ARHI FF-THE MIRAGE -Thread 3 Chap-37,p 146

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supriya06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

wow... awesome update...loved it...congo for new thread...

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Of all the things he can tell her..., I am hurt 😭 , guess this needed for the story and them to get their emotions cleared, but the last few chapters made him realize didn't it, confused though...

Deepu a summer romance, how could he...😡

But a nice update, glad that Khushi left

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Lakshmi

@aquariuslp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

😭 poor khushi n arnav... i thought arnav had realised that he loves khushi...😕 apparently, he did not. come on man... wats wrong in admiting/accepting ur own love??? n khushi... i can only sympathize with her. maan too.

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saba

@ASR6262

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Awesome update very interesting Anjali and Shyam's accident 😲
and Khushi back to sheeshmahal oh god Arnav gonna be very mad now
can't wait for next part continue soon please and thank you for pm me

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rdforfun

@rdforfun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Hope u r doing good now

take care

thanks for the update

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

I dont know where to start. It took me 2 days to read all the chapters. And I felt I am watching IPKKND Season 2. It was that intense. I couldnt sleep last night since I couldnt finish reading all chapters yesterday. it kinda bothered me and kept me at edge.

Let me begin congratulating on your new thread.

You writing is amazing and I dont think I have read any FF thats written so beautifully (including mine 😉). Being a writer myself, it takes lot of time to put the emotions into words and I understand how hard you must have worked to present this. I really hope you get more and more readers, but it deserves lot more than what you have.

I like the way you express each one's feelings and their point of view. And you stayed true to ASR character. Your FF not involved love story but also cultural and political backgrounds. And one has to be really intelligent and socially aware to beautifully depict those into words.

Khushi's concern is beautifully written in "She then looked at him without any expression and as he grew agitated as to what was happening with her,she did something unexpected she inched up her left arm and snaked her hand into his shirt front and put her hand on to his chest and put her palm on to his chest... "

The aforementioned lines brought tears into my eyes and I loved what Arnav felt after that. Hats off to you lady, you are no less than a professional creative writer.

Please accept my Buddy request. I would love to read more on this.

Thanks once again for giving us such wonderful story.

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

loved it

awesome

so she left

ASR is a fool giving a name to ur feelings wont make a difference but make it more strong

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saraatef

@saraatef

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Congratz on new thread!

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Dynamix215

@Dynamix215

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

anukat, m confused. hadnt arnav already confessed to himself that he loves her? (it was in baby pink font? ) or did I just imagine it/misunderstood/was it in another fan fic? -.-

the update was awesome! I was like •_• thru out!!! I got so pissed at arnav! Khud ko samajh nahi pas raha. denial does no good!
anjali accident?! I hope ki arnav Khushi ni blame cheyyadu -_- Adi Mataram inka too much kannta too much aipothundhi... nijanga his shaatir DiMaag awasaramu ayyinappude vacation ki vvelthundhi *facepalm*
*sigh. update soon!

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

awesome !!! once again a very well scripted chapter from you... why arnav is always so confused and khushi takes her own time to understand him.. both are beyond repair pieces... but loved the chapter and waiting for pursuit... but what happened to anjali and shyam... was that done by bhairav and his son shikhar... following which khushi left for sheesh mahal.. will be waiting eagerly for next update.. thanks for pm 😊