Arhi FF: Tangent Worlds. New Ch-6 Updated, pg-16. 25/11/13. New!

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

welcome back

another amazing update

thanks for the pm

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Awesome chapter and written beautifully.

I don't understand why you did't want to write this story anymore

There is so much potential and its very different and it's going to be very interesting.

Poor Payal has to do this to survive' will be interesting to know how she ended up in a brothel.

Khushi has come to look for her sister and got untangles with ASR as soon as she arrived and if i say that the first meeting was ivory unusual will be an understatement.

Will be waiting eagerly for the next update. Please continue soon.

Thanks for the PM.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

I just found this.

It shocks me that a father can just wash his hands of his raped daughter, even with the knowledge that she might be alive, for the family honour. It shocks me that society would demand it and place the blame at the feet of the woman, even though she's a victim. Without Khushi, Payal would be a sentenced to a life in that hell hole that you showed us a glimpse of...what would Shashi think if he knew where his daughter was and how she was suffering? Would he walk away? Khushi

Arnav, as always is intriguing...but he seems to holding himself together to his some pain that his siblings perhaps cannot. Why is Aakash like that? I'm also curious to see if Shyam gets the seal of approval...and if he deserves it...

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

This was shocking. Had sashi not cared for the society, Payal may not have become jhunki. I am already feeling that this is going to be one amazing story but a veery difficult one to write. The blatant cruelty of the flesh business, shocks me, unsettles me, makes me very restless.

I couldn't very much understand the feeling that passed through arnav when he saw khushi exit the station. Frankly, the little charm that arshi generated with their first encounter was taken away brutally by payal's plight.

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penrith

@penrith

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

new to your story... please continue.. it is far too good to leave

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Chamkili77

@Chamkili77

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

New to this story...quiet tough to take in what happened to Payal but guess that is the truth in India. You get raped, you are the victim but even your own family refuses to support you. Hate this attitude .

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Srija Singh

@srija.singh04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: faree
welcome back

another amazing update

thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot for the compliment, its because of such amazing readers that I write.
Btw, who exactly are you welcoming back, TW or me... coz I was never gone dear😊

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anonyasr

@anonyasr

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Glad you are continuing. Payal's situation is tragic. Too sad.

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

awesome update
finally khushi met arnav
why rape victim has to suffer for entire life when fault is not hers
even your own family and friends intstead of been with herthey choose to not support her and try to avoid
i hate this type of mentality
loved your update and well written
well done dear
keep it up
waiting for next one