho..

Virat: tumhe kaise pata ki main badla ya nahi?? Tum mujhe bachpan se jaanti ho??

Vikram: haan Virat yeh tujhe bachpan se jaanti hai.. yeh Manvi hai Madan ki beti.. tumhe yaad tum dono bachpan mein kitna jhagda karte the'

Jeevika: ab bhi kar rahe hain( giggles)

Virat: tum Manvi ho??

Manvi nods angrily.

To reduce the anger between both of them Viren tells

Viren: acha ab voh sab chodo chalo khana khate hain.. mujhe toh bahut bhook lagi hai.. chalo Manvi..

On hearing the name of food Manvi forgets her anger.

Manvi( excitedly): haan chalo jiju mujhe bhi bahut bhook lagi hai.. chalo khate hain..

Everyone headed inside the house. They reach the dining area. Virat was going to sit in his regular place where he used to sit before going to Australia but someone held his chair.

Maniv( holding the chair firmly): yeh meri jagah hai..(guyzz Manvi comes 2 vadhera house regularly so she has a fixed place)

Virat: nahi yeh meri jagah hai..

Manvi: maine kaha na yeh meri jagah hai.. pichle paanch saal se main yahin baith ti hoon.. tum kahin aur baith jao.

Virat: tu paanch saal se baith rahi ho toh main uske pehele pandreha saal se baith raha hoon.. yeh meri seat hai chaho toh tum kahin aur baith jao..

Vanshika: Virat tumhare jane ke baad Manvi ka yhe permanent jagah ho gaya hai use baithne do na'

Manvi was smiling as she was proud that she got her place but her smile vanished when she heard a voice.

Madan: arey aise kaise baithne dega itne saalon baad aaya hai toh apni jagah pe baithega na manvi kahin aur baith jayegi. Aur Virat pehchana main Madan uncle.

Virat: arey Namaste uncle. Virat hugs Madan.

Dabbu: arey bhaiya aap mujhey bhul gaye'(whining)

Virat: abbey dabbe tut toh bahut badal gaya yarr.. ek dam hero type dikh raha hai yarr.. (glancing at Manvi) warna kuch log toh badalte hi nahi hai..

Madan: Manvi beta aaj se kahin aur baithegi jab tak Virat yahan hai..

Manvi: lekin papa

Madan(sternly): Manvi

With a grumpy face Manvi sits on another seat between Viren and Dabbu and opposite to Virat.

Viren was passing a dish to Virat when Jeevika stopped him.

Jeevika: arey nahi Virenji Virat yeh nahi khayega isme ginger hai.

Viren: oh theek hai..

They all have dinner peacefully. The Chaudarys return to their house.

At night Virat was returning to his room when his father called him.

Vikram: ruko Virat mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.bahut jaroori hai.

Virat: haan kahiye na dad.

Vikram: dekho beta ab Jeevika ki shaadi ho rahi hai toh hum soch rahe the ki tumhari bhi shaadi kar dein.

Virat is shocked.

Virat: dad shaadi???? Par ab kyun??

Vikram: dekho Virat tum Jeevika ki shaadi ke baad wapas Australia shift ho jaoge aur na jane kab vapas aaoge isiliye maine aur tumhri maa ne decide kiya kit um shaadi karlo. Dekho hum tumhe abhi shaadi karne ko nahi keh rahe par ladki toh dekhlo.

Virat: theek hai dad. Kaun hai voh ladki?

Vikram: Manvi'


good or bad plzz comment.. nd guyzz next update wud be after ma xamz i.e after 18th of march..plzz let me knw hw it is..

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Edited by shruthi13 - 12 years ago
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updated u'll get da pm soon.. do read nd comment
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amazing update..👍🏼
continue soon
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superb update
thanks for pm me

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