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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 EXCELLLENNNNNNT...

cont soon........bahut ache parst teh 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey farh nice part ab jaldise cont karo warna😡

yours truly,

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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
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farah zabardast...tooo goodd..... 👏
ab chalo jaldi se continue karo.. 😆 me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😭 😭 cont sooooooooon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
haila farah jiiiiiiii

cont karoo na jii 😭

me can't wait to read the next jiii

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry yaar ro nahi hehe..kal continue karungi.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok..so herez kth duiiitiii.....(dedicated to all jodi lovers...ideas...are from surya...
luv yaaa....
recap:...sujal and anjali are stuck in the rain...they find a hotel near by...
....
sujal and anjali enter this really old building...
sujal:..yahan to koi bhi nahi hai...
anjali:...hmmm....(she gets a shiver)
sujal:....yahan to insaan nahi dikh raha....phone kahan se mile ga..(he smiles)..
anjali:...hmmm
sujal:...kya huwa?
anjali:..kuch nahi...
sujal:...(he smiles mischievously)...tumhe daar lag raha hai....
anjali:..nahi to...(she gulps down her saliva...)...woh...raat se thoda sa darti...
sujal:...(burts into laughters)....dont tell me..tumhe waqai dar lag raha hai....(laughs
more)
anjali feels embarrassed....:...adaat nahi hai na...(she says shyly)
sujal:..you know...agar...yahan kashish hoti to....(woh achanak chup ho jata hai...as
baatein karte karte woh dono bahir a chuke the....and it was still raining)
anjali:..kashish hoti to??...
sujal:..(woh apne balon mein haath pherta hai...)...tooo....(says dreamingly..keh achanak
uski nazar pass mein hi ek telephone booth peh parti hai....)....anjali...mein abhi aya
anjali:..par kahaaaan...(before she could complete...sujal bhaag jata hai lolx)
........
kashish:..kahan hon sujal....kab se wait kar rahi hon...
sujal:..(on the phone)..kashish....mein barish mein phasa hon...issi birdge ke paas....
...gari bhi kharab hai...aur
kashish:..aur?
sujal:...missing you
kashish smiles:....kab tak aoge
sujal:..hmmm...(side peh tek lagata hai)...kya pata....jab yeh barish ruke gi
kashish:..aur woh dinner?
sujal:...kashish...obviously yaar..cancel
kashish:..hmmm...
sujal:...mein tumhe apne personal change se call kar raha hon...aur tum ho ke....hmm haan kar
rahi ho....
kashish:..to kya karu
sujal:...(smiles cutely)...koi pyaar ki baat.....aj barish mein tumhari yaad arahi hai
kashish:....(smiles)....achaaa....
sujal:..hmmmmm....(says dreamingly)
kashish:...to ajaon
sujal:..ajao....na
itni der mein sujal ki ankhon peh koi haath rakhta hai....
sujal:..aray...
kashish:..agayi....
sujal:.kashish...(he says...and turns around to see kashish standing there......barish mein
bheegi hui....her hair were all wet...
sujal:..tum?
kashish:..tumne hi to kaha tha..ajao (smiles)
sujal:..(smiles back)....i love you....(they hug)....(song timee)
music......sujal kashish ko....booth ke ek side peh push karta hai..and then comes closer
to her......apna haath uske balon mein se guzarta hai..kashish closes her eyes....and the
song begins lol
sujal:..dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aanaa....
dheere dheere se dil ko chuaranaa...
sujal kisses her cheeks gently...almost drinking the water dripping from her face...(rain
water lolx).....
sujal:........tumse pyaar humein hai kitna janee janaaa....
tumse milkar..tum ko hai batanaa
kashish moves her fingers...on sujal's face....eyes....nose and lips...
kashish:...dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein anaaa
dheere dheere se dil ko chuaranaa
...tum se pyaar humein hai kitna...jane janaaaaa
tumse milkar tum ko hai batanaa.....(they hug)
.....they part...sujal comes near her...but kashish gets out of the booth....now in the
rain....kashish opens her arms and swings round and round in the rain..while sujal watches
her dance.....his arms crossed......kashish looks at him..aur usko paas ane ka ishara karti
hai.....(song cont.)
sujal:....jab se tuje dekha....dil ko kahin araam nahiiiii...(he walks towards her)
.........mere hooton peh ek tere siva koi naam nahii...(hold her hand and swings her inwards
towards himself....)
music....(slips his hand across her waist....and kashish puts her arms on his shoulders...)
kashish:....apnaa bhi haal tumhare jaisaaaa hai sajaan
............bus yaad tumhe karte aur koi kaam nahiii...(they both look at each other...when
sujal catches her waist and brings her really close)
sujal:...ban gaya hon mein teraaaa dewwanaaaa...(kisses her eyes)
dheere dheere se dil ko chuarana..
kashish:...hoo dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein anaaa (kisses sujal on his cheeks)
dheere dheere se dil ko chuaranaa....(winks at him...lolx)...
musicc........sujal picks her up in his arms and swings her around....kashish holds onto his
coat....sujal takes her towards his car and makes her sit on the bonnet...while...he looks
at her and walks around.....keeping his eyes..on her....kashish sharama keh sar jhuka leti
hai...(song cont.)
kashish........tu ne bhi aksar mujko jagaya...raaaton meinnn
............ab neend chaurayi meethi meethi baaton mein......(she smiles...as sujal
comes near her....he moves his finger from her forehead...between her eyes..nose...lips
and comes down to her neck...when kashish grabs his hand...and opens her eyes....)

