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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#311

wow! that was amazing.. he doesnt even want to know wat it is.. he just wants to know is if she wud have told him if he had asked then..

outta the world!

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

If only Arnav had asked questions back then...he wouldn't have had to ask those questions now...and be living under such painful misconceptions about what was happening...

Amazing part...as always.

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thesis

@thesis

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Not knowing wats happening around is probably the most difficult problem for any humanheing cos a solution isnthennhard to cum by wow splendid job arnavs most basic thought came into light i guess we felt sympathy towards kushi cos she is the main protaganist but the real victim is arnav well done man sumtimes its difficult to understand a man wud b this affected but u played the emotions so beautifully strong yet subtle am glad he is not giving in so quicckly

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

my hear went out to him in this one...

wonderful👏

thanks for pm...

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Wow! I just read all the updates so far. You have a real talent for writing and making the emotions come through with your words. I really want to see how move this story forward!

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Dear God, poor guy. Going through so much. Your each update leaves me with a heavy heart.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Beautiful. Just that. You words have magic. They force me to believe that the pain is mine, just as much as it is his. Stuck in a rut and scared that the rut is nothing but your mind's imposition on yourself. Brilliantly written flash into Arnav's mind

Well done you. More and some more.

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aysh05

@aysh05

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#318

That was beautifully written, ch 10 showed Khushi's pain in the aftermath of her decision and 11 showed Arnav with questions that he held on to for the last 11 years. This is not a happy go lucky story... This is a story that reflects on real life emtions... I look forward to more (& frequent ;) ) updates.

Thank you for the pms

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#319

wonderfully written of arnav's pov...

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#320

He doesn't want to know the reason afraid to know spinner his life so badly.. He was living somehow.. Will he able to breathe after knowing what made the love of his life to run away..

I really hope khushi took this decision based on something that makes sense even if Shyam lied to her.. I hope.. It is so scary to even think..

Beautifully written part