Arhi SS - Best Friends, in a twisted way... (Ch-10 A)

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Disha

@dishashah4176

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

gr8 update arnav sneaked into her room twice with once payal cathching thm n thn to see wht has hppnd to khushi coz she wasnt returning his calls bt who would tell him it was his thoughts tht made her preoccupied hehe u r gone kkg

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Okay.. I'm here.. Wait for it. Wait for it..

Loved.

IT!!!!!!!!!

I was having a really down day, pulled with month-long Sem finals, and this really lifted my mood!!

Aww.. she was so busy in day-dreaming, she missed 17 calls!!!! And his very good decision to sneak into Khushi's house - I loved! I like your Payal, spunky, fun and a good, real sister. Arey, the teasing! Not fair, not fair. Lavanya and Aakash are adorable too!

I just loved it, loved it, loved it!!

Can't wait for what's gonna happen now!! Your exams are over, I hope? Update soon!!

Love,

Mav

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aaru.aradhya

@aaru.aradhya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

awesome update

loved d possessive arnav

so payal knows abt arshi

he again sneaked into her room

thanks 4 d pm

continue soon

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

i normally do not like first person narrations in FF but yours is an exception...You have written so well that I have stopped noticing that it is first person...there is something about the way you write that somehow conveys the overall picture while still talking from Khushi's perspective...this is a job well done...take pride girl...because this is not really easy...

I loved both the sneak-in scenes...now cant wait to read ch-8😊

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

loved it

payal is hilarious - being snappy and telling them off for hiding and sneaking and then telling him stay an hour and enjoy😆

looking forward to the next bit

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

I read, re-read again and again. I loved it. It is an exciting story. Jealous Arnav is so adorable.
I loved the part where he takes her to their first date. Oh and also when he said I love you Khushi :) Aww!! I could just see the whole thing happening in front of me.
She was day dreaming and missed 17 calls. Ofcourse he would be angry and sneak into her house. I love the sneaking scene. Its quite romantic.
So now that am tuned to this story I am going to send you buddy req and wait for the next chap.
P.S I hope you are well enough now and exams were good. 😊

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@-Sparsh-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

wow!

alrdy in luv wid diz ff.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

he didnt but he did
sharam nahin aati inhe
man that was fun for sure
and that was real fun too
he sneaked into her room twice in two days
and also when her family is there
not to forget they got caught by payal
though she didnt say anything
awww they sure teased her right
man arnie did you just sneak in when she was half undressed
oh dear this could get fun for sure
wow things sure are spicing up man
and it continues
bless they are so cute together
cheers for pm