sujal:....tune bhi beshak mujko kitna tarpaya
.........phir bhi teri har ek adaaaa peh pyaar ayaaaa...(winks at her....as
kashish gari se utar keh starts to walk by him....sujal catches the pallu
of her sari....and kashish stops)

sujal:....aja aja ..ab kaisa sharmana.....(he wraps her sari around her)
........dheere dheere se dil ko chuarana
kashish:..(looks at him)....dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein anaaaa
.........dheere dheere se dil ko chuaranaa
sujal:....(strokes his nose against her's) tum se pyaar humein hai kitna jane jaanaaaa
..........tumse milkar tum ko hai batanaaa....
hmmm hmmm se hmmm hmm hmm aanaaa
hmm hmm hm seee dil ko chuaranaaa....and sujal holds her firmly and kisses her
on her lips....tallay par gaye lolxxx.....kiranaayyyy
while all this was going on...anjali was standing in a corner watching this....
when the thunder struck....aur anjali halka sa cheeki...
anajli:..aaaaah...(she closed her ears)...par kya faida..lolx....sujal aur kashish
to disturb ho gaye the na...hehehehe.....
sujal and kashish looked at her...
kashish:..yeh??
sujal:...oh...mein bhool gaya....anjali....(he walks over to her....while kashish
is left behind....she watches him go towards anjali....)
kashish:...aaanjali???.....(kind of confused....as what is anjali doing her...)
....oki...abhi k liye itna hi....sorry agar zaida cheap ho gaya ho...as kiran states
it for me hehehehehe.....lolx...me very bad at writing romantic part....hehehe chami ho
jata hai kehekeh....anywayz...will write soooon...lolx....luv ya all

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guys herez kth duitiii...after a loooooooooooooooooooong gap...sooo sorry

recap:..some ultra romantic moments along with a song hehehe

.............

sujal goes off to where anjali was standing...as she got scared of the thunder...

kashish:..(to herself)..aanjali??..yahan??

.......
sujal:..are you ok?
anjali:..haan...woh badal ki garaj se dar lagta hai.....i am sorry....(she looks down..)..mein ne
ap logon ko disturb kiya...
sujal:..(smiles shyly)....nahi....woh asal mein...(before he could compelte kashish intereuptes)
kashish:...barish aur humara bahut ghera saath hai....(she smiles as she comes and holds onto sujal's
hand....sujal smiles at her)

anjali looks up at them
kashish:..hi anjali......tum yahan kaise?..(says its warmly...)
anjali:..woh mein...
sujal:...mere saath thi.....mein inko ghar chorne ja raha tha....k hum barish mein phas gaye

anjali observes how sujal confides everything in kashish....

