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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel91

oh good plz...save her and her child...poor arjun...😔...

ohhh humm me to prayer..


shree was so gud...sahi to keh raha hai...riya muake par chuka maar lo par apne arjun sir ke saath...😉



Moke pe choka...hahahhhaa realy cool dialog dr, thanks dr for liking n commentig...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u so much for liking n commentig dr..
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART=9
"ye halki halki havayen kuch gunguna rahi hai..
kyun teri khamoshi kuch bata rahi hain"


SCENCE-PRESENT-
SANJEVANY HOSPITAL-
.
Arjun sit outside oT on a bench ,His eyes is closed..
Sameer sit near him,
Sameer got one call so he left there for few minute,
.
(tabhi ek lady vahan ati hai)
.
congratulation mr acp arjun rawte,Tum jaisa chahate they,akhir aaj vahi ho raha hai,
yahan udas kyun baide ho tumhen to khushiya manani chahiye,
tum yahi chahte they ke riya tumse hamesha ...(the girl stop in mid)
Arjun clenched his feet,
After taking pause for few minute,Girl again say..
kyun meri baaton ka bura lag raha hai,tum to yahi chahte they na riya tumhare life se hamesha hamesha ke liye chali jaye,
aaj tumne use ese halat main pahuncha diya hai,
vo or uska bachha aaj jindagi or moot se lad rahe hai,
(arjun stood that bench n wanna to go)
but she stoped him,
kyun kya huya mr arjun rawte sach kadwa laga..
.
Chup ho jao tum or ye kya bakbas ker rahi hoon..
mana ke riya ke condition thik nahi ,uska opation chal raha hai,
thats not a meen aysha tum us baat ke liye arjun ko blaime karo..
.
she tured n saw sameer standing there,
.
after atending call,sam come back n saw ayesha..
(jo arjun ko riya ke condition ka jimedar dahara rahi the)
u r responsible for this mr acp arjun rawte,
how culd sam stands quite there,
he shouted back to defend his frs,

Sameer hold ayesha hand n dragged her outside the hospital,
Arjun heart fill with more guilt,aeysha word enclosed his heart,
(BG music)

mujhase ye jindagi lagti hai ajnaavi..
Chav bhi ,dhup bhi,
hai her pal ye nayee,
phir se andhere cha gaye ,
khoye ujale ke kiran,
kal rahon main phul they aaj hai kanton ke chubhan..
mujhase ye jindagi lagti hai ajnavi.."

.
arjun closed his eyes


Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

His mind goes to past memory..
Flash-
befor riya wanna to say..
Aunty cut her in mid,
Au-are ager mere golo ko tum pasand aa gaye ho,
to mujhe koe problem nahi,
.
Riya wishper slowly in shree ears..
Ri-yr shree do somthing,ye aunty to hath dho ker mere piche pad gaye..
shree in teasing way..
Sh-no warry ri bahoot jald he hath sookh jayenge,tab. to tumhen koe problem nahi hogi na,
.
golo eyes fixed on riya..
he continusely admiring her from top to bottum..
she feel bit uncomfortable..
Ri-shreee kuch karo vo kab se meri tarf ghur raha hai,
ager mujhe gussa aa gaya to main ek tight punch de dungi..
sari hava nikal jayegi es golo ke..
riya making fake smile on her face n look toward shree
but shree is gigling..
riya hits on shree legs with her legs..
Sh-Ahhh..ri ye kya ker rahi ho,
Auty-are tumhen kya hya..
Sh-Ahh (stil pain) voo riya i meen meri fr apke golgape se uff sorry aunty tung slip ho gaye..
mera matlab hai,aoke golo se shadi nahi ker sakti,
Au-kyun kya kharabi hai mere golo main,
Sh-aunty apke golo main koe kharabi nahi,per meri fr uff kya bataon aunty bechari,
Riya again hit on shree legs ..
Sh-Ahhh...
(comes close to riya n wishper )ye baar baar panv main kyun maar rahi hoo,
bike nahi hoon,jo panv maar ker baar baar start ker rahi hoo,
vo kya hai na auty apne poochane main thodi der ker di.
Aun-matlab.?
riya also looking anquirly,what was shree wanna to say.?

Sh-matlab ye aunty meri frke shadi ho chuki hai,
golo, riya n aunty r shocked
Au-per ese dekh ker lagta nahi.?
riya giving a confuse look.
Sh-vo kya hai na,hummm
(shree thinking now what he said)haan aaj kal ke ladkiya..kahan en sab main bishwash rakti hai,
sindur lagana mangalsutra pehana ye sab to purani baaten hai,
.
Kyun riya sahi keh raha hoon,
Riya was shocked she just nod her head n give a light smile



Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Au-achha ager ye shadi shuda hai to esake pati najer nahi aa rahe..
kahan ye vo aye nahe tumhare sath..
Ri-aunti vooo..
sundenly shree shouted..
Riya vo dekh arjun sir,
Riya eyes fix on arjun,
Arjun wear black color sute..
he looks more handsome ..
All girls present in the function..gossping about him..
1g-waoo kya cool hai...
2g-he is so hottt..
kitana hansome hai,
yahe kash mera bf hota.
.------
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he enters in the hall,looks here n there,opened his two coat butten..
finaly arjun notice riya standing with shree..
arjun marched toward riya..
Riya eyes still fix on arjun,
without blinking she is looking him,a smile that was hidden inside her heart comes out her face..
Aunty n golo notice his smile n graze..
They saw one tall handsome gud looking guys ..
unki taraf aa raha tha..
Au-ohh to ye hai tumhara pati,akhir ahsa kya hai es main,
Chalo golo yahan se..
both mother n son left that place..
Ar-angrly..riya ye sab kya hai,
Ri-sir vo maine kuch nahi kiya vo aunty ne..
Ar-ohh just shut up riya
Shree was to defend her..
But arjun stop him,
arjun tightly hold riya's hand n dragged her in one corrner,
Ar-ye kya chal raha hai riya,
main ir tumhara pati,
maine ek din tumhen apni bibi kya keh diya,
tumne use sach samajh liya,
had hoti hai riya ..
per ye tumhare samajh main nahi ayega,
kitani baar kaha hai maine door raho mujh se ..per tum,
arjun tightend his hand grip..
Ri-Ahh sir mujhe dard ho raha hai,plz leave my hand..
Arjun looks angrly once time again..
n give her last warring just stay away his,
Riya eyes get moised,one drop fall on her eyes
arjun removes his hold,he move his hand wanna to remove her tear on her cheeks but stop in mid..

TBC-
1-ariya dance in flash..
2-doc ask him her all medical report..
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So kaisa tha today part mast ya bore..
i m waitng ur feed back




Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it yaar just awesome

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Posted: 12 years ago
great update as always :) loved it
how dare aisha insult arjun like that? is she riya's sister?
poor riya she was stuck between aunty and golo
love the way shree was teasing her
golgape 😆
loved shree's dialogue "bike nai hoon jo pan maar ker baar baar start ker rahi ho"🤣
shree told that aunty riya is married
arjun insulted riya again
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it,piya di.par ariya ki shadi and all that kab hua?i hope soon u will revel.and thanx for u good luck.cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it.. kalki case was in my most fav list.. u made it more good.. loved it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update...
why is aisha blaming arjun? did something happen??
flashback rocked as usual...
omg shree's bike wala dialogue was very funny...
ooo arjun again told riya to stay away from him...
precap is interesting...
continue soon...

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