OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#1 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was getting late for work. I stuffed my breakfast in my mouth and missed my spot here 😔

Now that i think of it you've shown Lavanya to be very intelligent, perceptive and resourceful. Of course she sensed Shyam had wrong intentions for Khushi and the protective mother in her kicked in. This also explains how Arnav was able to succeed in an outrageous plan in a party full of strangers.

I loved how Khushi said that his absence woke her up.

La is working for that psycho so that her dad would buy her a car???

You woman made us think of Arnav in his sleepy, husky voice and in only his boxers? Wicked!

But then i liked it that you made Arnav acknowledge how charming his wife is that it is easy for men to fall for her 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
I loved thisss!!!

Nidsubh007
This was too good. I was waiting for the link between that story.

Please don't stop, like ever!
What she said!!😆

Love the protective side of Arnav,,

Lavanya was working under a pervert to get a car?
Love the relationship that La and ASR share..

Khushi, Khushiii..

I'm jealous.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
LOVED it! Lavanya really has great instincts doesn't she?! Awesome! Loved the easy cameradie that Lavanya and Arnav share. Arnav's so protective of Khushi AND Lavanya! Love that about him. So this is how Capt Raizada got to know about Mr Shyam Manohar Jha! Go Arnav! Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
loved it... connected lots of missing dots for me...
I just adore this couple..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Loved d
nxt os pls
pm me wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Well the pieces did fall in place...you are right...it dint make sense for th instinctive, gutsy lavanya from waufmaio to be so naive abt shyam's intentions in the preceding OS...so this one really tied up some loose strings...
And really enjoyed reading it as well...as usual the exchange between la and asr was very well written..smart and witty...

Looking fwd to more..


Love
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
So this was the plan ... lol...Amazing one!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Oh. Loved this...one it cleared so many questions , two there was a sleeping dragon and a vengeful ASR and three Miss Kashyap won the bet 😊 Muahhh...like i said ...loved it 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
like _disha_ mentioned in her comment... i too thought arnav as gabbar and La as Saamba!!...shyam is in this too!!!!
good that arnav took care of him...
loved this os

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ah...this was lovely Semanti ...
I absolutely loved this cunning Raizada and Lavanya...
I love how protective both of them are about Khushi...huh...i envy her...i wish i get someone like this...
Ah...Arnav in boxer...you know i read that line more than once...i have wicked images now...:P
I loved the missing dots you connected...
Arnav and Khushi's love for each other is so tangible...it makes you crave for that kind of relation..
I am loving these series..i want more and more of these series...

Semanti...i have become a huge fan of your writings...i would love to read each and everything you write...
Love you loads and loads and loads...
Take care...

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