kashish:...sujal tum bhi na....apne saath saath anjali ko bhi pareshani mein dal diya....ab to barish
kum ho gayi hai....to chalein....
anjali:...haan....(she fixes her hair and begins to walk.....she turns around to see
sujal and kashish still holding eac others hand and looking into each others eyes)

anjali:..(smiles and walks off)

kashish:..sujaaal..chalein?
sujal:...(wraps his arms around her waist)...jahan kaho chalne ko tayar hon...
kashish:..filhaal to gari tak chalna hai...(smiles as she releases herself from sujal's grip)
sujal:....(holds her arm and pulls her back...uske baal ek side peh karta hai...as kashish closes her eyes..)

sujal:...tum khush ho na.....(kashish opens her eyes gently and looks at sujal who was watching her intensely)
kashish:...tumse bar kar aur kya khushi hai mere liye...(she touches his face...and sujal
kisses her hand...)
kashish:...par aaj kyun yeh sawal kiya?
sujal:....(smiles)...bus yunhi.....bahut zaida khushiyon se bhi dar lagta hai....kahin yeh humari zindagi ko nazar
na laga dein....kahin koi aise ghum na chor jayen....k usse bhulana mushkil ho jaye....
kashish:..sujaal....humare rishte mein khushiyan kaam aur ghum zaida rahe hain....par yeh humara pyaar hi tha
jo humein har mauj har toofan se bacha laya.....aur aj bhi hum saath hain......(she holds his hand and kisses it gently)....
aur hamesha rahenge....

sujal hugs her....

kashish:...ab chalein....nahi to anjali khare khare so jayegi....(she smiles)
sujal:..chalo.....(he slips his arms around her waist and they walk)....waise achi larki hai
kashish:..hmmmmm
sujal:..imandar hai....
kashish:..(looks at him)..hmm...kabhie kabhie lagta hai...jo yeh hai woh hai nahi....aur jo hai..woh dekhana nahi chahti..
sujal:..(pauses)...aur iska kya matlab huwa?...(raises an eyebrow)
kashish:..(smiles)...kuch nahi budhu.....lo agayi gari....

...............

sujal sits in the driving seat....kashish next to him and anjali peeche....

............

kashish:...to anjali...tum kahan rehti ho?
anjali:...yehi paas mein hostel hai...
kashish:.hostel kyun?....
anjali:..mein abhi abhi ayi hon is shehar mein to erhne k liey filhal yehi jaga mili...
kashsih:..achaa...(smiles)..aur tumhara ghar wale?
anjali:...(looks away)...mera is duniya mein koi nahi hai....
sujal looks at her from the rear window....while kashish feels senti hehehe

kashish:..aisa nahi kehte ....hum hain na....
anjali smiles at her...
kashish:...aj se kisi bhi cheez ki zarurat ho to mere paas ana...
sujal:..ab isse acha saathi mila hai meri burayi karne k liye.....(smiles at kashish)
kashish hits him playfully hehehehehehehe...(kiran hehehe)....:...mein ne kab ki tumhari burayi??
sujal:..aray....burai na sahi...kabhi pyaar hi kar liya karo....(he winks at her....and kashish shies away)

anjali watches them...

kashish:...anjali...sujal ki baatein kabhie khatam nahi hoti...
anjali:....aksar apki hi baatein karte hain...
kashish looks at sujal and raises an eyebrow:...achaa?
sujal smiles:....kya karein.....zindagi mein sirf ek bar hi mohabat ki hai....aur zindagi bhar wohi nibhani hai..
kashish:..u better...
sujal puts an arm around her:...aur agar nahi nibha paya to...
kashish:...to..
sujal:..to??
kashish:...to mein bhi koi aur dhund lo gi....(pushes his arm back)
sujal:..kya matlab?...(gets serious)
kashish hides her smile)
sujal:..kashish...aisi baat dobara mat karna....
kashish:....sujaal...mazaq kar rahi thi
sujal:...mein mazaq mein bhi tumhe kisi aur k saath nahi soch sakta
kashish:....(looks at him)...aur mein tumhare ilawa kisi k bare mein nahi soch sakti...(she rests
her head on his shoulder hehehehe bare hi height of besharam hain...peeche larki bheti hai kuch to khayal karein hehehe)

