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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TaareynSwaron

Chapter 84
Unres on page 50 😃


thanks dr...i saw it thanks n love u😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakshigupta

It was a gr8 update dear...bt m desperatly waiting 4 d taatey meet ya :)


thanks dr n will update soon yaa taarey meet bt u have wait for it guys...thank u n love u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TaareynSwaron


Aww dear u re welcome
N yes I was a silent reader n when I joined the IF u all were not updating then
But now u guys r back n I m really excited for the jodhpurs track n bade bhaiya's entry
I m gonna try my best to read all ur future updates n keep commenting n supporting u both like this
Love u lovely ❤️
Love
Tasha 🤗


thanks a lot dr happy to now that u were also a silent reader yaa we stop giving updates due to my pc problem n then exams...bt now we r back n happy that u r liking the ff so so so much...dear..yaa wiill try ur level best to update n give u best updates in jhodpur dear...yaa badebhiya will soon reverled hope u will like him...n thanks for u r support n commenting n likking love u dear...thanks n love u ur😊
lovely priya😳 n
rajkumari pari...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iamursforever

Loved it!:)))
Thnkz for the pm!:)
Cont. Soon:)


thanks dr n will upadte soon thanks n love u dr...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome chapter dear...
superb love it...
thanks for pm ...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajkumaripari


thanks a lot dr happy to now that u were also a silent reader yaa we stop giving updates due to my pc problem n then exams...bt now we r back n happy that u r liking the ff so so so much...dear..yaa wiill try ur level best to update n give u best updates in jhodpur dear...yaa badebhiya will soon reverled hope u will like him...n thanks for u r support n commenting n likking love u dear...thanks n love u ur😊
lovely priya😳 n
rajkumari pari...😊



love u tashu...n happy that u were a silent reader n came up here to if sorry i wants there to well u bt late then never so welcome here n yaa mast say that u r really agood writer u know what i feel so happy when i figureout that each n every fan of taarey that is taareins r so imaginative that they write so gud os,ff,ss i really like all ur rt we were nt here when u came bt as some pc pro occured n then exams so wasnt there bt as pari said now we r here n happy to here that u r very excited for jhodpur n will be a gud one i guess i hope u all like it..n yaa thanks alot for ur support n like n comments..love u tashu...😳
urs LOVELY...😳
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Originally posted by: priyal_TaaRey

awesome chapter dear...

superb love it...
thanks for pm ...
update soon...

thanksdear for giving this ff a little time,for reading n cmmenting...m thankful to u...hope u also like further parts...n will try to update soon...love u 😛😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update * lambawala too 😳 *
The guy gai scene was 😆
Bichaare boys specially Rey , hope he has a good time impressing badebhaiya 😉
The nil - vicky scene and nil - Rey scene was hilarious * still laughing 🤣 *
Aww even wants aarti , that was chooo cute ⭐️
And swayam's mother is very sweet.
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Originally posted by: --coco--

Awesome update * lambawala too 😳 *
The guy gai scene was 😆
Bichaare boys specially Rey , hope he has a good time impressing badebhaiya 😉
The nil - vicky scene and nil - Rey scene was hilarious * still laughing 🤣 *
Aww even wants aarti , that was chooo cute ⭐️
And swayam's mother is very sweet.

thanks for posting ur comment...thanks for sharing ur views...thank god u loved that gai waala scene...i thought it wuld be silly bt it wasnt...thanks alot for reading...love u !!!!😳😃😊
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CHAPTER:85

{'rey was still awake n keep moving frm 1side to other swayam who was next to him'gets up n ask him'}

Swayam:rey kya hua tu so kyu nahi raha hain hum jhodpur poch gayena'abh to shanti se soja'.

Rey:are jhodpur poch gaye bt taani se to nahi milena'mujhe taani se milna hain plz'

Swayam:wht?pagal hoagaya hain wo sogai hogi abh tak n mom ne kaha na hum kal milenge'

Rey:plz swayam bas use dur se dekh lunga then pakaka sojaunga'I promiss plz'

Swayam:fine bt uske baad sojyega na pakkka'

Rey:yaa paakka'

Swayam:fine chal mere saath taani ke room ko jate hain bt tu use dur se dekh ke aajna k'{rey nodes swayam takes two blankets n give 1 to rey n ask him to cover n with other he coverhimself'}

Rey:ye kyu??

