IPKKND SS: Cracks in Perfection (Chapter 2, pg. 13) - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab part
it made me cry
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Whats up with every one being so senti???
But it was fabulous and beautiful
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Glad this updated! It was fabulous and got ne all emotional
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U updatd it...
The update was very sentimental
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Beautiful piece of work! So emotional
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Excellent
So emotional😭😭
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Awww! Loved it! Cnt wait to read the next one! xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow that was an amazing update, yet so emotional.

The update was written perfectly and you had wrote Arnav's emotions and feelings so well.

Arnav's reaction when he saw the portrait on the fall was so sad, he felt so distraught his last memory of khushi also broken.

Awww love the fact Arnav's niece owned up to knocking down the portrait and promised to find Khushi.

Wow it's been ten years since khushi left, so I guess the reason she left was because of Anjali.

Loved Arnav explaining to NK what Anjali is feeling is guilt, where as what he is going through is pain.

So is it Anjali at the end wanting to contact Payal again.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Wow that was an amazing update, yet so emotional.


The update was written perfectly and you had wrote Arnav's emotions and feelings so well.

Arnav's reaction when he saw the portrait on the fall was so sad, he felt so distraught his last memory of khushi also broken.

Awww love the fact Arnav's niece owned up to knocking down the portrait and promised to find Khushi.

Wow it's been ten years since khushi left, so I guess the reason she left was because of Anjali.

Loved Arnav explaining to NK what Anjali is feeling is guilt, where as what he is going through is pain.

So is it Anjali at the end wanting to contact Payal again.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

the end was actually asha wanting to talk to her aunt, payal. payal is the only one can and will answers asha'a questions. at this point, asha doesn't even know who khushi is.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome ff.. Please update regularly...running to read your other works :)

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