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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: kavya-kotha

it's really nice.continue soon.


thank you for liking it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: fatima15

yep it's really good..
is it your first FF?


thank you again...
yes for first time yrr i try it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Pata nehi kaisa hua hain update..but try my best yrrr..so here you go for first chapter''..

Chapter 1:

9.00 Am

She was late,ohh god aab kiya hoga?apne aap main hii bak raha hain Aur kisiko bula raha hain..Pihu.piiihu'piihuu get up soon..main pehle din hii late ho jayungiii..uth jao na meri jaan but alas she was not get up.isliye wo bed pe jati hain aur uski upar se blanket utha deti hain aur bolti hain aab agar nehi utha toh flat main lock karke chali jayungii..college band get it?bolke wo mudh jati hain abb wo ladki joo bed pe thi wo usski haat pakad leti hain and talk with her in sleepy tone kiya hain Dii..thora aur sone do naa,Main aap ki tarha itni jaldi nind se nehi uth pati'thori der aur!!please Riya dii..meri pyarii gudiya dii please'aur aaj meri class after 11:00pm hain thori der aur soo jaao??

Riya smile At her antics..and kissed her forhead and tell her thik hain pihu baas thori der aur my doll. Par mujhey late ho jayegii main chalti hoon aur college jane se pehle brackfast karlena warna main naraj ho jayungiii got it..bye take care..Pihu tell her okey di and all the best for joing ETF.

9:45 Am

Still she was in on the way of ETF,Trafic mai faas gayii hain.pehle din hii uski izzat ka faluda ho jayega agar late pouchi too.that's why she think it was 10 miniute walking distance of ETF..so she left her taxi and start walking actually not walking she was just running'

And here in ETF office in the conference hall Someone[A body bilder,strong men] Cracking jocks on software basis to a men who has curli hair kiya hain eye Shree Jab dekho laptop mai ghusta rehta hain..kiya set kiya usmey?kahi kisi larki ko track to nehi kar rahi hain???wayse tera varosa bhi nehi hain..par ek baat hain Shree agar kisi ladki ko track kar rahi ho toh ek baat yaad rakhna who ladki tujhe dekti hii vaag jaye giii'kal raat ko bhi tu laptop main hii toh tha'pata nehi kiya karta rehta hain dinbhar iss machine ke saath'

Curli hair to body bilder main teri tarha nehii ki ek ladki key liye eye saab karungii...

And bodybuilder tells him kyun gey hain kiya tuuu???

Curli hair: Nehiii..paar teri tarha mera koi 11.00 wali nehi hain..Jiske Shope ane ki adaa main mai main apni hosh kho behthu'

Body bilder:Shree!!!

At that moment a lady in Jeans and Blue tops enter inthe conference hall.aur wo Curli hair ko bolti hain Shree 11:00 wali nehi 11:30 wali hain'And looks at Body bilder And tell kyun Chotu'

And Chotu tell the blue lady kiya Aiesha tum bhi'.

And then Then The Curli hair,Bodybilder,And blue lady were outbrast in lough'

Jab wo teeno jorse has rahiii hote hain tabhi wha kisi ka entry hoti hain..And they are disturb by his Srong voice'Acp Sammer Damsing Rathore the ETF chief'

Kiya ho raha hain eha?Agar tum sabka hasna hasana khatam ho gaya ho toh hum kaam ki baate kare'

Trio answer together yes sir''..

Rathore to everybody : maine tum sabse kaha tha ki ajj ek nayii officer ETF join karne wali hain as reasurch specialist..wo ayii hain?

Trio together: No Sir

Rathore: Aur eye Rawte Kaha hain??

Aiesha: Pata nehi sir hum me se kisiney Sir ko dekha nehi'

Rathore: Isse paak chuki hoon main..Phone karo usse aur jaldi office ane ki invitition doo,bolo Comissioner Sir ke Saath meeting hain..mujhse baat karna chahte hain sir' usse bhi bulaya hain'.