...........
sujal:..lo anjali....tumhara hostel agaya...
anjali:..thank sir....mada....(kashish inetfers)
kashish:..kashish...sirf kashish...
anjali:..(smiles)...thanx kashish....

she gets off...sujal and kashish are still watching her go...when some gang of guys arrive there....gunde mawali hehe)

gunda 1:..aray wah..kya item hai...
gunda 2:....ek bar idhar to dekhoo (hehehehehe...hieght of shareef gundas hahaha)
anjali tired to ignore them....

kashish:..sujal woh...(she pointed at the gundas jinhone anjali ka rasta roka tha...
sujal got down...:...aye...rasta choro....
gunde 1:..kyun be...teri kya lagti hai?
sujal:....jitna kaha hai utna karo....raasta choro...

anjali stepped back towards sujal....she had tears rolling down her eyes...

kashish also stepped down...
gunda 2:..bhai..zara hero ko check karo..(hahahaha..i luv gundas hehehe)
sujal:...yahan dobara nazar aye to kuch check karne k layak nahi bache ga...(wah je wah...kisi ko samaj aya yeh dialgoue heheheheh)

kashish:...suuujaal....rehne doo...(she got scared haha)
gunda1:..aray wah...khud k pass do do phool...aur humein sungne (smell)..se bhi mana kar raha hai ( hehehe height of cheapness hehe)
sujal:...ayeee....(he pointed a finger at a gunda)
gunda 2:...bhai...yeh dosra phool..(kashish)....mera huwa...kyun....(and they cracked up laughing)

oye hoye sujal ko koi tap chari hehehe..uski biwi peh gandi nazar ....hehehe....in gundon ki aisi ki taisi.....sujal got soo pisse off
he rolled up his sleeves and BAAAAAAANG....he knocked one man down.....the other tried to grab sujal...par wah jee...flying kick se
uska bhi kaam tamam hehehehe.....sujal in action....itni der mein the first gunda got up aur sujal k arm par chaku mara....sujal held onto the knife..
blood dripped down...kashish was shockedd...

sujal punched him hard across his stomach...and both gundas were down on the road..

kashish:..sujal...sujal..(she came upto him)...pagal ho gaye ho....tumhe kuch ho jata to...
sujal:....kuch nahi hota.....chal yahan se...anjali gari mein bheto...
anjali:...sir mein?
sujal:...yeh jaga sahi nahi.....aj mein tha....kal agar phir se...
anjali:..nahi sir....mein theek hon...
kashish:..anjali sujal sahi keh raha hai.....yeh jaga safe nahi.....aur phir kuch din tum humare saath reh sakti ho...
anjali:..kashish par...
sujal:....(thoda ghuse mein tha hehe)...mein gari mein wait kar raha hon...(he left)

kashish:...is mein harj hi kya hai anjali
anjali:....(looks away)..yeh theek nahi hoga
kashish:...tumhe yahan akela nahi chor sakte.....man jao anjali....
anjali finally agrees hehehe....yeeppeee...and they drive back to garewal house...

sujal goes into his room...while kashish shows anjali a spare room and fixes it for her......then goes back upto her room

..............

sujal was sitting on the bed...kashish came and sat next to him..and rested her head against his chest...sujal closed his eyes...
kashish:..itna ghusa kyun ata hai tumhe...
sujal:..sirf galat baat peh ata hai...
kashish:....aise logon k saath kham kha mein ulajhna sahi nahi...
sujal:..tumhe koi kuch kahe....mein bardasht nahi kar sakta...(opens his eyes and looks at her...
kashish:..(smiles)...janti hon.....par unke kehne se kya hota hai....(hugs him...)....
sujal:....(uske balon mein haath pherta hai..)....tum sirf meri ho
kashish:..(smiles)...tumhare un muje par haq jatna ...bahut acha lagta hai...
sujal:...aur muje tumhaer liye logon ko marna....(smiles)

