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Posted: 18 years ago
hey plz continue soon.....cant wait to read more of ur ff 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
hmm wow thaks God k kashish ko kuch nahi hua but im sad k they lsot their child 😭 😭 plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice 2 knw kashish is safe... 😃 ...bt lst her baby... 😭 ..feelng sad.....gr8 wrk.. 👏 ..do cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago



lolz....mera result acha agaya...isiliye kashish ko bacha liya hehehe..warna paka gayi thi is bar woh 😆 😆 ....thank uu alll for commenting..... 😳 😳 😳 ...

recap:...oh noo....itna senti dailogues k baad...kashish maut k mun se waapis ati hai...... 😉 ab agayee...

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kashish:...suujaal...
sujal apna sar upar karta hai and finds kashish's trying to move her lips.....aur halke se sujal ko pukar rahi thi.....

sujal holds onto her hand....

sujal:..kashish!!..(a smile spreads over his face...yet his eyes were still num....woh chahta tha k kashish laut aye..par woh yeh bhi janta tha k kashish k hosh mein ane k baad......kashish ko sambhalna bahut mushkil hone wala tha....(hehehe jungli ho jati hai woh....)…

sujal:..kashish!!….(touches her face…kashish ahista se apni ankhein kholti hai….and sujal springs up from the bed….and goes out…

sujal:..doctor…(slide marta hai heheh)….DOCTOR….
rishi:..kya huwa big b???
sujal:..(hehehe….bacha ho gaya lol…..nahi sorry guys…hehehe)

sujal:..kashish ko hosh…..usko hosh agaya hai….doctor kahan hai??? (holds onto rish's shoulders)
akshat:………mein bula k lata ho………….(everyone was running everywhere…but sujal ki nazar doc peh pehle pari and finally the doc went inside to chk kashish….

Tab tak bahir dekhte hain kya ho raha tha….
Sujal was walking outside…..jab wahan lalit ata hai…

Lalit:..sujal…..yeh doctor ..bache k bare mein kya keh rahe the…
Everyone looks at sujal….sujal comes to a halt…
Sujal:..woh……(looks down)….kashish maa bane wali thi…
Veena:..kyaaa??? (all worried)
Sujal:…mumma…..kashish yeh baat jaan kar…..(apne sar peh haath rakhta hai…all tensed)
Veena:..sujal…..beta tuje uski himmat bana hai……usse is ghum se nikalne mein madat karni hogi…..
Sujal:..janta ho mumma…..is waqt usse meri zarurat hai……par meri himmat kaun banega???……(he couldn't control his tears….so ankhein and kar ke he turned around……….veena se sujal ka dukh dekha nahi ja raha tha……..even rishi….akshat , mehak and lalit were all depressed…….ussi waqt koi sujal ki pant kheechta hai hehehehe…sorry halke se hilata hai…

Sujal turns around to find rohan standing near sujal's legs hehe..chota sa to hai …….and he was pulling his pants….to get attention….

Sujal looks at him….aur phir crouches on his knees….
Sujal:….. (smiles)….rohan….
Rohan..points his tiny finger at sujal's eyes…..:….iiizzz……
Sujal ankhein jhukata hai……and his tears flow…..
Rohan touches his tears….:….nooo…..(he nods his head in a no direction…..sujal smiles at rohan's reaction….)

Sujal:…papa ro nahi rahe beta…..

Peeche background score bajta hai…as sujal looks at rohan…..and rohan cutely blinks

Zindagi har pal apne…imthihaan kyun leti hai…
Khushiyon k har sagar mein…ghum bhi chalka deti hai…
(sujal wpies his tears)
kaise samjhe kismet ki badalti dastaan ko…(he looks at rohan…and then quickly wraps him up in his arms….hugging him tightly)
jo bhi khushiyan hain baqi…..hans k unko apna lo….
Shikwaaaa hum kissseee karein…hooooooooo….dard bhi kaiseee sahein….(sujal controls himself)…tuta hai sapna saathii……..bikhara hai ashiana…..andhi jo chayiii…..
Thoda saa pyaar huwa thaa…thoda hai baqiii………….

