lol..ullu kiran hehehe.....sorry guys this part is written by kiran....bahut mehnat se.....stop giving me the credit😳..awww.....but she wasnt satisfied with the last part hehee.....isiliye she wrote one which she had imagined...so here it is😃.....luv yaa babez😳😳😉....aur mera comment hai k this part rocked.....amazing portrayal of emotions👏......
so here it goes....
kashish:...suujaal...
sujal apna sar upar karta hai and finds kashish's trying to move her lips.....aur halke se sujal ko pukar rahi thi.....
sujal holds onto her hand....
sujal:..kashish!!..(a smile spreads over his face...yet his eyes were still num....woh chahta tha k kashish laut aye..par woh yeh bhi janta tha k kashish k hosh mein ane k baad......kashish ko sambhalna bahut mushkil hone wala tha....(hehehe jungli ho jati hai woh....)…
sujal:..kashish!!….(touches her face…kashish ahista se apni ankhein kholti hai….)
Kashish: sujaall......(tries to sit up) main yahan???
Sujal: (makes her lie down) leti raho kashish... (avoiding the question)...tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai...
Kashish: sujal woh....main tumhain kuch batana chahti hun...aj tumhain bina bataye mein chali gai...(pareshan si)
Sujal: main sab janta hun Kashish...tumhain mujhe kuch batane ki zarurat nahi...tum filhaal sirf araam kero...ghar chal ker baat kerein ge...hmmm??
kashish: sujal....rohaan kahan hai??? (worried...)
sujal: woh theek hai..bahir mumma ke pas hai...
kashish: kia??? mumma bhi yahan hain...kia sujal tum bhi na....choti si baat per bhi sab ko pareshan ker dete ho...
sujal: main....main tumhare liye kuch khannay ko laun..(totally trying to change the topic)
kashish: nahi plz...(holds his hand) tum yahiin betho...mere pass....mujhe kuch ajeeb sa feel ho raha hai...rohan ki chinta ho rahi hai mujhe...usse plz andar le ao...(smlining)
sujal nods....gets up....turns his back on kashish and wipes away a tear
sujal: ab main kese bataun kashish ko keh uss ka mann rohan ke lie nahi...humare uss bache ke liye ghabra raha hai jo ab....(ansu saaf ker ke bahir jata hai)
he comes out to see everypone looking worried
mehak: sujal bhaiya....ab di kaisi hain??? (she is holding rohan in her arms....he is fasttt asleep, suckling on his thumb aye haye heehhehe)
sujal: woh ab theek hai....baqi sab kahan gaye???
mehak: maine unhain ghar bhej dia....aisse hi yahan pareshan ho rahay thay...maien unse keh dia keh agar kuch hua to hum unhain bata deinge...par sub di ki bhut chinta kar rahay thay...
sujal: hmmm...acha kiya tumne....tum bhi kuch ja kar khaa lo....aur lao...rohan ko mujhe do....
mehak: (ahista se rohan ko sujal ke bahon main deti hai...jo halki si karwat badal ker sujal ke saath lag ker so jata hai awww baby hehehe) bhaiya wo....doctors ne bataya....di ka miscarriage....
sujal: haan mehak....shayed woh upar wala humain khushi dene se pehle hi wapis cheen leta hai....(looking up)
mehak: (puts a hand on his arm) nahi bhaiya..agar ap tuut gaye to di ko kaun himmat deyga....ap nniraash matt huye....humar eliye to itna hi bhut hai keh kashish di safe hain...
sujal: tum theek keh rahi ho mehak...(smiles with an effort) main andar jata hun kashish akeli hai....
mehak: jee...
sujal slowly opens the door andar kashish bethi ussi ka intezar ekr rahi thi...rohan ko sujal ke pass dke ker she smiles...sujal comes and sits beside her...holding rohan
Kashish gently strokes rohan's head....
kashish: lao isse mujhe de do....(smiling)
sujal ahista se rohan ko kashish ko de deta hai.....rohan puts his head against kashish's chest and goes to sleep after mumbling a bit in his sleep....kashish smiles and hugs him to her, kisses his forehead
kashish: pata nahi iss ne khana bhi khaya hoga ke nai.....(looks at sujal) mumma ne kuch khilya isse???
sujal: pata nahi..
kashish: yeh janab bhi to itne ladle hain keh mere siva kisi ke haath se khana hi nahi khatay...
sujal smiles, trying to hide his tears...par kashish dkeh leti hai super eyes hehehehhee
apne free hand se woh sujal ke hata per haath rakhti hai
kashish: kia baat hai sujal....tum bhut pareshan dikh rahay ho....sab theek to hai na???
sujal: haan woh....sab sahi hai...(smiles)
kashish: lagta to nahi hai sujal....tum mujhsse jhut kabse bolne lag gaye....batao na kia hua...tum pareshan kyun ho???
