Geet SS: Revenge of a DAMSEL LAST part pg 74 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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doubts pe doubts aa rahe hain so I am asking...

why Naintara went with Geet to Mumbai without informing Dev...ok Dev was busy in his work but he must have phone or any other connecting device...I mean she can ask his workers there working in site also...or why didn't dev himself contact her if he is so concerned about her and loved her so much ?...after they sold their house and shifted 4 yrs back then neighbors must have known about this so when Dev with Maan reached HP to meet Naintara and saw burnt down house why didn't they enquire from neighbors and why didn't anybody told them that they are not living here from so many yrs...the people burnt were not Naintara and family but some other people...police must have come for investigation then what is the result of investigation Dev didn't try to know how house burnt and who died inside...when our near ones die we don't easily belive and try to know that may be the news is not true...may be the people die in accident is not our loved ones...may be they are still alive...our heart won't accept easily...Dev and Maan being so big businessmen...they didn't even enquire who died there...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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MEERA HAS SENT GEET TO MAAN DELIBERATELY
MAAN IS ATTRACTED TO HER
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful update dear,,,
lovely maneet moments in office..😛😛
sad fr naintara...hope dev nd naintara meet up sooonnn...😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update...
geet has enteres KC...
waiting fr the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 6
nice part...
hope Tara clears everything before Geet does something drastic...
so Meera is panning for Maan and Geet to get together?
then how come she doesnt know about Tara and Dev?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 6


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PART 7

The entire day went off ...geet n maan both were engrossed in reading their project..Adi was the one who was shocked by the outcome...he never expected maan to be this seriously involved in project...He even called adi twice n verified the quality of soil and other details in which they were about to start the proj...

Maan had never felt this much humilated in his entire life..its not that she had said everything from her heart but she said the truth...whenever his daadi scolded him also he was never worried but the words from her meant much more to him..he felt as if he has failed her belief..all he want to do now is make this proj succesful and prove everyone oops prove her that he is capable...

***'*****
Meera wasnt able to hold back anymore she called km..
Daadi picked up the call..
"can i speak to mrs.khurana?"
"merra not again...ur calling after ages n being too formal with ur badi daadi ...even if i call ur not attending my calls"
"wt shall i do badidadi its all bcos of ur pote's"
"Meera i kno that dev n maan did mistake by shouting at u..n they were sry fr that but ur nt ready to meet them ...ur the oly sister fr them n aftr ur parents left this world all u have is me n ur brothers"
"daddi cool..am nt angry on them..its true that i was angry on them.but not anymore...all that i did was to sneak into bhai's room to take bhabhi's photo..i was away for xam during bhabhi death..but i wasnt fully convinced with wat u said so i hired for a detective..but ur two dumbo potte screamed at me as if i did a crime'"
"meer u kno how much dev was distresed by that time n maan ws worried fr dev.. so they both screamed at u saying u were all childish. .u even know that i have not even seen her face..dev is not allowing me to enter his room..all i know about ur bhabhi was her name is naintara... "
"ya exactly that is what i wanna prove them that am not a child so olyy am n mumbai working ..you know dadi no one knows my sur name too.am being all secret..even my best friend dont know my name all that she knows is i dont have anyone except my badi dadi's family."
"thats right dear..now everyone belives that you are not a child come back here beta"
"sure dadi ill come soon there.but i want to know something!!!Has Maan bhai has joined office???!"
"vaare vah meer beta dont say me this is the flash news of mumbai .atlast ur flirto bhai has joined office after black mailing him ..hw come u know that?"
"hayeee...then it would be too good if geet n maan bhai falls for each other"
Now dadi was confused.."beta who is this geet now?"
"actually dadi i called u to talk about this but i forgot it completely..geet is my best friend..when i came to mumbai n joined this office she was the one who was with me during all my times..but when my company was closed she had n me lost our job..she is the one on whom her family was dependent..so i suggested her to try fr kc..she asked me to accompany her but i didnt as u know the reason..i suggested her kc because i know she will be well paid and also will have no threats from male staffs..when i called her today i overheard the convo between maan bhai n geet i had an idea whether maan bhai could be controlled by geet.."
Before she could complete dadi interupted meera..
"meera i dont think maan will be..."
"uffoh dadi i know that..and am very concerned about geet..she has some family problems which she had nt even said me..so ill wish her only best..its that the way maan bhai shut his mouth for geet's comments made me feel so..now all that u need to do is chech whether there is some behaviour changes in maan bhai..if so then we could act as cupid for them..what say???"

"meer i dont think maan could act mature with a girl..if by any chance it happens ill be very happy atleast to see him settled in life"

"ok dadi nw am goin take care of u n my dumbo bhai's"

"take care of you also beta"

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"sir here is the draft i made on reading the project report" geet handed over the draft she prepared to maan..
Maan was now checking the plan which the dealers have asked for..he got the draft without looking in her eyes..Geet felt bad for what she said to him so she said
"sir am sorry for what happened in the morning"
He just replied her with a "hmmm"
She was now really feeling bad to see the most jovial n talkative person uttering a filler ...
"sirrr"
She realy dono why she is feeling uncomfortable to see him do quiet...
He snapped up his head n saw her using his narrowed eyes and nodded in acknowledgement..
"can i go to my cabin"
"do you wish me to drop you to your cabin in my arms" he asked quirking her eyebrows...
"uh????" she was confused with his question at first and then understood his teasing and ran to her room..