……….itni der mein doc comes out…

rishi:..doc….kashish bhabie??
Mehak:..woh theek hain na??
Doc:..dekhiye..she is stable now…..its really a miracle…(he looks at sujal while saying this)….unhe kamre mein shift kardiya gaya hai…….
Sujal smiles slightly….:..mein mil sakta ho…
Doc:..woh…apko hi bula rahi hain…..
Sujal was about to walk off….when the doc interruptes…
Doc:…mr garewal……pyaar mein takat hoti hai..suna tha………aj dekh bhi liya…(pats sujal on his shoulder…..)
Sujal bina kuch kahe kashish k kamre ki taraf barta hai……..

………
kashish;s room………she was still lying on the bed….sujal halke se kamre ka darwaza kholta hai….

Kashish:…sujal!
Sujal:…(came inside)…kaisi tabiyat hai…
Kashish:..(tries to get up)….bhetar ho…..
Sujal:..kashish…leti raho…(foran se ussse wapis leta hai…)..tumhe araam ki zarurat hai….
Kashish:…sujal…..(touches her tummy)…tumse kuch kehna tha…
Sujal knew kashish was about to tell him that woh ma bane wali hai…….sujal apna haath kashish k haath peh rakhta hai….
Sujal:…tum araam karo…..baatein baad mein kareinge…
Kashish:…sujal….baat zaruri hai….(smiles)……mein pehle batana chahti thi par……pichle kuch dino mein….muje mauka hi nahi mila………sujal (she holds sujal's hand aur apne pait peh rakhti hai….)……mein maa bane wali ho….(she looks at him ..all smiles……par sujal ki ankhein num thi……his smile had even faded….)

Sujal ahista se apna haath peeche karta hai aur mun dosri taraf karta hai…
Kashish:..kya baat hai……(she manages to sit up)……I am sorry sujal….mein pehle batana chahti thi par……..naraz ho mujse???….(she asks innocently)

Sujal:..kashish….woh….
Kashish:…..acha mujse narazgi jayaz hai…par is mein…..humare ane wale mehmaan ka kya kasoor??….hmmm???

Sujal:….kashish plz….
Now kashish knew something is wrong….sujal ki awaaz mein dard tha…
Kashish:..sujal……kya baat hai??
Sujal was quite….
Kashish:….tum chup kyun ho???…kuch bolte kyun nahi???….sujal…..tumhari khamoshi muje dara rahi hai…….baat kya hai???
Sujal:…..kashish mein….baad mein ata ho…tum araam karo…(he turns around …ankhon mein ansoo the…..chehre peh dard….he tried to walk away…kashish usse rukne k liye bed se hilli……and she felt some pain….

Kashish:..aaaah….(foran se pait peh haath rakha….sujal turned around and caught her before she falls down…)

Sujal:..kashish….tum theek ho na?/
Kashish:..(jo k jhuki hui thi….head down….looks up at sujal…..her eyes were wide open in shock……..)….mera…….(she looked down again….aur phir dobara sujal ko dekhti hai)…….mera bacha…..

Sujal:…kashish…..(he didn't know what to say……he made her stand up and wrpped his arms around her…)

Kashish was in a state of shock…
Sujal:..hum usse kho chuke hain kashish…….(his tears fell but he kept his voice stern….taake kashish ko sambhal sake)……..operation k waqt who…
Kashish:..nahi!!..nAHII…NAHIIIII…..(she cried louder but sujal didn't let go off her….)…aisa nahi ho sakta…..mera bacha…..(she looked at sujal…who just wouldn't let go off her (hehehe….woh janta tha do teen cheezein tor degi ….bill to sujal ne hi dena tha heheh)….
Kashish:..tum jante the…tab bhi….kyun kiya aisa sujal……..humara bacha…..(she cried and cried…)

Sujal:…..tumse barr kar aur kuch nahi hai kashish……..
Kashish:…nahi ….nahiiiii…(hichkiyan leti hai)
Sujal:..hum saath hain to…..sab theek ho jayega…
Kashish sujal se lipat k roye ja rahi thi…..
Sujal:….meri duniya to bus tumse shuru hoti hai kashish……..(he was trying to calm her down)….aur tumhari mujse…….jaise har kadam peh humne aj tak ek dosra ka saath diya hai…ussi tarah….aj bhi….. ….hum saath reh kar is dard se lareinge …hain na……

