Arhi FF: Tangent Worlds. New Ch-6 Updated, pg-16. 25/11/13. New!

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

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So sorry about my late comment! I actually read the chapter twice. Your writing style always fascinates me. Great update!

Very different storyline and I am anxious to find out about Payal & what has exactly happened with her. She linked with Akash in any way??

Loved the way Khushi & Arnav met. There was a magical instant awareness In their meeting. Looking forward to their next encounter.

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago

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mem1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

This chapter was way more satisfying to me. There was a lot of progress.
I really feel sad for Sumeet, but then we all know Khushi cannot go back to him.
I am glad Buaji supported Khushi. Now, i am assuming that Khushi's dad was the one that hid Payal somewhere. Does that mean that even Buaji doesn't know where he kept her. And is she also scared to ask him? She would much rather send Khushi on to Delhi alone to look for Payal, than ask her brother where he kept her ?
And what about Garima? Does she know?
And what was in that pouch?
And finally, who was Arnav waiting for at the station?

BTW, the part about the little kid was so sweet. Arnav was actually fascinated by him. Somehow everything in Arnav's life seems so dark. Even Aakash is a mess. Watching that little kid must have felt like a break from all the darkness.

Can't wait for Khushi and him to finally interact with each other.

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Uthra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

So the titans meet. Hey, the pace is perfectly fine. I felt a little sorry for this sumit guy. So who did the Raizada come for?

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ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

a very good start to the story...is the akash somewhat connected to payal...asr gone to pick his nani perhaps .you have connected the story...can't wait for the next chapter

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faree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

nice update aww buaji is so sweet and now waiting for der encounter thanks for the pm

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

who did he come to pick up then
cant be khushi right
as he dont know her
but someone else sure is coming there
well i guess we shall know soon enough who this person is right
waise i must say i was all worried when buaji caught khushi
but she let her go
how could she not after all she is going to save her sister
or find her sister
am glad she let her go
and she shall take care of her parents
it seems sumit is gonna wait for her to come back to him
well am sorry but she wont come back
how can she right
so whats up with akash
why is he wasting his life like this
and who is this person coming that arnie has gone to pick her up from the station
must be important right
cheers for pm

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: mem1
This chapter was way more satisfying to me. There was a lot of progress.
Hey I am glad you liked the chapter, and don't worry from now on though there will be many questions and suspense but there shall be answers and movement as well😊
I really feel sad for Sumeet, but then we all know Khushi cannot go back to him.
Don't be too sure now... even I am not sure about how these tangled relationships proceed😉
I am glad Buaji supported Khushi. Now, i am assuming that Khushi's dad was the one that hid Payal somewhere. Does that mean that even Buaji doesn't know where he kept her. And is she also scared to ask him? She would much rather send Khushi on to Delhi alone to look for Payal, than ask her brother where he kept her ?
You shall know about Payal's whereabouts in the next chapter, thats all I can say for now😳
And what about Garima? Does she know?
And what was in that pouch?
And finally, who was Arnav waiting for at the station?
You'll get to know all this in the next update itself, so hangon😳

BTW, the part about the little kid was so sweet. Arnav was actually fascinated by him. Somehow everything in Arnav's life seems so dark. Even Aakash is a mess. Watching that little kid must have felt like a break from all the darkness.
Well, actually I hadn't planned on this scene and it was a product of impulse, but even I liked the way it came out. And there might be more to this that Arnav just enjoying the kid's antics😳
Can't wait for Khushi and him to finally interact with each other.
Me too😆

And thanks for reading and commenting😳

Edited by srija.singh04 - 12 years ago

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Viji79
So the titans meet. Hey, the pace is perfectly fine. I felt a little sorry for this sumit guy. So who did the Raizada come for?

Thanks😊 I was really worried that maybe the story is too slow paced😳 And you'll get you answer in the next update😊

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mem1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: srija.singh04
This chapter was way more satisfying to me. There was a lot of progress.
Hey I am glad you liked the chapter, and don't worry from now on though there will be many questions and suspense but there shall be answers and movement as well😊
I really feel sad for Sumeet, but then we all know Khushi cannot go back to him.
Don't be too sure now... even I am not sure about how these tangled relationships proceed😉
I am glad Buaji supported Khushi. Now, i am assuming that Khushi's dad was the one that hid Payal somewhere. Does that mean that even Buaji doesn't know where he kept her. And is she also scared to ask him? She would much rather send Khushi on to Delhi alone to look for Payal, than ask her brother where he kept her ?
You shall know about Payal's whereabouts in the next chapter, thats all I can say for now😳
And what about Garima? Does she know?
And what was in that pouch?
And finally, who was Arnav waiting for at the station?
You'll get to know all this in the next update itself, so hangon😳

BTW, the part about the little kid was so sweet. Arnav was actually fascinated by him. Somehow everything in Arnav's life seems so dark. Even Aakash is a mess. Watching that little kid must have felt like a break from all the darkness.
Well, actually I hadn't planned on this scene and it was a product of impulse, but even I liked the way it came out. And there might be more to this that Arnav just enjoying the kid's antics😳
Can't wait for Khushi and him to finally interact with each other.
Me too😆

And thanks for reading and commenting😳