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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#861

Originally posted by: CravingKhana
RB a nice dedication to the "feelings" of the "other" women...they are as strong if not stronger and many even reach further in the moral compass to have thier love unrelinquished...sacrifice because they came second or that the object of thier feelings loves another...

Most times we are so involved in morally chasticing the "other" man/women we forget the intensity of thier feelings...

in your story i wonder if Arnav makes La his choice will Kushi be able to accept it as graciously/stoicly as La...

will La be able to enjoy her love...knowing Khushi is on the side lines ...will she compare Arnavs love for her to his love for Khushi as time passes will she look over her shoulders all the time...

Lavanya has chosen the harder path whatever the choice...her "love' seems to be one that is going to be asked of ...a giving one ...

That brought tears to my eyes, Tangy!

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#862

Sigh... I am in love ... With this writing style... Rockbarbie, you are making it more and more difficult for me to comment... Iam truly running out of words to express myself...be it La's feelings or Payal's... Or our loveable Arhi, you do absolute justice girl!!!!!

Mind blowing !!!!

Sigh...

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Vishavjeet

@vishav

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#863

Ohhh...that was so nicely written and beautifully described. I am in love with this FF...thanks for the PM.

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-SAM1445-

@-SAM1445-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#864

these three girls,khushi,La,Payal.all of them hv calm exterior but only they know what storm n pain they deal within themselves every single day...

i just love ur story telling way..looking forward to the next update

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simran

@crazymg.04

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#865

bang on khushi...she loves him😳

Beautiful update👏

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: RockBarbie

:=) Actually the girl wormed the truth out of his best friend and he blabbed. And the so called best friend even gave my phone number and I ended helping her writing a response letter back.

In the end, I was writing for both girl and the boy without either of them telling each other that they were taking help of same person and this went on for next three semesters. They finally told each other the "truth" behind their letters :=)

Butting in here but I kinda guessd the outcome...and the sureal part of it is this the tale that my dad repeated over the yrs...of a mate ...but that one ended in all sortsa angles...

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inajnar

@inajnar

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#867

I had to catch up and read from the interlude...

It was simply exotic..the flow of words the description of feelings ...simply amazing !!

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#868

ive read this update with mixed emotions!

sad for payal, she has lost her love and will have to live with it all her life!

angry at khushi, for not staying and clearing things with arnav but choosing to flee leaving behind so many broken hearts!

nevertheless the update was mind blowing!

really glad they decide to have a girl day out! maybe thats exactly wat they need to bond again!

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Frida

@Frida

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#869

Nice update!!

Loved that the girls are already getting along with each other forgetting the bygones. The recovery process is hard for everyone still the strong bonds between them is worth mending.

I admire your writing style a lot. You have given equal importance to every character which was really needed to understand everyone's pain.

Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the pm & also giving us 2 updates almost every day.

Waiting for the next chapter!