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arshiyakanishka

@arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Finally a little insight in their past.And that too such a beautiful one.

Both the letters,especially Arnav's was amazing and so well written.In few words they conveyed what Arnav and Khush meant to each other then and their dependence on each other.

Hope to see many more such peeks in their past.

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smile1412

@smile1412

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

Emotionally Overwhelmed !!!!! Beautiful !!!!!!!!!!!

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Will he be receptive to her making the first move? Just explaining why she ran away will not help. Sounds like she was duped in believing something that was not real. Somehow I think La will be her biggest ally in the process. Beautiful story.

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A_BA

@A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

Liked the idea of the interlude...it was very beautifully written. Arnav was such a sensitive loving young guy, no wonder he's been "dead" for seven years without her.

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

This update reminded me of the movie "Dear John" where savannah and john exchange letters over a period of time...John is stationed in a remote location by the U.S Army !!

That is nothing like this but just these letters reminded me of that ...

However after reading this update it makes me even more anxious as to what went wrong between them...they seem so in sync here ...and evidently they knew each other over a long period of time how did they reach where they are now???

At this stage of the story Arnav is leaving a much bigger impact on me ,,, than any other character.

You have made him so fascinating ... want to know more about him and his choices!

ps:take care RB !!

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Do you want to kill me with your writing??

Brilliant insight into their past.. ..

loved the letters..

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#607

I wish I was a teenager now..I would have surely copied Arnav's love letter and passed it to the object of my affection...

It's too good...even Khushis reply is more complex I would have to read again and try to comprehend..

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emistry

@emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#608

Wow they had such a beautiful start! It was a start of something special! I am glad you are writing about thier past!

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#609

Beautiful! The letters made me smile throughout. This is their beginning. In Khushi's note/letter there was a line that said they cancel out each others imperfections, and make a masterpiece. How beautiful. And true. I'd love to read more about the way they were. Thank you for this chapter :)