kashish gets back:....pagal ho..
sujal:..zakhmi bhi hon..
kashish:...(looks at his hand..which was still bleeding)..suujal....kabse khoon bhe raha hai...
(she gets the firsat aid box and bandage lagati hai)
kashish:..dard ho raha hai
sujal:....ab nahi ho raha ...(still looking at her...)
kashish:...isiliye keh rahi thi....kya zarurat thi...kitni gheri choot ayi hai...
sujal:..yeh choot to kuch nahi.....tumhare liye jaan bhi deni pare to hanst hanste ...(kashish puts her hand on his mouth)
kashish:..phir wohi bewaja ki baatin....
sujal:..(smiled)...isi bahane...tumhare kareeb ane ka mauka to milta hai...(winks)
kashish:...(looks down.....)....aur waise bina mauke k kareeb ate ho...(smiles)
sujal:...kyun....koi problem hai....(he gets closer to her..smiling...and kashish lays back on the bed)
kashish:..nahii....(smiles and wraps her arms around his shoulder)..koi problem nahii...
sujal:..(kiises her forehead...and kashish closes her eyes....)..i love u
kashish:...me too....(...she goes into his arms and off they go to sleep....plus romance hehehe...)

hehehe..bus yaar...kafi hai....to ab anjli is in their house...raat kafi ho gayi hai isiliye kisi ko pata nahi hehehe...subah kya hoga?..kaun kya kehega....jane k liye...plz comment 😆 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
farah yaara dear me very happy that you continued....tumne mujhe is part ke liye bada tarsaya....lekin ab me totally khush.. 😃
ab rahi baat is part ki tho main kahoon tho kya kahoon....bada mazzaa aaya mujhe yeh part padkar....sujal , kashish saath mein kitne pyaare , sweet , cute hain..un dono ke beech ki baatein.....the emotions tooogood....... every emotion , every dialogue dil ko choo gaya......seriously zabardast.......... 👏 aur unka romance..hye hye..that is just unexpressable... unka romamce ke scenes pad ke jee kartha hain main mar jawa gudh khake...main tho sharam se pani pani ho rahi hoo...... 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
ab yeh anjali sujal aur kashish ke hasi khushi zindagi par apni nazar laga rahi hain.... uski tho main....agar unse aise kuch kiya tho main uske aankh phod doongi....😡
u know what i want to tell anjali " buri nazar waale tera mooh kala"....anjali sujal , kashish se durr raho warna main tumhara mooh kala kar doongi..... 😆
hmm..yeh sujal ko chakku lag gayi.. 😭 lekin you know in sab mein mujhe ek cheez bohat bohat achchi lagi woh yeh ki jab woh gunde anjali ko chaid rahe the tho sujal bas warning de raha tha unko par jab un logo ne kashish ke baare mein kuch kaha tho sujal ne tho unki baand hi baja di...wah wah wah..mazza aagaya....isse kehthe hain na pyaar...sacha pyaar...... sujal tho har baar ki tarah cha gaya... 👏
yeh sujal , kashish itne dayalu kaise ho gaye..us anjali ko apne ghar le gaye... baddd very baddddddddddddddddddd........... 😕
sujal , kashish ka part hamesha ki tarah was awesome....very coollllllllllllllllll........the end was really very cute... 😳ab i want to see subah kya hoga ?? kaun kya kahega ??? me sure vasu apna mooh zaroor kholegi... 😆
i hope anjali ka intazaam jaldi se kahiin aur ho jaye...aur woh sujal , kashish ki zindagi se chali jaye.... 😉 waise dear tum meri taraf se kashish ko ek baat kehna ki woh bilkul sahi hain as she thinks that anjali jaisi dikhthi hain waise hain nahi..aur joh hain woh dikana nahi chahthi....me also thinking anjali itni bhi dhood ki duli nahi hain....... me supporting kashish thought... 😆
ab chal tu next part jaldi se post karna... me very very very very very very very very very very damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn eager to read the next part.... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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