Swayam:agar kisi ne dekha to cover karne ke liye'taki koi hame phechane nahi abh chal' they both get up n slowly slowly with short legs go out of room then through corridor they go slowly n swayam says''}

Swayam:kya kya kara raha hai tu rey mujhe???apne hi ghar mein chor ki taraha chal raha hu aur upar se meri bhen se milne ki tujhe help kar raha hu main duniya ka aisa ek lauta bhai honga'{rey smiles n ask him to move forward n swayam go finally they reach a room n swayam says'}

Swayam:sun ye hai taani ka room abh jaldi ja taani ko dekh ke jaldi aaja main bhar rukhta hu agar koi aay to main tujhe signal dunga k'

Rey:k {rey slowly opens the door n goes in'n the close the door behind him n thn turns n see a girl sleeping on the bed he slowly smiling moves towards the girl thinking abt taani n go to her bed n sit there as there was no light n girl was sleeping facing opposite side of rey n covering her face with her left hand'.}


Rey:finally itne dino bad tumhe dekh raha hu'kitna khush hu main u know kitne papad bel ke yaha tak pocha hu'swayam ko tumhare possisive bhai ko jhelna pad raha hain mujhe bt ye sari baate ek taraf aur ye baat ki aaj itne dino baad main tumhe dek raha hu'I love u taani'{bt as he was unable to see the girl face he try to see the face by bending halfon bed n keeping his rt hand on bed'bt was un successful n he again try n this time he takes his phone n flashes the light on girls face n due to light the girl get disturb n she makes a turn to her left n sleep now rey was able to see her face he gets shock to see the girl face n say'}

Rey:hey krishnaji ye to taani nahi hain to kaun hain'lagta hain swayam ne neend main yaa itne saalo bad ghar wapas isliye bhul gaya hoga taani ka room kaunsa hain n kisi aur ke kamre mein bhej diya hoga'rey yaha se nikal warna bure phasenge'{rey try to move bt was unable then he see that his rt hand was under the girls head n she had turn n slept on his hand'rey gets tense n try to revove his hand bt was unsuccessful then he sees a stick on the near table he slowly snatches the stick n try to move girls head'n the stick get trap in the girls hair n by this girl again get disturb n she opens her eyes n see rey n rey too look at her n then the girl get up n rey takes his hand off'n now rey holds the stick with his two hands n he smiles as he finally hands were free'here outside swayam think'}

Swayam:lagta hai meri bhen ke saath chipak,,,,ohoh..ye boys ke saath rehte rehte main bhi kya bolne laga hu'anywhs andar jata hu n dekhta hu kya hua'{here inside girl see rey n makes eye small as if she has seen a daku n she slowly open her mouth to shout n rey along with his mouth make funny face to make her shut up n girl get scared'now rey join his hand bt as he join his hand the stick was standing straight'n girl see the stick n now she finally shouts'rey hear her screem n doesn't know wht to do so he run towards door at the same time swayam was about to get in bt reyam dash eachother n the girls gets up frm bed n follow rey}

Swayam:kya kiya tune kaun chilaraha hain'

Rey:phele bhag '{reyam start running here with girl following them girl shouting''}

Girl:chor chor chor chor'.{swayam stop n turn towards rey n ask'}

Swayam:chor kaha hain'

Rey:aare mujhe kya malum tu bas bhag warna ye ladki hame marwadegi bagh'{swayam again start running he run frm the room to corridor to hall steps'following rey behind him n the girl behind rey at a distance'now they were in hall swayam come running down n look here n there in sudden shock he forgot the route of his house n he was thinking what to do n where to go????????rey comes running down n hit swayam n ask'}

Rey:khada kya hain bhag'{swayam again start running he doesn't get where to go so he start running behind sofas which were in left of hall'rey follow him n girl follow rey'all three were running round n round n round'behind eachother'girl was still shouting as they passed frm swayam room n guest room whole team wakes up due to the nosie n comes down n see the three running behind eachother as 1st swayam then rey then the girl''.as all was going on the hall lights gets on n swayam shouts at rey'}

Swayam:are rey phele us ladki ko chup kara warna wo pure ghar ko jaga degi'{rey nt knowing what to do stops in between swayam n girl'swayam too stops'the girl also stops at a distance'swayam says'}

Swayam:tu meri taraf turn hoke kya kar raha hain????us ladki ke pass jake use chp kara..