sujal: bass woh....tum jab operation theatre main thi to mujhe laga tha main tumhain iss baar kho dunga.....aik darr sa tha mann main ke kahiin tumhain kuch ho gaya to main kese jee paunga...ab tumhain aur rohan ko dekh ekr lagta hai keh sach main humain tumhari bhut zarurat hai......meri yeh choti si dunia ab bhi sirf tumhare naam se qaim hai...warna....(looks away)
kashish: sujaall!!!! humari yeh dunia qaim hai to hum donon ke honey se....tum ho to main hun....hum main se koi aik bhi dusre ke beghair zinda nahi reh sakta....aur yehi humari sabse barri taqat hai.....woh taqat jo ab hum donon k beech koi ghalatfehmi koi darar koi mushkilain kharri nahi hone dega......hain na???
sujal nods his head.....kashish smiles
kashish: thats more like it....tum rote huye bilkul achay nahi lagte....(looks down at rohan) mujhe to lagne laga hai ke rohan tumhari copy banta ja raha hai....wohi ankhain, wohi naak, wohi hont, wohi ghussa....
she looks up cheekily at him, smiling.....sujal just gives a small smile...this time kashish senses sum real trouble...
she puts rohan on the bed, cover him with the sheet and then makes haste in getting up....
as soon as she gets up she feels a sever pain in her stomach...
she stumbles...sujal aik dumm se ussay pakar ke bithata hai....
sujal: kashish!! tumhain kaha na maine...bethi raho...tumhain araam ki zarurat hai....
kashish ko aik dum se kuch hota hai...she looks at sujal with a fear in her eyes....
sujal uss ke kandhe per haath rakhta hai but she jerks it away.....
she takes her hand slowly to her stomach and touches it....she could feel sumfink under her kameez....
she hastily gets up and goes to the bathroom....
sujal sits down, with his head in his hands...now kashish was bound to find out
kashish goes inside and sees keh uss ke pait per kuch patian bandhi hui hai (bandaged)....she looks at herself in the mirror in horror....
sujal paces up and down the room..tensed for kashish....
kashis ahista se bathroom se bahir nikalti hai....and luks at sujal....she leans against the doorside in pain and shock......keeps her gaze steady on sujal...
sujal murr ker dekhta hai kashish ko to he starts runnig up to her par kashish apne haath ke ishare se ussay rok deti hai...
kashish: nahi....nahiiiii!!!! (mumbling to ehrself) aissa nahi ho sakta...aisa kaise ho sakta hai..mere saath yeh nahi ho sakta...zarur mujhe ghalatfehmi hui hai...ya yeh koi khawab hai....
she goes over to the bed....sujal follows
sujal: kashish tum plz.....(trying to hold her but she jerks his arms away....she in so much shock its like a trance hehhee yani madhoshi ka alam hehehehehh)
kashish: nahi....kuch nahi hua mujhe....kuch nahi hua mere bache ko...abhi to yeh achi khabar humain sab ko sunani hai....
sujal: kashish plz khud ko sambhalo...humara bacha....(tears fall down but he is more worried at kashish's reaction)
kashish: yeh tumhain kese pata.....maine to tumhain bataya hi nahi....(smiles weridly...there are tears in ehr eyes but she is in shock) sujal....humari dunia main aik aur mehman annay wala hai...tum papa bannay walay ho....suna tumne....tuma papa bananay walay ho....
sujal: kashish plz....(holds her)
kashish: tum khush nahi ho sujal??? aisse mun latka ke kyun kharray ho.....main maa bannay wali hun....rohan ka bhai ya behen iss dunia main anany wala hai......
sujal ke ansu bahay ja rahay thay
kashish looks at him...at once speaks grudgingly, angrily
kashish: sujal!!! tum ro kyun rahay ho...yeh koi ronnay ki baat hai...(wipes his tears vigorously from his face) yeh khush honey ki baat hai...hanso....khush ho...itni barri khsuhi annay wlai hai aur tum ho ke...koi baat nahi...main mumma ko bataun gi na...woh bhut khush ho jaynegi...mehak to pgal ho jayegi sun ke...main abhi unhain ja ker batati huun...
wildly she starts moving towards the door...sujal holds her arm...this time with froce
sujal: BAS KASHISH BASS!!! BAASS KER DO YEH SAB....KISI KO KUCH NAHI BATANA HAI...KUCH NAHI.....
kashish: sujal!!!! yeh baat kyun nahi batani kisi ko.....humara bacha...
sujal: HUMARA BACHA MARR CHUKA HAI!!! SUNA TUMNE...MARR CHUKA HAI HUMARA BACHA.....
kashish: SUJALLL!!!! yeh kia keh rahay ho tum.....mujhe pata hai...kuch nahi hua hai mere bache ko....KUCH NAHI HUA HAI MERE BACHE KO....MAIN USSAY APNE ANDAR MEHSOOS KER SAKTI HUN..US KI SANSAIN USS KI DHARKANAIN.......