Aiesha: okey Sir

Or idhar ek ladki in jeans and White tops pehenne wali ETF ki main door se Reception main pouch thi hain'Aur bolta hain I am Riya Mukharjee,wanna meet with ETT chief Acp Sameer Damsing Rathore''

Receptionist: okey mam come with me'

Receptionist Riya ko ETF ki conference hall ki darwaja tak pouchti hain And ask chief may I come in sir'

Puri team darwaja ki taraf dekhti hain,Aiesha Kisiko call karne wala tha par Nehi kar pati aur darwaja ki taraf dekhti rehti hain..a really very sweet girl sorry women stand with Receptionist

Chotu Aiesha se puchti hain eye koun hain Neha ke Saath..The Receiptionist was Neha'.

Aiesha: pata nehi Chotu'

Aur idhar wo ladki ko dekkhe Shree maan hi man khush horaha hain jo Aiesha aur Chotu ki najar se chut ti nehi..aur chotu bol parda hain kiya Shree itna khush kyun hain tuu'kahiii??

Shree: kiya Chotu kavivi..kisikevi saath mujhey ..tera kuch nehi ho sakta'

Aiesha: Paar Shree eye ladki kisikevi tarha nehi..infact bohot sweet hain'

Shree: wo toh hogaii naaa'

Chotu: Matlab?

Rathore :Guys give attention to your work..warna ETF se Sida marriage bewro main Chor dungaa..got it'

Aiesha: Hum itne dheere bolrahe the..aur eye sunvi liya'pata nehi kaise kaan hain iska'

Rathore to Neha yes come in Neha..

Neha: Sir eye Riya Mukharjee hain,apse milna chate the'

Rathore towards Riya: Reasurch Specialist Right? Commissioner Sir ne bataya tha..

Riya: Yes Sir

Rathore: welcome to ETF..hope you will enjoy your work'

Aiesha: ETF ka officer hoke kaam kaise enjoy karenge..wobhi jab etne kadus khadus bos hoo'

Chotu: Maan hi maan toh eye ETF ka naya Officer hain..ek aur bechari agayii hamari group main'

Rathore Riya ko Team se milati hain'

Rathore towards Blue lady says she is Aiesha Kapoor[encounter specialist]

And towards Body bilder says he is Chotu imean hum saab Usse chotu bulate hain'par uska naam Chandrakant hain Chandrakant Patil commando of ETF'.

Atlast it was turn of Curli hair. Rathore riya ko kehti hain ki eye Shreekant sen hain Technical expart of ETF'

Rathore teeno ko kehte hain ki eye Riya Mukharjee hain..join ETF as Resurch specialist'..

Riya says hello to everyone'

Rathore Riya ko kuch kehne hi wale tha thabhi uski mobile par kisika call ata hain'

Rathore Cell Ektaraf karke Team ko kehti hain ki Riya ko uski kaam usse samjha de aur office ki rules baata dey'

Trio together says okey sir

Rathore call receive kar leta hain..Hello..

To be continued''

Precap: someone meets someone'

Hope you all like it,if not then forgive me for this pakao FF.I am really sorry if i bored you..this is my first time'...

Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Gud start dear
title made me scare
do cont soon..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Nice part..
Thanks for the pM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
superb update...
loved it...
aisha shree and chotu's bonding was lovely...
riya and her sis's scene were too cute... awww riya phle din hi late...
shree riya ko phle se janta hai kya?
precap is interesting...
continue soon...
cant wait for the next part...
plz pm me whenever you update...
thx...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Great start

Loved Chou Shree and Aisha...Riya as new commer..too good

Waiting for Arjun entry

Awesome

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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
really nice👏
i lyk it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
great update :) loved it
loved riya and pihu's conversation :)
chotu and shree's conversation was so funny
aisha's bonding with shree and chotu is super cute :)
loved when rathore said "warna ETF se sida marriage bureau main chore dunga"😆
precap seems interesting
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
great start :)
liked it..
Lovd ayesha, shree nd chotu bonding..
Riya as new comer..
Thx for da pm :)
continue soon .

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