Rey:hahahaha'{turns towards girls n the stick was still with rey n he was holding it as if he is going to beat on someones head so girl gets scared n thinks'}

Girl:lagta hain ye chor abh mujhe marne araha hai'.{so she again start running in opposite direction frm reyam n start shouting bt this time she says'}bachooo bachooo '{rey was confused n swayam says'}

Swayam:are khada kya hain us ladki ko chup kara warna pata nahi kya samjhenge ghar wale bhag'{rey confussing nodes his head n run behind girl'now girl following rey then swayam'}

Rey:{while running}are ye ladki to rukhi nahi rahi hain'aur chilaye jarahihain'

Swayam:to tu aur teezbhag aur uska muhaa band kar

Rey:hhahahah{rey runs more fast n the girl even more fast swayam more fast to catch the girl'}

Girl:bacho'bacho'bacho'.{all three were running meanwhile simar comes frm her room n see the three n says'}

Simar:ye kya ho raha hain'?{seeing simar girl ru to simar n rey n swayam stop in there respective places'swayam near steps of hall n rey near sofa'catches the girl hand n make her stand n go n switch the hall lights on'now all were clearly seen the team was there'swayam was there with confused face n rey was standing behind sofa as dnt know wht to do'n girl who was facing simar turn n see the gang n then swayam n then rey n say lodly'}

Girl:rey aap??????{rey was more shock to here his name frm the girls mouth n team n swayam were looking at girl open mouth'}

Simar:{coming to girl'}kya hua maine pucha ye sab kya chal raha tha???{swayam look at rey n he look at the girl n team look at three of them'now simar was glaring swayam'n as again simar go ask something'some voice come frm behind'}

Voice:ye kya shor ho raha hai itni raat ko?????{all look at the voice n sees swayams dad standing in front of them'simar goes to him n try to find an answer'}


Simar:anirudhji aap uth gaye'wo'.ye sab,,,,,

Anirudhad:kya ye sab simar????{look at the team only nt at rey n swayam as his back was facing them'}aur ye sab kaun hai????

Simar:ye sab wo ye sab..swayam ke dost hain'

Anirudh:swayam ke'to yaha kya kar rahe hain????

Simar:ye sab yaha hain as swayam yah hain'

Anirudh:swayam:kaha????{swayam calls him frm behind'}

Swayam:dad'.{he turns back n see swayam standing at some distance'.he constantly look at him n swayam too do the same then after sometime'anirudh says'}

Anirudh:simar agar aap ka beta aaya hain to itna shor machega ki ghar mein'

Simar:wo'{swayam interrupts'}

Swayam:dad wo mom ki koi galti nahithi'wo'

Anirudh:simar hame kal meeting ke liye jana hain to ham jake soote hain aap apne bte se kal aaram se mil lijiyega'{team was shock to see swayams dad behavior'n anirudh was about to go when swayam runs to him n bend down n take his blessing n stand up n say'}

Swayam:dad abh aap mujhe aashirwad bhi nahi doge'{anirudh ignores n see here there bt swayam continues'}dad I know ki aap mujhse bohut gussa ho'n hona bhi chaiye maine kiya hi aisa ki aapko gussa to aayega hina'

Simar:swayam hum kal baat karte hain'{swayam cut her'}

Swayam:nahi mom main apne dad se 6 years se dur hu abh aur nahi mom dad ne mujhse in 6 saalo mein ek baar bhi baat nahi ki'abh main aur ye sab nahi jhel sakta main apne chacha ku khodiya hain bt aapne dad jo mere saath hain unhe hote hu bhi khona nahi chata'{by this anirudh looks at swayam n swayam continues'}dad I know ki maine jo desicion liya wo aapki nazro mein wrong hain bt dad dance mera passion hain n agar main 6 sal phele Mumbai nahi jata to main chacha ka sapna kabhi pura nahi kar pata'maine chacha ko khoya hain dad bt unka sapna nahi khona chata tha so main us time yaha se chala gaya n in 6saalo mein kabhi himat nahi hui aapko face karne ki'dad I know u were rt bt main bhi galat nahi hu dad ek baar plz ek baar meri situation ko samjhne ki koshish kijiye plz'dad I m sorry'I m really sorry I know mujhe aapko,momko,badebhaiya n specially taani ko us waqt chod ke nahi jana chaiye tha bt us waqt mujhe sirf chacha ka sapna dikh raha tha aur kuchnahi plz dad I m sorry plz forgive me'agar abhi bhi aap ko main galat lagta hu to'main abh aur aapse kuch safai nahi dunga aap jo saaza mujhe dena chate hain de sakte hain'{leans his head down'simar eyes were filled with tears team n rey were shock to here everything'anirudh looks at swayam for sometime n then says to simar'}

