OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#1

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Denaid

@Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Awww, that was so cute...I do believe Arnavji sounds sexier than just Arnav.😉..It has it's own charm, though I cant ever imagine calling hubby dear with a JI...🤪. ..He might just stop me from visiting IF altogether 😲. And we can't have that now, can we??😉

Update sooon...

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Oh thank god for luck! I am surprised on how I ended up here, but extremely glad!

I read your FF, and it was beautiful piece! The battle with emotions, the frustrations, the grunts, the loyalty, the approval... it was a roller coaster of emotions. We had Arnav who was willing to give his everything to get Khushi, which is quite a contrast with his arrogant figure in the show. And Khushi, the ever- aloof and spiteful woman that charmed Arnav, another contrast to the bright colored, always smiling Khushi, we saw in the show.

I loved it, but I wish I had found this earlier, so I would have stalked you earlier! :P what can I say, I am a new fan! :D

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

i just got the link for your story from rasgulla_sp
i love it!!!! i was always wondering how arnav and khushi would be if one of them were a pilot and here i am already having a story...
they are already married... i want to read more of this

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Vanisha

@TheBlueAngel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

hehe if i get sme1 lyk Arnav i would lyk 2 add 'ji' 2..n i would always talk so dat he cn shut me up..☺️ gosh cn dey get any cuter..???
eagerly w8ing 4 da nxt OS..😃

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Phoenixrises

@Phoenixrises

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

My god! I read all your OS's and WAUFMIO together, and I absolutely LOVED them! Loved the idea of a pilot Arnav and a modern, educated and working Khushi. Lavanya was by far the BEST! And loved the way you taught Shyam a lesson in your previous OS's... Do write soon.. Waiting.. :D

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

thank god for lavanya

so that's how arnav found out about dirty shyaam's plans

loved this instalment of the OS

Edited by ayshaomar - 12 years ago

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GirlOfFire

@GirlOfFire

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Bravo!! Loved it !! Loved it!!

More one-shots please!!

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Capt Arnav Singh Raizada is a force to reckon with !!! 😃

Somewhere at the back of my mind while reading this OS i thought of Arnav as Gabbar and La as Saamba!!😆 (Reference ; "Sholay") So that leaves Shyam as the thakur with no hands !!🤣

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

No matter how hard I try to wean myself off from if.. I get writers like u.. To love...it was totally adorable with super dialogs.. Made a lot of sense for us who have read the whole gamut,,😊