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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update! Thanks for the PM and sorry for commenting so late, but aaj tak in exams se koi bach paya hai? Was busy with exam preparations!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am just starting reading it,it was fab,awsm😛
Prolouge was interesting,Cs was excellent,!!Dard!! MAin toh dar gayii
Ress for coment //Chapter 1 2 3 //😊

Edited by Rong_ria - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dmegha

Great update! Thanks for the PM and sorry for commenting so late, but aaj tak in exams se koi bach paya hai? Was busy with exam preparations!


ohh thank you so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rong_ria

i am just starting reading it,it was fab,awsm😛
Prolouge was interesting,Cs was excellent,!!Dard!! MAin toh dar gayii
Ress for coment //Chapter 1 2 3 //😊


Thank you so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
here i added some new characters..which character i introduce later for story update..i hope you like it..And i change Pihu[Riya's Sister] with new one..really hoped you all like her...

Anjili Mukharjee

Ongi's wife and Riya's bhabi

Ognishor Mukharjee

Riya's brother[dead]


Mr Indrajeet Mukharjee & Mrs Ranjana Mukharjee

Riya's Mom-Dad[Dead]


Pihu Mukharjee


A cute college going girl.Bubly and charming.Riya's younger sister...loved riya...

Rishab Suryekant Rawte

Pihu's best friend..Call Riya dii..and he loved Riya too much...He is brother of Rr..



Nileema Roy

She was an Orphen..grown up in an orphen house..She is really sweet and caring...And she is pair up with[it's a secret]...

Mrs Parvati Patil

Chotu's mom...


Rawte's head[Dadi]

Mr Suryakant Rawte's mom...

Mr Suryakant Rawte & Mrs Mitali Suryakant Rawte

Arjun's Mom-Dad

Mr Damsing Rathore & Mrs Prava Damsing Rathore

Rathore's Mom-Dad

Mr Pradeep Kapoor & Mrs Sheetal Kapoor

Aiesha's Mom-Dad

Mr Narayan Sen & Mrs Pratima Sen

Shree's Mom-Dad

Mr Devid Cruz & Mrs lina Cruz

Liza's Mom-Dad

Liza D Cruz

Shree's college mate..there is a tom and jerry relation between her and Shree..Knows riya from last two years and shares a good bonding with Riya...Forensic Expert of ETE..

Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Friends i am back with my chapar chapar new pakao update..hope you like it..and here you go for Chapter5..And really very very sorry for late update..Exam main faas gayii thi yrrr...😭
Chapter 5

Aiesha and Rathore was back in Dev-486 where Arjun and res of team are waiting for them..Nurse condition was not so good..but she is stable now..Nurse tell them she was in another cabin when she heared gun shoot she run to this cabin..but she did not see anyone and at that time someone hits her from her back site..and she fell on the flore..she tried her best to see the curlprit..but she didn't'''.

And here Arjun talks with Sneha and ask her about neha's breaking marriage..And is she has any doubt..

But Sneha says not at all..Neha di was a very good and she was absolutely amaizing person who loved everyone..

Arjun: then why Neha's marriage was breaking off?

Sneha: Acctually my mother was not dead..she is alive aur wo 13 saal pehle kisike saath vaag gayii thi humain chorke..aur eye baatr jab ladkewale ko pata chala taab eye shaadi tut gayii'

Arjun: tumhara mom abb kaha hain?

Sneha: pata nehi..jaab ma chali gayi thi taab main baas 4 saal kit hi mujhe kuch yaad nehi..aur unke chale jaane ke baad di kabhi unke bare main baate nehii ki aur nahi unse koi nata rakhha..aur to aur main toh eye bhi nehi janti meri ma kaisi dekhti hain..di ne maa ki sari photos hata diya tha ma ke jane ke baat'

Arjun: thik hain agar tumhe koi baat aur yaad aye toh hamain batana..aur kisipe shaak hoo toh'

Sneha : thik hain..

Arvind : chalo Sneha..abb ghar chalo'

Sneha fir roo parda hain aur Arvind ke saath apne ghar chali jati hain..

Arjun: Chotu eye Joo Prava Shannal hain inki histry pata karoon..aur jadi'

Chotu: okey sir

Rathore: Riya tumhe joo list nikalne ko kaha tha?

Riya : ho gaya sir..

Rathore: team abb office chalte hain..uha jakar ajjka baaki kaam kerlenge'

ETF in there SUV

Here Chotu Shree in tha last sit..and Riya Aiesha in the middle one and Rawte in driving place and Rathore is in his side'

In the suv everyone is busy is in there own..But Aiesha ka toh kuch aur hii haal hain..use aise halka thand ki mousam main bhi Pasina aa raha hain..Aiesha ka haal dekhke Riya puch leti hain kiya huya Aiesha tumhe?? Tum thik toh hoo naa??etna pasina kyun aa rahi tumhe?