Anirudh:simar aapne swayam ko yahi shikhaya haina ki phele galti karo aur aur'{takes a pause}aur jab sab thik hojaye to maafi mango'{swayam raise his head n look at anirudh}aise kya dekh raha hain apne dad ke gale nahi lagega'6saalo bad wapas aaya hain ghar aapne dad miss to kiya na tune'{swayam smiles n simar too n swayam forcefull run towards his dad n hug him tightly'both father n sons eyes fell with tears'then after sometime they broke hug n anirudh rub his hand in swayams head n say..}

Anirudh:aur sab kaisa hain'tera dance kaisa chl raha hain'suna hain tune koi competetion mein part liya tha???

Swayam:ha dad n aap jante ho main us mein jeeta bhi'

Anirudh:very gud I m proud of u swayam{swayam smiles n again hug his dad he too hug him bac'till then simar come to them n say'n they brk they hug'}

Simar:ye aacha aap dono ek dam same ho'baat nahi ki to 6 saalo tak nahi ki aur jab ki to mujhe bhul gaye aur anirudh ji aap mujhe kya keh rahe the ki aapki metting hain agar hain to abh aap apne bte se kal baat kijiyega aur abhi jake sojaye'

Anirudh:wo to thik hain par ye chor aur bacho kaun chilla raha tha'????{team n reyam look at the girl n girl raise her hand n anirudh see her n ask why she was shouting..she think}

Girl:agar maine abhi saach baat batai types to problem types hojayegi so..{then says'}wo kaka hua aisa types na ki main wo paani pine types aayi thi aur ye rey swayam ke frnd types bhi paani pine types aaye the aur mujhe laga ki ye chor types hain to maine chilna types suru kardiya'sorry sabko disturb types kardiya'

Anirudh:oh'acha thik hain abh jao sab sojao'{simar ask anirudh to stop n go to Sharon n takes her to him n says'}

Simar: Anirudh ji pehchana aapne inhe'?

Anirudh:ha inhe kaise nahi pechanege yahi to hai jinhone hamre swayam ko apnaya hain'haina Sharon'{she smiles n bend n take blessings n Anirudh says'}

Anirudh:Sharon yaad rakhna ye ghar tumhara hain to agar koi bhi problem ho to bina hesitation ke kehdena thik hain'

Sharon:ji'{smiles'}

Swayam:dad ye sab..

Anirudh:janta hu sab ko taani ne tha sab ke bare mein'aap sab log thak gaye honge jake sojaye'kal baat karte hain'{says n go frm there simar smiles n she to goes frm there'swaron share a llhh movement n rey n team comes to swaron n Vicky ask swayam'}

Vicky:ek baat bata ki ye samjh aay ki rey paani pine aaya tha bt tu kyu unke piche bhag raha tha'{rey realizes that the girl took his name n he look at her n say'}

Rey:tumhe mera naam kaise malum????{girl smiles n swayam comes n says'}

Swayam:aur tumne dad n mom se jhut kyu bola????

Girl:swayam agar main jhut types nahi kehtina to tum aur tumhara frnd types badi problem mein phas types jaate'

Sharon:jhutr?problemm???

Girl:ha abh aap log mujhe bata types ki aap mere kamre mein itni raat ko kya types kar rahe the'

Rey:sorry bt hame laga wo taani ka'[swayam stops him n says'}

Swayam:wo sab chodo phele ye batao tum ho kaun n wo room tumhara nahi hain taani ka hain n main taani se milne gaya tha'

Girl:swayam tumhe abhi bhi jhut types bolna nahi aata anywhs aagar aap log chate hain to main kaka aur kaaki se kehdungi ki aap log mere rroom mein aaye the phir aage explanation types aap dedena 'k'

Rey:are nahi thank u waise bachana ke liye bt wo taani swayam taani ka bhai haina use bohut yaad arahi thi to wo taani se milne gaya n mujhe bhi saath leliye n hum room confuse hogaye n swayam ek room n main ek room mein agaye'so sorry disturb kiya I hope u understood..

Girl:bohut ache se understood types ji'{rey give her fake smile n go to swayam who was still lost some where'n ask her to say thanku to the girl n swayam comes to girl n say'}

Swayam:wo tha..

