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Posted: 12 years ago

The best part of this story, of any story I love has always been how its characters are real but inherently good. I like to call it hope. And that is what I find shining through here

Absolutely loved Lavanya and Khushi's time at the orphanage. Time rarely changes but brings out the real person behind the mask you knew.

And the last part about traffic. Indeed, happens to me fairly regularly. And is it strange that my throat was constricted too just as much.

Scared he asks? Terrified, is more like it. Terrified but hopeful!

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Posted: 12 years ago

WE wear the mask that grins and lies,
It hides our cheeks and shades our eyes,—
This debt we pay to human guile;
With torn and bleeding hearts we smile,
And mouth with myriad subtleties.

It's by Dunbar..

Lavanya's comment made me think of this..

Finally they meet.. I think this FF should have been named Angst... more apt than anything else.. :):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have quite often found myself in the tough traffic situation, only difference is that it is me who takes my husband's hand and glides through the traffic, only he doesn't walk silently like Khushi and creates a ruckus giving me a long lecture about road safety. Given a choice he would happily remain on one side of the road for hours until traffic dies down.

I remember arnav mentioning to lavanya about taking to vegetarianism. Hypocrite. Khushi has never left him, has she?
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful chapter..afterall life and hope exist together...😉

thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This scene of Khushi and the traffic, is very familiar to me. I can relate to her, I am so terrified of crossing roads, that I wouldn't mind waiting for hours till I don't see a car coming.

I am glad Lavanya is trying to build a relationship with Khushi. I think they both need to learn a lot about each other. 7 years is a lot time, and people change with time, and sometimes situation forces them to.

I am glad Arnav is meeting with Khushi. I see a light shining in this mess. Am I wrong to believe that Khushi will finally reveal her secret.
Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it...hope they kiss and make up soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
you have described kushi's feeling beautifully lets see how the luncheon goes...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suma.2911


WE wear the mask that grins and lies,
It hides our cheeks and shades our eyes,
This debt we pay to human guile;
With torn and bleeding hearts we smile,
And mouth with myriad subtleties.

It's by Dunbar..

Lavanya's comment made me think of this..

Finally they meet.. I think this FF should have been named Angst... more apt than anything else.. :):):)



Lovely, lovely poem! Thanks for sharing...

And if you think when they meet they are gonna talk everything...come on... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
a very nice update...

Loved Arhi part... and i hope there is more left for this interaction...

Hey ya it happened with me once... it was the time when i went to US for the first time... i was running late for the restaurant my hubby was waiting in and had to cross the road to reach there... My condition was just like Khushi.. and since i was very impatient, tried to cross the road at the wrong signal.. a car stopped just milimetres away and the driver shouted - " Are you indian, Lady?"... GOD!!! that was sooo embarassing..😕

Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago

The kindness and generosity from Arnav & Lavanya would probably make her hate herself more than Payal's bitter words... its like when you let your parents down and all you want is for them to scream at you. Instead when they forgive and ask you to cheer up, you despise yourself in that moment. I felt my throat constricting when she asked Khushi to call her La...

Traffic.. oh yes. But I have actually gone and played traffic police twice; the traffic in Bombay is pathetic but people do follow traffic rules, it is easier to guide. Took me about 15 minutes but in the end it saved time and energy for everyone. The first time, this man had an issue with a girl asking him to wait for the other cars to pass; I did not have to do anything about it, the rest of the people there put him in his place :D

Scared? Hell yeah!

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago

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