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sslmay11

@sslmay11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Good one. I wanted to know from arnav's point of view...now Akash ...who's he???? respect for lavanya is increasing more with Each update so far... But arnav it should be Khushi...anyways..I just want to go by ur way...loving it ...

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supriya

@Dreamy123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

thank u so much for fast update :) really heart wrenching ...i know khushi is at fault but cant see them like this...update soon thanks once again :)

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

First off I am extremly thankful for you for sending me pm :) I have so much sympathy towards basically every person that has been affected in a negative way by khushis departure including Khushi herself. There's just so many question in everyone's minds. I feel like everyone's just so confused. They all need to just clear the air. So does Arnav think Akash and Khushi had a thing going on... Thanks for two updates in a day :))

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katunkka

@katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

rnav perspective.thats what I was waiting for.now I want to hear khushi reason

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nee

@march2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

so khushi was already disturbed before wedding n he ignored it...well,i believe maybe he was too immense in his own happy world to care about others

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Poor Arnav! Khushis one mistake made lots people life up and and the important part is that back then it was not a mistake from her point. She should have talk to Arnav and he should asked her question when he knew that something was bothering her! That was he mistake !
Where did Akash go and what happened to him? Arnav what to give so much to Lavaniya for what she did for him and Payal but he cant give the only thing she want from him. Arnav should go and get some answer from khushi so maybe they all can move on.

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Wallowing in guilt, they both are, aren't they? But seven years have gone by and a life has been lost. All the what ifs have no meaning and the wound that have been caused by decisions taken without any discussions is still raw, may heal with time but the scars are to remain.

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#308

OMG where akash come form

khushi is back now where is akash

Arnav and lavanya

may arnav choose her but first i want to know khushi reason behind

arnav wanted to know what disturb her but unable to decide

now when she ready to give answers

but now it really does matter

three lives already on dark what will happen after she come back

no one get nothing except regret i think

i still want to know why khushi take such drastic step just before her marriage

Your every chapter leaves me with pain

can u just update soon another chapter

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#309

What is this ? I have been gone all of 48 hours and you've given us, what 5 updates! Oh, I have missed this thread and hope it has missed me too :P

Chapter 7: Ohh, friends. They say its the most beautiful relationship, the love there is truly unconditional. I have such respect for Lavanya, here I thought she would hate Khushi for returning and crushing any remains of the hopes she may have had for her & Arnav. But here she is, breaking down the barriers with a simple hug and an "Its okay". Beautiful :)

Chapter 8: While I understand life is not about black and white, I generally find myself sympathizing with one side more easily than the other. This story is an exception, my heart weeps equally for both Arnav & Khushi.. and what their lives have come to. One cannot even say if a neat closure will bring them any peace... I agree with Kalyaani, the song "Tere Bina Zindagi Se" (Aandhi) is very, very apt here.

Chapter 9: Normalcy is the most underrated thing ever; a simple dinner with family and friends, laughing at silly jokes, a teasing look here, a loving smile there, a warm touch from a sister. What wouldn't she give to have all that back ? Shyam... he is responsible for so much misery...wonder what will happen now

Chapter 10: These characters remind me of Waiting for Godot; especially Lavanya who is waiting for Godot - for Arnav to reciprocate her feelings. It is true what you said about forced discipline - someone drowning in such misery and guilt is bound to go astray and just lose his or her mind if they don't do something to keep it together - they find solace in the abstract concept of time and routine - always.

Chapter 11: Arnav is swimming in an ocean full of What Ifs and If Only-s.. what a terrible place to be in. He is looking for answers, just not the ones Khushi thinks he wants. These are two lost souls and I hope they find some solace. There is hope for them, but cannot say the same for Lavanya. And whats with Aakash?

Your writing has this seamless flow to it - it goes from emotional to contemplative to abstract to tragic to cathartic with such ease, I just enjoy reading it and always want more.

PS - Would love to see some more of Suman :)