Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 6)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1031

When you updating next??!! Please do it soon!!

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anushja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1032

what an ending aweeesssooommmeee...

thanku for the pm

please write another ss or an ff

u are totally gifted

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kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1033

Chapter 27:

I am so glad that khushi confessed her love for arnav before they got married.😊

Simple and sweet declaration which sounded like music to arnav.

But the best part of this update was arnav's declaration of love for khushi. Your writing there was just fabulous. 👏

The other thought that strikes me is that this story will soon be coming to an end.😔

Liza

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kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1034

Chapter 28:

Awww...that scene in the beginning was so cute.

Arnav and khushi married life was described oh so cutely had a crazy looking grin on my face as i was reading it...

So papa raizada will want to keep his daughter under lock and key...😈

Papa ji let the children enjoy life for some time Harvard jane mein abhi bahut daer hain...

SO ASR is still bothered by Akash wonder what fate awaits Mr. Roy.

Liza

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kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1035

Chapter 29:

I loved the way Arnav broke the news about his accident to khushi.

Khushi reaction to the news was as expected.

OHHH so the whole Roy parivaar is there...aab tumahari kher nahi.

Ahhh the hug 😊 mrs. roy and mamma's puchdi must have indeed been shocked to see this.

Shatir dimaag of Arnav is at whork...Good so he realises that its mama roy who was responsible for khushi's low morale.

Wonder now how he will take revenge.

Liza

P.S: Hey i was just wondering Arnav and khushi's marriage was not announced and if during the accident khushi never left arnav's side and given that there was lot of media how come nobody commented on the lady who was next to the Mr. Raizada...

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chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1036

Ai yay yai!!!

This was the BEST thread!!! And the previous one too!!

But this thread, especially the last update stole the show!

Wow!!!

*onto the last thread now*

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1037

wow amazing

arshi r married now..🥳

sooo romantic

loved the arshi's moments..

arnav's best two hours..

fantastic,, the way you write out arnav's journey of becoming a family man in just two hours..lovely..❤️

arshi's convo on adya was holarious..🤣

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foreversarun3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1038

awww ch 27 was sooo beautiful...they finally confessed 😊😊😊

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foreversarun3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1039

Ch 29 was awesome...im glad Arnav finally knows about that dinner night. 😊

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aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1040

Finally they're married and loved the face off with Roys.
Manorama Raizada had to bite her words and ill behavior for Khushi is now Mrs. Raizada!!!!
It's good that Khushi has now told Arnav about that dinner in detail. And don't we know that Arnav changes into ASR mode for his own private world in minutes. Now Manorama will feel exactly the cold fury of ASR.
I love how you naturally brought romance in their marriage life in simple words, it was beautiful.