Though maan tried to be strict with her he wasnt able to see her in guilty consiousness and that too with her sorry face..He laughed imagining his facial expressions..

" you have done something to me babes am changing totally...me with files well this is going to be a big shock to my sexy"

Geet was scolding herself in the cabin.." darre u feel guilty fr that flirto..see how he flirts with you...remember geet revenge..ur here for the revenge"

when the day finally came to an end geet went to her home without informing maan..Maan doesnt want to put her in a uncomfortable situation so he never called her when he saw her moving out of cabin...

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When maan reached home it was late..Dev had already returned from office..what dadi n dev thought wad maan would have gone back to his party from office..

When maan entered home both of them wrte shocked to see him with files and discussing something in phone with adi ..

Dev n dadi was staring at each other..actually this is a sight normal to then but usually dev would carry files to home..

"maan do you think by anychance i have eye sight troubles"
Maan very well understood his dadi's question..
" now sexy dont do drama's...you are very well seeing me with files and your desire has come true..am also becoming like ur business man pote dev"
dev chuckled at the choice of maan's words..
" why this sudden change maan..all i tjought was adi is the one who will handle this project"
"don't you think i need to prove myself to her sexy"
daadi now understood that the one maan is refering to is meera's frirnd..she smirked at him and asked "who is that she?"
it was the same time dev also asked a question to maan"have u appointed a secretary champ"
maan absent mundedly said "geet" ..just saying her name made him smile...
Dev was confused with maan's reaction..dadi was hapoy that atlas some girl could change maan's attitude towards life in a single day...
Maan excused and went to his room saying he had work..
Dev sat near daddi in the couch and asked her " i was a bad husband but i had become a good brother haina daddi..??i think the decision of handing over this project was correct..he has become responsible.."
daadi sensed dev is getting emotional.she brushed his hair and said" you were a good husband, you are a good grandson n a good brother dev"
"no daddi i was never a good husband nor a good bro..i shouted on meera on that day because of me she left us..i was a bad husband.i had never given any spl attention to naintara..even after i had come here for business trouble i never called her back..she had only my temporary number which i used in hoshaipur..it would hav gt deactivated..once i enter my business world ill forget everything..after reaching london when i tried to call her i hadnt remembered her number.see how ironic it is...i remember my business associates number but not my wife's..she would have tried for my temporary num..
Atleast i should hav asked maan to bring her back here but alas i thought i should give her a grand welcome to her sasural..i thought her she would be waiting for me
but god has decided that she would never be happy with me thats why he had taken her from me..i can never live with this guilt dadi..when she had left this world she would have thought i had betrayed her na dadi..she would have felt i have used her ryt dadi???
If i had got her the same day here with me to km now i would have been blessed with a baby of 2 -3 years..but god had punished me for being bad..when i meet her in heaven would she belive me that i loved her dadi..would she forgive me???"
by now dev had completely broken..he had placed his heads on daddi's lap and was crying heavily..
daddi felt moisture in her eyes..she never thought his hard business man grandson would love someone to this level..she felt bad to see him broken this much but at the same time she was relived that after 4 years he is opening up his heart...
"True love doesnt know to doubt dev..dont wry naintara would have never thought wrong about u..she must have worried about u but never doubted u ...as far as meer is concerned she had forgiven you and will come back here soon..."
Dev sadly left out a chuckle "may be you are right dadi..my naintara is so pure that she would have never doubted on me..but what abt chotti n beeji they would have felt wrong about me nah???u know chotti loved naina more than me...she even warned me once saying if anything happens to her didu she would make me face the worst.."
Dadi laughed hearing this and said " so you had got saali wats her name?""
dev shrinked his brows and thought for a second and said " i told you na dadi am a bad husband see i dont even remember my sali name..she said me once but i forgot it..we will call her chotti..she would have felt i had betrayed her sis na dadi"
dadi doesnt know what to say so she kept numb..dev was keeping on blabering how bad he was and instantly fell asleep in dadi's lap...

NOTE:PLs ignore speling and grammar errors 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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dev is indeed bad husband whatever the reason but he was a bad hubby
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan working hard n seriously which
Is a shock to everyone. Geet ka jadu hi
Aisa hai. Maan wanted to be gud person
For Geet. But wat an irony the person
Who changed Maan for gud wants to
Destroy him.

Meera telling abt Geet n Maan to Dadima.
Its gud as we have now two cupids.
Dadima really surprised to see d hardworking
Pota

Dev telling his heart out to Dadima.
Fate separated them but Maaneet going
To reunite them.

Continue soon.

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