Aiesha : ku..kuch bhi toh nehi..kiya hoga? Pasina!!..wo mujhey bohot garmi lagrahi hain..bohot garmi hain na'shayed isiliye..

Rathore samne ki mirror se Aiesha ko dekhte huye agar apna kaam chorke aise hii day dreaming karte rahoge toh pasina ka kiya dosh..

Aiesha Rathore ki taraf na dekhte huye aur thorasa uneasy feel karte huye bolta hain matlab?

Abb jawab Arjun deta hain: Matlab eye Aiesha ki eye garmi ka mousam nehi hain..aur to aur etna garmi bhi nehi hain ki tum aise pasina pasina hoo jao..abb samjhey ya samjhayun!!!

Shree pisese Chotu ko low volum main lo aa gaye eye bhi samjhane..Abb bechari ko pasina bhi nehi aa sakti'

Chotu: Chup ho ja Shree aise weather main pasina ana thik baat nehi'

Shree baas chotu ka baat sunke uske taraf dekhte rehte hain'

Aise main Riya ki mobile pey kisika call ata hain..pehli baar toh riya call cut kar deta hain paar jab dubara call ata hain taab wo kuch soch kar Call receive kar leta hain..

Riya: Hello..

Uss taraf se ek babli tone: Di app bhi naa..ek baar bhi call nehi kiya aaj apne..

Riya: busy thi na baby isiliye..batao tumne mujhey call kyun kiya??

Girl: ek toh apne puri din main ek baar bhi mujhse baat nehi kii aur maine call kiya toh pehli baar aap call cut kaar diya aura bb puch rahe hain ki maine appko call kyun kiya??jao main apse baat hi nehi karungii'

Riya: Are are aisi thori na hota hain'

Girl: kiya nehi hota??

Riya: ki mujhe call karke mujhse hi baat nehi karoge??

Girl: kiya dii..main sach main apse baat nehi karunga..

Riya: jorse has parda hain..fer sabko dekhke chup ho jatii hain..

Aur udhar wo ladki Pihu hain joo gusse se ful rahi hain'

Pihu: Diii..

Riya: okey baaba I am sorry..

Pihu: aapne haasa kyun? Jao main aapse baate nehi karti'

Riya: okey sorry..really really sorry na baby..sorry..

Pihu: kyun aab sorry kyun??

Riya: fir kabhi aise galti nehi hogi boss..kasamse..abb mujhey maaf kardiya kiya??

Girl: abhi taak to nehi kiya paar agar aaj aap jaldi aagaye toh maaf kar sakta hoo aur ate waqt mere liye kuch special lana padega'

Riya: okey main kuch sochta hoon..paar kuch keh nehi sakte wo kiya hain na aaj ETF main mera pehla din hain..

Pihu: ohh haa sorry dii..really sorry'main toh puchna hi vul gayi..aaj ka din kaisa raha??

Riya: Assa..waise tumne dopeher ko khana khaya tha?

Pihu: eye kiya di..baas assa tha?? Aur kuch nehi..maine toh socha tha bohot assa hoga..koi handsam sa ACP hoga..jise dekhte hi apko'

Riya: Baas baas jiyada sochne kii jarurat nehi..Maine pucha tumne khana khaya tha ya nehi??

Girl: haa ha khaliyaa baba..paar diner hum dono ek saath karenge'Paar apko pata hain maine aapko call kyun kiya?

Riya: mujhey kaise pata hogi?tum batao..

Pihu: wo hain na meri college main..jo aapke age pise ghumta rehta hain football kahi ka..

Riya: Koun Rishab??

Pihu: haa wo hii usse hii toh bulatii hoo football..

Riya: wo toh samajh gayii paar wo mere pise hain iss main tumeh kiya problem hain..

Pihu: assa toh aap uska di ho ya meri??

Riya: dono ka..

Pihu: bilkul nehi..main apko kisike saath share nehi kar sakti..aur uss football ke saath toh bilkul bhi nehi'

Riya: uffho..tum toh aise baat kar rahe ho jaise school ki bache baate karte hain..tum dono kaa problem kiya hain ??

Pihu: hum dono ke bich sirf problem hii prolem hain'

Riya: okey tumhare bich problem hain..paar uska mujhse toh koyii problem nehi hain'

Pihu: Asssa aapko usse koyi problem nehi'wo jo aapkii ekloti behen ko puri din tang karta rehta hain usse aapko koyii problem nehi hain???!!!ajib baat hain..kisiko meri parwa nehi'

Riya: Ismain tumhari parwa na karni wali kounsi baat huyi baba..