Kashish was quite
Sujal:….tum saath do gi na mera??….
Kashish apna sar utha ti hai……and looks at sujal….both were crying……
Kashish:…..sab meri waja se huwa na??
Sujal:….yeh nahi suna chahta tha….(wipes her tears)
Kashish:..(gently touches sujal's cheek)….tum na bhi kaho tab bhi mein janti ho…..tumhe sab se zaida takleef mein hi deti ho
Sujal:..kashish….
Kashish:…tumhari ankhon mein saja har khuwaab tor deti ho…..tumhare khushiyan hamesha…..(cries more)…phir bhi tum uff tak nahi karte……ek shikayat nahi……
Sujal:…..agar khud ko dobara ilzaam diya….to mein tumse phir kabhie baat nahi karunga…
Kashish hugs sujal…..:…..muje maaf kardo……(she cries helplessly and sujal hugs her back…..shedding tears…)

Itni der mein room ka darwaza khulta hai……and rohan baby walks inside….uske juton mein se awaaz ati hai hehe woh chu chu wali….sujal and kashish part and look at him…..

Rohan:..maaa maaa…
Kashish (wipes her tears and picks him up and kisses him…loads of kisses….):..rohaan…(she hugs him and keeps on kissing him hehe)
Sujal:..(apne ansoo saaf karta hai….aur rohan k sar peh haath pherta hai)……mein ne kaha tha…hum saath hain…to sab theek ho jayega……..humari duniya ab bhi abaad hai…kashish

Kashish comes into sujal's arm…and all three stand inside the room….embracing eachother…..
Aur ro bhi rahe the hehehe..bechare…awww..chalo koi nahi..rohan hai na abhi zinda hehehe…
Bahir darwaze peh veena was standing…and she wiped her tears!!!

Uff..sorry agar kuch emotions missing hon to..bari jaldhi mein likha hai…lol…..will updae soon….
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey great part.... very emotional part.....i hope kaahish gets out that sadma soon......😭
Edited by ami_princess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part!!!!!!!!!!! 😛
yeh log kitna rota hai yaar!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
this was so touchy part dear 😭 i hope ab agay kuch bura na ho .......! 😡 😡 aur kahin kuch iasa na ho k kashish kabhi Ma nahi ban paye Or some thing liek that 😭 n e wayz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol..ullu kiran hehehe.....sorry guys this part is written by kiran....bahut mehnat se.....stop giving me the credit😳..awww.....but she wasnt satisfied with the last part hehee.....isiliye she wrote one which she had imagined...so here it is😃.....luv yaa babez😳😳😉....aur mera comment hai k this part rocked.....amazing portrayal of emotions👏......

so here it goes....

kashish:...suujaal...
sujal apna sar upar karta hai and finds kashish's trying to move her lips.....aur halke se sujal ko pukar rahi thi.....

sujal holds onto her hand....

sujal:..kashish!!..(a smile spreads over his face...yet his eyes were still num....woh chahta tha k kashish laut aye..par woh yeh bhi janta tha k kashish k hosh mein ane k baad......kashish ko sambhalna bahut mushkil hone wala tha....(hehehe jungli ho jati hai woh....)…

sujal:..kashish!!….(touches her face…kashish ahista se apni ankhein kholti hai….)
Kashish: sujaall......(tries to sit up) main yahan???
Sujal: (makes her lie down) leti raho kashish... (avoiding the question)...tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai...
Kashish: sujal woh....main tumhain kuch batana chahti hun...aj tumhain bina bataye mein chali gai...(pareshan si)
Sujal: main sab janta hun Kashish...tumhain mujhe kuch batane ki zarurat nahi...tum filhaal sirf araam kero...ghar chal ker baat kerein ge...hmmm??
kashish: sujal....rohaan kahan hai??? (worried...)
sujal: woh theek hai..bahir mumma ke pas hai...
kashish: kia??? mumma bhi yahan hain...kia sujal tum bhi na....choti si baat per bhi sab ko pareshan ker dete ho...
sujal: main....main tumhare liye kuch khannay ko laun..(totally trying to change the topic)
kashish: nahi plz...(holds his hand) tum yahiin betho...mere pass....mujhe kuch ajeeb sa feel ho raha hai...rohan ki chinta ho rahi hai mujhe...usse plz andar le ao...(smlining)

