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Posted: 12 years ago
ufff kya precap haii ya
Intense wala love haan
Ab manvi karegi kya
Pls jaldi update karo mujhe janna hai virat ka pagalpan kahan tak jaa sakta hai ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maanvi gotten scared with his passinote nd crazy eyes..she feel really scared..she never face this type of situation..she believing in love but she never want to go in relation..she has her own dreams..she didn't want to loose her focus..nd now this time..one guy stood in front of her and not asking..but demanding her to accepting his love..
Virat saw her looking at him quietly..he again lost in her beauty..he forgot all his anger with her one look..his face takes smiling expression in place of anger..
He leaned towards her..she get scared nd try to escape but he stopped her by blocking her ways by his hands..
V-looking at her passinotly-tumhe pata hai life me paheli bar mujhe barish achchi lagne lagi hai..life me paheli bar main kisi ladki k saath itne khada hu..aur life me paheli bar mujhe kisi se pyar hua hai..aur akhri baar bhi..aur virat apni life me Jo bhi karta hai dub k karta hai..aur mujhe chahiye woh bas chahiye..he said politely but passinotly..
She didn't knew why but his words affecting her..she turned her face away before she loose her sense..
V-aur sach yahi hai ki tumse pyar karta hu..aur tumhare muh se bhi yahi sunna chahta hu..
Maanvi closed her eyes with this nd pussed him back forcefully..he get surprised nd looked at her with anger..
M-lekin main tumse nahi karti..samaj main nahi ata tumhe?..she said angrily with this her bag fall on floor..
M-ab sidhe se ye darvaza kholo..varna tumhare liye bilkul bhi sahi nahi hoga..she said angrily but still scared from inside..
With hearing all this virat got more angry..he loose his control on himself..he come close to her nd held her by her hand pulled her towards him forcefully..she surprised nd shocked with this..he pulled her more close by wrapping his arms around her waist..during this she didn't realize when her dupatta fall on floor..she try free herself but with this he tighted his grip around her waist..
M-with trying to pussing him back-kya kar rahe ho chhodo mujhe..she getting really scared..she looked at him..he looked red in anger..he pussed her back nd pinned her against the side wall..
V-leaning towards her-angrily-dhamkane ki koshis kar rahi ho?
With looking his passion nd madness maanvi get scared..she pulled herself back nd stick herself with wall..virat removed his hand from her waist nd placed on either side of her..
V-come close to her face-shayad tum bhool rahi ho ki hum yaha library me akele hai..aur ab tak tum mujhe itna to samajh hi gai hogi ki mujhe Jo chahiye uske liye main kisi bhi had tak ja sakta hu..
Hearing his words maanvi's heart beat raising..
V-aur mujhe dhamkane ki koshis bhi mat karna varna tum soch bhi sakti ki agale hi pal main tumhare saath kya kar sakta hu..samjhi?..he warned her..
With hearing this her heart beat skipped..she gulped continuesly..he looking at her without blinking which gave her horrible feelings..she knew she trapped from all sides..she saw his eyes looking her all over..she feel warm water slip down from her cheeks..tears slips from eyes..
M-teary eyes-tum a..asa..k..kuch nahi karoge..?..she asked innocently but still scared
virat come out from her beauty with her innocent voice but her teary voice crussed him..he saw tears in her eyes..she breathing heavily in fear..he imigeatly stepped back..maanvi place her hand near her neck in place of her dupatta..virat see her crying..he feel horrible to see her in tears..he take step towards her which make her again scared..he stopped there..
V-calmly-relax..mera irada tumhe rulane ka nahi tha..plz stop crying..
She surprised with it..
V-rona badh karo main tumhe ase nahi dekh sakta..
M-hardly say with wiping her tears-mujhe..jana hai..plz..
V-thik hai..lekin ek shart pe..
Maanvi looked at him confusing
v-don't worry..bas ek bar bol do u love me..
M-main tumhe janti tak nahi hu..
V-to Jan jaogi..he said loving..okey..i understand..problem kya hai?..koi boyfriend hai?
M-nahi..main bas apni study pe focus karna chahti hu..she said truth him directly
v-okey..to karo na..main tumhe kabhi apne focus se hatne k liye nahi kahunga..main bas ye chahta hu ki tum mujhse pyar karo..sirf mujhse..
She saw two phases of him..one time loving..understanding nd second time angry nd selfish..
She looked down..
M-i need time..she want to first out of this..
V-thik hai diya..na ek din..na week na month..main tumhe ek saal ka waqt deta hu..nd i promis is ek saal me main tumhe kabhi meri vajehse uncomfortable feel nahi hoga..jitna soch na hai..janna hai Jan lo..aaj se thik 1 saal baad mera college khtm ho jayega..London music institute jane se pahele tumse agale saal aaj hi k din milunga..aur tab mujhe jawab chahiye..
He picked her dupatta nd bag nd give her..he opened the door nd abt to leave but stopped nd turned towards her..
V-passinotly-aur ha jawab ha hi hona chahiye..ye 1 saal main kaise bhi tumse dur rahelunga lekin is bich mera patience ka test mat lena..kisi aur k aas-paas dikhna bhi mat..varna..nd he left behind shocked her..
FLASH BACK END...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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IN PRESENT...
VIRAT DRIVING THE CAR ND LOSTS IN HER THOUGHT... HIS CAR PASSING FROM MALL... JUST THEN HE SAW MAANVI CROSSED THE ROAD.. HE PUSSED THE BREAK FORCEFULLY... ND SAW HER ENTERED IN MALL ALONE...
HE TURNED HIS CAR ND PARKED IT...
HE COME OUT FROM CAR ND RUSH INSIDE THE MALL...
HE ENTERED IN MALL ND SEARCHING FOR HER... HE LOOKS FOR HER HERE ND THERE...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

ufff kya precap haii ya
Intense wala love haan
Ab manvi karegi kya
Pls jaldi update karo mujhe janna hai virat ka pagalpan kahan tak jaa sakta hai ;)


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i already updated...
I hope u liked it...
Nd its just starting...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Electricity mata pls khushi ka mob jaldi re charge kar do...mere jine marne ka sawal he...plz plz plz


u r really sweet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khushuuu love u ya ...
Har baar kya kamaal ke updates dete ho ya ...mein to hairan hi reh jati hun ...
Awesome fab great update ...
Different shades of virat posessive loving caring yet selfish in love
Kinda hate kinda love him

Bechari manvi to phas gayi na ..ab karegi kya akeli reh jayegi virat ke posessiveness ke waje se

And precap finally present ka kuch to pata chalega
Maza aane wala hai
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was fab...manvi reallyyy married
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Posted: 12 years ago
Damn awesome...1 yr time to take decision...wowww...waiting for faceoff after this long time cont soon n give precap
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh khushi... how are u able to do this everytym... everytym i read ur stories, i fell in love wid them... i loving this deewana pagal possessive aashiq types virat... love each n every word u wrote... love u for such a passionate update... keep rocking...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

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Khushuuu love u ya ...
Har baar kya kamaal ke updates dete ho ya ...mein to hairan hi reh jati hun ...
Awesome fab great update ...
Different shades of virat posessive loving caring yet selfish in love
Kinda hate kinda love him

Bechari manvi to phas gayi na ..ab karegi kya akeli reh jayegi virat ke posessiveness ke waje se

And precap finally present ka kuch to pata chalega
Maza aane wala hai


thank u so much...
Yes he was possasive... But as time he cares her a lot... He was not bad guy... Bt he was jiddi... With his loving things...

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