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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what just happened? so anjali had a secret child? or is it shyam had a child with sheetal? wow wow wow.

i couldn't comment on chapter 12 on time so I am doing that now...i feel so bad about payal's predicament. i just don't see how she can forgive and forget all the pain khushi's choice has put her through...i don't know where all the relationships will end on this FF but I am hoping for some sort of meaningful ending for the both of them (payal and khushi)
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Posted: 12 years ago
just when we think we r close, another twist!
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Posted: 12 years ago
arav s anjali's son?? interesting twist...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is one of the most powerful FFs I've ever read on this forum. I was trawling the Fan fics page to take a break from working non stop for the last 8 hours when I saw the title of your FF, Intrigued by this unusual title, I started reading it. It's just taken me about 40 mins to read the whole thing and I am so totally shaken up.

Each chapter has sucked me into successive vortices of grief sorrow, regret, anger, incomprehension, leading me to the bottom of it all where all I can feel is a deep, deep sadness for each and every person in the story.

Excepting ,of course, Anjali and Shyam- now that guy is a mystery. Is he the lynchpin that is holding it all? And she is even more cloyingly hateful than the Anjali in the show.

They're all trapped in the aftermath of the events, how far will the truth release them from this angst, I wonder?

Whatever be the gravity(!!) of the events of the past that led up to the disastrous day in all their lives, all that seems to pale in the face of each of their reposnses to it. Does the truth of the past even matter now?

In the midst of it all is the person who has triggered it all, who I can't decide deserves only sympathy or only indifference or neither.

The thing is, I can't decide what to feel for Khushi?!? Not falling instantly in love with Khushi, that even possible? This is the first time that has happened! But then I don't know the Khushi before- was she the pragmatist even then? What was she like, I wonder

What was Arnav like before? From the little we've seen of him he seems to have been a more relaxed person than the one he has become now.

The gulf between theThen and the Now seems like a huge chasm, an almost live creature that has bitten them all, leaving them with festering wounds and bruises that will need them to dredge out the love they had/have to heal one another. But it will never be what it was.



Well, this FF has me now its firm grip, I need to read the rest. Excellent story!

Oh wow, just read Chapter 13 after putting in my comments on the first 12 chapters! Now this revelation about Anjali and Shyam puts a new spin on the whole thing!

There is a child involved, but why do they need to hide this fact from the family. Well, at least it explains Anjali's behaviour and I will have to take back my description of her as being cloyingly hateful.

We need to know where Aakash is and if this was what Khushi had found out. Well, i am a bit gobsmacked! Terrific twist, RockBarbie! brilliant!

Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update!
I feel sorry for every character in this story. Each one of them have gone through so much but still fought for a better future.
This story leaves me all confused. I don't know whom to blame for this sad situation in everyone's lives.
Initially, I thought Shyam is the culprit, but after reading the last chapter it seems he is not evil here :)
I hope everyone finds peace & they all get along with Khushi.
Can't wait to read the next update!!
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
too many threads.. waiting it to get resolved..
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Posted: 12 years ago

I absolutely love the frequency of your updates! I really can empathize with Payal and agree with Garima, that it is kinda too late for Khushi to try and make amends. After 7 long years, she cannot just walk in and expect them to listen to her explanations, especially when they had suffered for something that is not their fault.

On the other hand, I believe Khushi does not know the amount of damage done to all and she is beginning to find out the magnitude of her actions. The restless guilt and overwhelming pain might just tear her up inside and may slowly take over her mind and soul which i doubt will leave till she tries to seek closure.

Edited by -Shalu- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
seems a lot of skeletons in Raizada mansion...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Indeed the story is getting more and more interesting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm guessing that's Anjali's child , and not Shyam's. After reading this, I realized that Shyam may actually not have been acting on his own all those years ago, maybe Anjali had something to do with it. He seems to love her a lot, and literally put his reputation on the line for her. But let's wait till things become clearer.

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