sujal nods....gets up....turns his back on kashish and wipes away a tear
sujal: ab main kese bataun kashish ko keh uss ka mann rohan ke lie nahi...humare uss bache ke liye ghabra raha hai jo ab....(ansu saaf ker ke bahir jata hai)
he comes out to see everypone looking worried

mehak: sujal bhaiya....ab di kaisi hain??? (she is holding rohan in her arms....he is fasttt asleep, suckling on his thumb aye haye heehhehe)
sujal: woh ab theek hai....baqi sab kahan gaye???
mehak: maine unhain ghar bhej dia....aisse hi yahan pareshan ho rahay thay...maien unse keh dia keh agar kuch hua to hum unhain bata deinge...par sub di ki bhut chinta kar rahay thay...
sujal: hmmm...acha kiya tumne....tum bhi kuch ja kar khaa lo....aur lao...rohan ko mujhe do....
mehak: (ahista se rohan ko sujal ke bahon main deti hai...jo halki si karwat badal ker sujal ke saath lag ker so jata hai awww baby hehehe) bhaiya wo....doctors ne bataya....di ka miscarriage....
sujal: haan mehak....shayed woh upar wala humain khushi dene se pehle hi wapis cheen leta hai....(looking up)
mehak: (puts a hand on his arm) nahi bhaiya..agar ap tuut gaye to di ko kaun himmat deyga....ap nniraash matt huye....humar eliye to itna hi bhut hai keh kashish di safe hain...
sujal: tum theek keh rahi ho mehak...(smiles with an effort) main andar jata hun kashish akeli hai....
mehak: jee...

sujal slowly opens the door andar kashish bethi ussi ka intezar ekr rahi thi...rohan ko sujal ke pass dke ker she smiles...sujal comes and sits beside her...holding rohan
Kashish gently strokes rohan's head....
kashish: lao isse mujhe de do....(smiling)
sujal ahista se rohan ko kashish ko de deta hai.....rohan puts his head against kashish's chest and goes to sleep after mumbling a bit in his sleep....kashish smiles and hugs him to her, kisses his forehead
kashish: pata nahi iss ne khana bhi khaya hoga ke nai.....(looks at sujal) mumma ne kuch khilya isse???
sujal: pata nahi..
kashish: yeh janab bhi to itne ladle hain keh mere siva kisi ke haath se khana hi nahi khatay...
sujal smiles, trying to hide his tears...par kashish dkeh leti hai super eyes hehehehhee
apne free hand se woh sujal ke hata per haath rakhti hai
kashish: kia baat hai sujal....tum bhut pareshan dikh rahay ho....sab theek to hai na???
sujal: haan woh....sab sahi hai...(smiles)
kashish: lagta to nahi hai sujal....tum mujhsse jhut kabse bolne lag gaye....batao na kia hua...tum pareshan kyun ho???
sujal: bass woh....tum jab operation theatre main thi to mujhe laga tha main tumhain iss baar kho dunga.....aik darr sa tha mann main ke kahiin tumhain kuch ho gaya to main kese jee paunga...ab tumhain aur rohan ko dekh ekr lagta hai keh sach main humain tumhari bhut zarurat hai......meri yeh choti si dunia ab bhi sirf tumhare naam se qaim hai...warna....(looks away)
kashish: sujaall!!!! humari yeh dunia qaim hai to hum donon ke honey se....tum ho to main hun....hum main se koi aik bhi dusre ke beghair zinda nahi reh sakta....aur yehi humari sabse barri taqat hai.....woh taqat jo ab hum donon k beech koi ghalatfehmi koi darar koi mushkilain kharri nahi hone dega......hain na???
sujal nods his head.....kashish smiles
kashish: thats more like it....tum rote huye bilkul achay nahi lagte....(looks down at rohan) mujhe to lagne laga hai ke rohan tumhari copy banta ja raha hai....wohi ankhain, wohi naak, wohi hont, wohi ghussa....
she looks up cheekily at him, smiling.....sujal just gives a small smile...this time kashish senses sum real trouble...
she puts rohan on the bed, cover him with the sheet and then makes haste in getting up....
as soon as she gets up she feels a sever pain in her stomach...
she stumbles...sujal aik dumm se ussay pakar ke bithata hai....
sujal: kashish!! tumhain kaha na maine...bethi raho...tumhain araam ki zarurat hai....
kashish ko aik dum se kuch hota hai...she looks at sujal with a fear in her eyes....
sujal uss ke kandhe per haath rakhta hai but she jerks it away.....
she takes her hand slowly to her stomach and touches it....she could feel sumfink under her kameez....
she hastily gets up and goes to the bathroom....
sujal sits down, with his head in his hands...now kashish was bound to find out

