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Posted: 12 years ago

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ok...
I will updated after today's episode...
But after some time...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepie2244

It was seriously mind-blowing.. awesome... hawww he hurt himself by looking at maanvi in pain... plz dear continue soon...


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thank u dear...
I will surly continue...
as i get time i will updated tonight...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-25
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virat just stood there angrily without giving attention on his wound..as he heard sound of door opening he walked towards door..
Dr saw him imigeatly walked towards them..
Dr-as he come near to them-Maine bandaged kar Di hai..cut chhoti hai lekin deep hai..Maine unhe pain killer de diya hai..lekin agar woh thodi Der aram karne k baad yaha se jaye to bahetar hai...
V-take relief break nd nodded..
Dr-as she looked at his hand-sir..aap k hath me bhi chot hai..
V-looking at his hand-its okay..chhotisi hai..
Dr-plz..aap aiye main aapko bandage kar deti hu..
Virat looked at maanvi's room..dr noticed his worried face..
Dr-don't worry..unke saath do nurses hai under..aap aiye..
V-looked at Dr..bcz she was little older aged virat can't say no-ok..
Nd he left with them..
After some time he come towards her after his bandaged nd also he cleared her all bills..he placed his hand in his pocket bcz he didn't want to saw her..as he opened door saw maanvi saw not in room..he got worried..he hurriedly come out from room nd saw both nurses come towards him..
V-shouted-kaha thi tum dono?..aur maanvi kaha hai?
N1-woh sir..humne mem ko rokne ki bahot koshish ki lekin woh maan hi nahi rahi thi..
N2-woh jabrajasti hospital se Jane ki jid kar rahi thi..
V-angrily-aur tum dono ne use jane diya..use chot aai thi..
N2-i m sorry sir lekin woh maan hi nahi rahi thi..
V-angrily-meri kaha manti hai..he whisper angrily..-angrily-achcha..abhi woh kaha hai?
N1-ji..hum aapko yahi batane aye hai..woh hospital k bahar abhi nikali hai..
V-angrily-bahar?..u idiots..tum me se ek to uske saath rahe sakta tha..
N-both-sorry sir..
V-sorry my foot..he shouted angrily nd rush out from there..
He rush out from hospital corridor nd rush towards back door..he just come out from hospital door nd moved his gaze around for her..his eyes stops as he saw her slowly walking towards main road..he saw her holding her stomach nd his palm reached at her waist on her wound..she looking here nd there for something..
V-angrily shook his head nd run towards her..
Maanvi looking for taxi or auto..she was worried abt sameer..even her phone also left in her car..may be nisha nd her family worried for her..he abt to turned to other side of road she feel sudden pulled back by some one..she scared first..as she turned she saw virat holding her by her hand both side with deadly angry look..he was fuming in anger..
V-angrily..holding her hand tightly-kya karne ki koshish kar rahi ho?
M-try to free herself-virat kya kar rahe ho..chhodo..
V-angrily-main?..tum kya kar rahi ho?..jab nurse ne kaha aram karna hai to kyu aai bahar?
M-virat..tumne bandage karvane ko kaha ho gaya na..ab mujhe apne ghar jana hai..still struggling with his grip..
V-haa to mujhse kahe deti..ek baar mere ane ka wait to karti..
M-kyu karti main tumhara wait?..aur waise bhi woh mere liye pareshaan ho raha hoga..she said hurriedly without thinking..bt imigeatly she realize what said..she gulped as she saw his reaction..
V-loose his grip on her hand nd rolled his eyes angrily nd then looked at her angrily-sahi kaha tumne..kyu karogi mera wait?..jab tab nahi kiya to ab kyu karogi..he said passinotly..she can feel pain in his voice nd his eyes..
V-continue-aur ek raat late pahochogi to uski halat ki chinta hai tumhe..kabhi meri ki?..kaise itne saal Maine har raat kaise kati hogi?..again his passinote word make her weak..but she compose herself..
M-looking away-mujhe is bare me aur koi baar nahi karni..mujhe abhi ghar jana hai bas..
V-thik hai..lekin meri car me..
M looked at him..
V-before she say something picked her up in his arms imigeatly..nd walked towards his car..he opened car door nd make her carefully sit in car nd he also sit in car..
He drove his car towards her apartment..in whole journey passed with silence..virat thinking abt her words nd misunderstood her word woh..with viren..nd here maanvi thanked for her luck bcz today she almost speak abt sameer..she also knew that he misunderstood sameer's place with viren..bt she didn't feel to current him bcz of his misunderstood he stopped to be possasive nd may be ready for leaving her to her house..
They reached at apartment nd as car stopped without looking at him maanvi come out from car by her self..she abt to walked bt stopped to heard him bt not turned..
V-car..tumhari car kal yaha pahoch jayegi..
M-is baar ummid hai kisiko chot nahi pahochegi?..she knew if she said no for his favor he never agreed nd she didn't want argue now..
V-anger controlled-koshish karunga..aur ha..kal tumhara kam nisha kar legi..tum sidhe raat ko reception k liye aa sakti ho..rest logi..agar vaha kam karti dekhai di to mere room me rest karna padega..so..decision urs..with this he moved his car from there..maanvi turned nd saw his car going back..tears slips from her eyes..she cannot believe..her life getting more complicate..nd then walked towards her apartment...
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update.. Hayee Virat gusse mein bhi kitna care karta hai Manvi ka .. He thought Manvi is worried about Viren.. He was hurt by her words.. Manvi didnt notice his wound.. Excited to know what will happen in the reception.. Loved it <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb..~! When will virat find out that she is worried abt a kid not Viren...Waiting for the next...~!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...itna gussa karta he usase kahi jyada pyar karta he usase...awww his misunderstood her words...waiting fr reception...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome... want virman together soon... plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update kushi...really loved it...i don't noe but i feel bad for virat...😭...looking forward for next update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

Awesome update kushi...really loved it...i don't noe but i feel bad for virat...😭...looking forward for next update...😊


thank u so much...
In next update...something unexpected happened...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LV88


awesome... want virman together soon... plzzz


thanks...
Woh saath hi hai...

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