IPKKND SS: Cracks in Perfection (Chapter 2, pg. 13)

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

it was a very sad update but still beautiful and meaningful in some way!

loved the 1st chapter and eagerly waiting for the next one

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saba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Awesome start very interesting ,emotional and well written
continue soon please and thank you for pm me

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Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

great start dear

loved it

was very emotional

thanks for pm

continue soon

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Cute6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

emotional update

brougt tears...

vaiting for next

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yoga123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Awesome chapter...nice story...please continue...thanks for the PM

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soppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

the update was just perfection!

such strong emotions, it made me feel his pain.

please update soon!

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pakpearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

It's heart wrenching...

Arnav's life without Khushi

Do something soon..I can't take it !!!!

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varshamaharaj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

very intense..very well written..could feel the loss and pain of every person in the house..totally mindblowing...wonder were kushi is...do continue...

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Hi. I just found this story.It's beautiful. Please do continue soon. I want to know exactly what happened that drove Khushi out of the house. And I guess Payal and Akash no longer live at Shantivan?