Pihu: huyii toh..aapki statistic ki hisabse 100% huyii'waise maine aapko issliye call kiya tha agar wo football aapko phone kare toh uska call reiceve maat karna..meri usse jhagra huya hain main uska call receive nehi kar raha hoon'Aur main toh usse kabhi baat bhi nehi karunga'agar app uska call recive kiya toh toh'

Riya: call recive kiya toh?

Pihu: main aapse bhi baate nehi karungi..

Riya : kiyaa??

Pihu: uska call recive maat karna aur jaldi ghar aa jana..

Riya : apna dheyan rakh na'Aur..

Paar pihu Riya ki baat ki bich mai hi Okey kehke call cut kar deta hain..

Aur Riya apne app main hii sochta hain pagal hain eye ladki..kaab bari hogi eye'aur aapne aap main hii hasta hain..kash wo din jaldise aa jaye'

Shree: Rii kiska phone tha??

Riya only smile at his question'

Chotu: has kyun rahii hoo'

But Riya she did not answer anything'..

Aur eha Arjun from the mirror he watch Riya each and every expression..and think eye kisse aise baate kar raha tha??saabke samne baby baby kar rahi thi..ohh how could be someone so mannerless?? eha pe hum uski seniors baithe huye hain aur wo pise ki sit main baithke apne boy friend se baate kaar rahi thii..sharam toh bilkul bhi nehi iss ladki main..but All of in sudden he think what going on..why I am thinking about her..wo jo chahe wo kare..mujhe kiya??

It's 8.00 pm

ETF still working dear..they all are sitting in conference table'.they are checking the list'.

Aiesha maan hi maan sochta hain main bhi na..maan hi man koi thori na kisika sawal ka jawab deta hain..maine kaise soch liya ki sir maan hi maan mere sawal ka jawab de rahe hain..pagal ho gaya hoo main..iss khadus bosses ka kiya karu[day dreaming kaise mujhey suna diya]..utha kar fek bhi nehi sakti..jina mushkil hoo gaya hain'wo aab Rathore ki taraf dekh bhi nehi paa raha hain wo..pata nehi kiya huya usse'

Riya ko baas Sneha ki yaad aa raha hain..uska roona uskii ekele pan ki'aaab uske death koun hoga'

Shree baas ek bar Riya ek bar Aiesha ko dekh raha hain..wo dono apne hii soch main hain'

Chotu: eha itna sannata kyun?

Shree: pata nehi yrrr..

Aiesha uski gehri chinta se pata nehi aisa kaise hua'

Shree: kaisa??

Chotu: pata nehi kaisa'

Tabhi Riya Shree se kehte hain Shree eye case kuch ajib nehi hain..humain ek call ata hain aur hum jaate hain paar humain koi phones nehi milta crime spot se'ajib hain na..assa Shree jis number se phone aya tha uss number ka patra lagao na tum'

Shree: kiya baat hain Rii..ate hii jasus baan gayii..lagta hain Arjun sir ka kuch jiyada hii asar par raha hain..waise itna khadus admi ka asar kaise seh leti hoo'

Aiesha catch the point khadus : sahi kaha tumne shree Khadus..

Riya : koun khadus?

Aiesha: saabke saab khadus hain..jina haram kar diya'

Abb pichese Arjun: kisne jina haram kar diya?

Abb ssab logo ko 440 ka jhatka lagta hain aur charo ki charo khare hoo jate hain..

Abb Rathore puchta hain Aiesha se koun jina haram kar diya..

Abb bechra Aiesha wo baas lacharo ki tarha un logoko dekhte rehte hain'

Riya: maan hi maan sab kuch sun liya kiya??

Shree:kuch nehi sir'

Arjun: abhi toh suna humne jina haram kar diya'

Riya sochta hain iska matlab baas itna hi suna jina haram kar diya.

Shree & Chotu: ajj toh mar gayii yrr..Aiesha toh gayiii'.

Rathore: koi kuch bolta kyun nehi?

Aiesha: wo sir..i mean sorry sir'

Chotu: Riya aab Aiesha ka kiya hoga yrrr..aabb eye dono isse choregii nehi..tum toh nayii ho isliye subah chor diya..paar abb Aiesha to gayii yrrr'

Arjun: Sorry kyun'

Aiesha: wo Sir..sir asal main'sir'

Rathore :kiya sir sir laga rakha hain..age bhi toh kuch bolo..sorry kyun bol rahi hoo.??

Abb Riya sure ho jate hain ki eye log baas un logoki akhri line suni hain..toh abb Riya bol parda hain teen ke bich'

Riya: actually sir Aiesha sorry bolna chati hain..

Rathore: wo toh hum sun hi rahe hain'paar kyun bolna chahte hain sorry?

Riya: isliye kyun ki?

Rathore: kyun ki?

Arjun gusse se Riya ki taraf dekhte hain..