Girl:abh swayam tumhe mujhe yaad dilana types padega ki tum hi ne mujhese kaha tha ki frndship mein thanku types nahi kehte'{all look at her in shock n swayam mind stike something n he shouts loudly/'}

Swayam:hey taani ke krishanji ye tum ho miss.types'

Girl:oh to finally tumne mujhe pechan types liya'

Swayam:are phechnauga kaise nahi u'come here {n drag her in a tight hug Sharon was shock to see swayam hugging a girl that to infrnt of her n tear was hell shock'then they break hug n swayam turn towards team n see Sharon in angry face n he says'}guys tum logo ne bhi nahi pechna na are ye taani ki best frnd hain maine bataya than a iski pic bhi batai thi'

Nil:ha bt us mein to ye choti thi

Swayam:ha bt abh badi aur beautiful hoagai'{she blushes'n Vicky says'}

Vicky:waise tumhara naam kya hain'

Swayam:ha miss.types main tumhara naam bhul gaya'

Girl:kya swayam tum mera naam types kaise bhul sakte types ho'jao main bhi aapna naaam types tab tak nahi bata deti types jab tak tumhe mera naam yaad nahi aajata types'

Swayam;bt'.k fine main khud tumhara naam yaad karke tumhe bataunga dekh lena..ye swayam shikhawat ka challenge hain'

Girl:k to main bhi wait types karungi aapke is challenge ka pura hone tak'{till then they hear clock sound n they look at it n girl says'}

Girl:mar types gai main to k bye bye sabko'kal shubha milte types wo mujhe kaam types hain bye'{says n run to her room here swayam go to gang n Sharon was furming with anger'}

Rey:dude tune kabhi bataya nahi ki tune aapne dad se baat nahi ki in 6 saalo mein'

Swayam:rey maine kaha than a ki aisi aur bohut baate hai jo tum log ko dheere dheere pata chal jayegi'so till then have patience now chalo jake sote hain n gudnt sha'.{she goes frm there'n girls follow her'n here boys too go'n rey stnd there n think'}

Rey:itna shor hua bt taani bahar nahi aayi'koi nahi kal milunga shayad krishnaji bhi yahi chate honge' {swayam calls rey n he too goes n they all sleep n next day the sun rises'}

Swayam:guys utho yar mom ne breakfast ko bulaya hain utho hey taani ke krishnaji yaha ye log nahi uth rahe hain n abh tak to girls bhi so rahe honge'swayam tu to margaya frnds n family ke beech'rey taani agai dekh{rey gets up immedetly n nil too gets up'}

Nil:kaha hai??????{swayam gets confuse n slowly all boys get up n swayam smiles n ask them to get ready n come down'n he was going to wake up girls when simar see swayam n ask him come with him'n he without his wish he has to go with his mom'he goes down n was shock to see Sharon girls already there'}

Swayam:Sharon aur tum sab log yah????

Simar:kyu tujhe kya laga ki ye sab abh tak so rahi hogi bt let me tell u ki ye abhi nahi balki kabke uth gaye the aur aaj subha ki aarti mein bhi the aur meri bahu aur use dost sab bhut hi sanskari hain tere jaise nahi sote rehne ko'

Swayam:mom wo'

Simar:abh bas kar jakes are ladko ko bula le main breakfast lagati hu'

Swayam:mom wo dad'

Simar:wo metting thi na to wo chale gaye sham tak aajyenge abh tu ja'{she goes in kitchen swayam smiles looking at Sharon n turn to go to boys n they were coming chitchatting'they all sit to have breakfast n as they were doing brk fast the gils frm up comes running down to dinning room'}

Girl:sorry sorry sorry late hogaya types'wo kaki subaha se kaam types kar rahi hu bt abh tak khatam types hi nahi hua'

Simar:thik hai tub het nasta to karle'

Girl:nahi abhi nahi late horaha hai types n phele hi 3 din se apne kam pe nahi gai types 'agar aaj late types hogai to samjho ki kaam haath se gaya types'so main jaati types

Simar:ha bt ye juice to pile'

Girl:are nahi kaki'

Swayam:abh mom itna bol rahe hain to tum pilona aur waise bhi 2 mintute mein tumhara koi kaam barbad nahi hoga so chup chap bhet kar juice pilo'{the girl smiles follow swayam'n drink juice n as she was going she forget her bag n go till door n swayam see her bag n call her}

Swayam:are aashi aapna bag to leti jao'{she comes back n take the bag n says'}


Aashi:thank u types swayam warna aaj to meri band types baj jati hain'waise tumhe mera naam types yaad agaya'

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