Sujal khench ke kashish ko thapar marta hai....to get her out of shock
sujal: KASHISHHH!!! TUM SAMAJH KYUN NAHI RAHI HO.....HUMARA BACHA ISS DUNIA MAIN NAHI RAHA...NA TO WOH AB TUMHARI KORK MAIN PALL RAHA HAI AUR NA HI WOH KABHI ISS DUNIA MAI AYEGA....TUM SAMAJH KYUN NAHI RAHI!!! (crying...)
Kashish is standing there.....out of shock hehehehe.....thapar ke baad...she looks at sujal...whose tears falil
sujal: nahi ayega kashish...woh nahi ayega...(looking at her)
she slowly realises the fact.....ahista ahista uss ki ankhon main ansu attay hain....wh bilakne lagti hai....her tears fall.....when the full reality hits her she screams out (sititng on the bed)
kashish: MERA BACHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! SUJAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLL...MERA BACHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.....MERA BACHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA....(holding her stomach she starts crying)
Sujal holds her and she clings to him...crying...sujal is also crying.....he puts his arms around her, trying to quietn her down.....
kashish: Sujalll....Sujaalll...(breathless) mujhe mera bacha chahiye.......mujhe mera bacha chahiye....mujhe la ker do....mera bacha...mujhe kaise chor skata hai....mujhe mera bacha chahiye...(holds sujal's collar crying helplessly) sujal pleaseeee....pleaseeeeeee mujhe mera baccha la do...main iss ke baad tumse kuch nahi mangu gi....pleaseeeeeee sujal..pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeee.....mera bacha la ddoo....
woh sujal ke aggay apne haath jorti hai
kashish: sujal...main tumhare aggay haath jorti hun....paun parti hun....pleaseeee sujalll...pleaseeee muje mera bacha de do na...(starts crying even more)
Sujal just cries n cries...holding kashish...tryng to calm her down...
kashish: tumhain yaad hai sujal...aik baar pehle bhi......(sujal at once looks at her) main piyush ka bacha kho chuki hun sujal...unki akhri nishani bhi maine gawa di...aur ab tumse bhi tumhari khsuhi cheeen li main ne...kyuuuunnn??? kyuuun aissa hota hai mere saath......(she puts her head against his chest and starts crying)
sujal looks at her in shock, thinking: kia kasishh ab takk piyush ko yaad ko apne dil se nahi nikal payi???? woh aj bhi muujhe apne bachay ka qatil manti hai....
anyhow...he puts his arms around her and makes her stop crying
after some time...kashish calms down...but her tears dun stop...
sujal: kashish plz...sambhalo khud ko...tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai....
by now kashish is so limp with crying that she easily lies down when sujal makes her.....she lies down but the tears keep pouring down...
sujal sits near her...and cleans her face....kashish duznt respond.....
as she lies down, rohan stirs beside her... (barra dheet sa bacha hai....itne cheekhain sun ker bhi soya raha heheeh)
she looks at rohan....who is awake now...he starts crying...
for a few seconds he keeps on crying.....when kashish looks at him and tears sweelll into her eyes...she adjusts herself into a sitting possition with sujal's help and picks up rohan in her arms
rohan: maammmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! mmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmaaaaaaaa...(irritating bacho ki tarah ro rhaa hai heheheheh)
kashish holds her to herself...and kisses him all over his face...then slowly pats him and makes him stop crying
kashish: mama yahiin hain rohan....(kisses his forehead)
now rohan is quiet...he is quietly lying down in kashish's lap....while sujal is sitting beside...her....trying to console...he has an arm around her and her head is resting on his shoulder
a tear drops from kashish's eyes....which travels down her cheeks...
rohan sits up in her lap and looks up at her....then with his tin cute finger he wipes away kashish's tear
rohan: naaaa.......(shaking his face in a no direction)
kashish smiles despite herself...and looks at sujal.....who himself wipes her tears and kisses her forehead......she holds rohan in her arms.....and as sujal watches them, he can control himslef and he puts an arm around both of them....all three of them hugging at the same time....awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
sujal: bas kashish.....bass.....ab tum nahi rogi...
kashish looks up at him...
sujal: tum kyun roti ho kashish??? kia tumhain bhagwan ka ishara samajh nahi araha....woh kehna chah rahay hain keh beyshak humne aik bhut precious cheez ko kho diya hai....par woh jo humari zindagi ka sabse ahem hissa hai.....humara beta rohan...abhi bhi sahi salamat humare pass hai
kashish looks at him then at rohan....who is mumbling to himself hehehe....
sujal pats kashish's head
sujal: beshak woh bacha nahi raha lekin thank God kashish....humare pass rohan to hai...(kisses rohan)
kashish smiles....nods her head
kashish: yeah...thank God...thank God keh mere pass tum bbhi ho aur rohan bhi.....
sujal shakes his head saying yes u r rite...and then they all hug again...while rohan gurgles, kashish smiles and sujal is atlast content...hehehhehe
thats it......ab aggay kia ho ga...yhe janany ke liye keep readin n commmeting.....Kiran!! (kahish-rox)😉
Edited by rajeev1 - 18 years ago