Riya Arjun ka gussa ignore karke Rathore ko kehte hain ki isliye kyun ki Aiesha aur main baate kar rahe thi... toh isiliye'

Rathore : assa ?iss liye Aiesha tum sorry bol rahe thi?

Aiesha: Riya ki taraf dekhte huye: haa haan Sir isiliye'

Arjun: tum to kehrahe thi ki tumhari jina haram ho gaye hain..aab sorry bol raha hoo..

Fer Aiesha lachar hoo jate hain aur iss baar wo Riya ki taraf dekh rahii hoti hain' aur Arjun se bolne lagte hain ki..wo sir..

Paar Riya uski baat pehle pakar leti hain aur Arjun ko dekhte huye bolta hain Sir actually Aiesha ka jina sach main haram ho gaya..issiliye bol raha tha'

Abb shree aur chotu riya ko bolta hain eye kiya bol rahi hoo riya?

Riya: Kiya Shree Sach hii toh bol raha hoo..Aiesha ka jina haram ho gaya..jhut thori na bol raha hoon kyun Aiesha??

Aiesha eye kiya kar raha hain..paar wo Riya ki akhon ki taraf dekhte huye lacharoo ki tarah bolta hain haan haram hoo gaya'

Abb Arjun aur Rathore : Saath kyun?

Fir Riya shuru hoo jati hain: abb main apko kiya kahoon sir Aiesha toh Mumbai main ekele rehte hain appp log jante hain na??

Arjun: haa toh..mumbi main bohot saare log ekele reh te hain..toh kiya'

Riya[ek daam main]: I know sir statictics ki hisab se Mumbai main 50% log ekele rehte hain..Aur issiliye inn logo ka joo promlem hoti hain.. wo problem 100% inneh ekela hi solve karna parda hain..orr to or eye saree problem ladki ke saath kuch jiyada hi hoti hain..wo kiya hain ekele jab koi ladki Mumbai aati hain taab uski bohot sare problems hote hain..Aur eye problem 70% ladki jo ekele Mumbai main rehte unke saath hota hain'aur eye problem jis jis ladki ke saath hote hain un maine se 99% ladki ki jeena haram hoo jati hain sir'aur ehii problem hamare Aiesha ke saath bhi huya hain toh isiliye uska jina haram ho gaya Sir'.

Riya jab bolraha hota hain wo panch sirf dikh raha hota hain..kyun ki wo bohot jiyada hi speed bolrahii hoti hain'

Aiesha: Shree eye kiya hain?

Shree: Nonstop Statistic

Chotu: Abb eye dono iska kiya karenge?

Aiesha aur Shree uske taraf dekhta hain aur bolta hain pata nehi'

Riya apne baat khatam karke unlogo ki taraf dekhti hain ki wo panch uski taraf dekh rahii hain?

Riya : Sir..

Rathore: Thik hain..

Riya: thik hain? kiya thik hain sir?

Arjun: khatam huya tumhara aur Aiesha ka problem? Abb apna kaam karoo..Samjhey ya samjhayun!!!

Riya in smily face yes sir'

Fir Riya ki statistic se irritate hoke Arjun aur Rathore maan hi maan haste huye kuch der ke liye conference hall se barar chali jate hain'

Aur idhar Aiesha Chotu aur Shree baas Riya ko dekhti rehti hain..Aur Rathore Rawte ke jane ke baad has parda hain'

Aiesha: woow kiya sunaya tumne!!!

Shree:Main toh fida ho gayiii..

Chotu: do do ACP ki bolti band..Kuch der baat baat unko Thora thora aise hi apni statictics doos dete rehna..galti se bhi wo tumhare samne nehi ayegii yrrr'.kaash hamare paas aisa telent hota??

Aiesha: Chotu!!??

Fir charo saath main jorse hasna shuru karta hain..

Riya: Guys apne volume thora low karoo yrrr..warna firse'Fer saab dhire dhire haste rehte hain..

Aur eha Bahar jate hii Rathore apne aap main has parda hain Riya ki nonstop statistic ke bare main soch kaar..

Aur dusri taraf arjun ko baas gussa ata hain..koyii itni baate kaise kaar sakti hain.wo bhi nonstop??Stupid..eye eek officer kaise baan gay..pura din baas baate karte rehta hain'


To be continued'...

Precap:kuch baate unkahisi..unsunisi..kuch yaadein bite huye paalon ki...

So todays update is complete..i hope you all are enjoy this one...Friends waiting for your most adorable coments dear...so comment jarur karna..aur mujhse bore maat ho jana😉
Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey awesome update...loved riya's non-stop statistics..very funny... 😆 😆 ..thanks for d pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum wrk dear
lovd it
sry like wrk nt wrking
thanx fr d pm..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waooo dr realy nice part..
lv ur new character..
update soon
Lolll sam n arjun both man he man smile..

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