kashish goes inside and sees keh uss ke pait per kuch patian bandhi hui hai (bandaged)....she looks at herself in the mirror in horror....
sujal paces up and down the room..tensed for kashish....

kashis ahista se bathroom se bahir nikalti hai....and luks at sujal....she leans against the doorside in pain and shock......keeps her gaze steady on sujal...
sujal murr ker dekhta hai kashish ko to he starts runnig up to her par kashish apne haath ke ishare se ussay rok deti hai...

kashish: nahi....nahiiiii!!!! (mumbling to ehrself) aissa nahi ho sakta...aisa kaise ho sakta hai..mere saath yeh nahi ho sakta...zarur mujhe ghalatfehmi hui hai...ya yeh koi khawab hai....
she goes over to the bed....sujal follows
sujal: kashish tum plz.....(trying to hold her but she jerks his arms away....she in so much shock its like a trance hehhee yani madhoshi ka alam hehehehehh)
kashish: nahi....kuch nahi hua mujhe....kuch nahi hua mere bache ko...abhi to yeh achi khabar humain sab ko sunani hai....
sujal: kashish plz khud ko sambhalo...humara bacha....(tears fall down but he is more worried at kashish's reaction)
kashish: yeh tumhain kese pata.....maine to tumhain bataya hi nahi....(smiles weridly...there are tears in ehr eyes but she is in shock) sujal....humari dunia main aik aur mehman annay wala hai...tum papa bannay walay ho....suna tumne....tuma papa bananay walay ho....
sujal: kashish plz....(holds her)
kashish: tum khush nahi ho sujal??? aisse mun latka ke kyun kharray ho.....main maa bannay wali hun....rohan ka bhai ya behen iss dunia main anany wala hai......
sujal ke ansu bahay ja rahay thay
kashish looks at him...at once speaks grudgingly, angrily
kashish: sujal!!! tum ro kyun rahay ho...yeh koi ronnay ki baat hai...(wipes his tears vigorously from his face) yeh khush honey ki baat hai...hanso....khush ho...itni barri khsuhi annay wlai hai aur tum ho ke...koi baat nahi...main mumma ko bataun gi na...woh bhut khush ho jaynegi...mehak to pgal ho jayegi sun ke...main abhi unhain ja ker batati huun...
wildly she starts moving towards the door...sujal holds her arm...this time with froce
sujal: BAS KASHISH BASS!!! BAASS KER DO YEH SAB....KISI KO KUCH NAHI BATANA HAI...KUCH NAHI.....
kashish: sujal!!!! yeh baat kyun nahi batani kisi ko.....humara bacha...
sujal: HUMARA BACHA MARR CHUKA HAI!!! SUNA TUMNE...MARR CHUKA HAI HUMARA BACHA.....
kashish: SUJALLL!!!! yeh kia keh rahay ho tum.....mujhe pata hai...kuch nahi hua hai mere bache ko....KUCH NAHI HUA HAI MERE BACHE KO....MAIN USSAY APNE ANDAR MEHSOOS KER SAKTI HUN..US KI SANSAIN USS KI DHARKANAIN.......
Sujal khench ke kashish ko thapar marta hai....to get her out of shock
sujal: KASHISHHH!!! TUM SAMAJH KYUN NAHI RAHI HO.....HUMARA BACHA ISS DUNIA MAIN NAHI RAHA...NA TO WOH AB TUMHARI KORK MAIN PALL RAHA HAI AUR NA HI WOH KABHI ISS DUNIA MAI AYEGA....TUM SAMAJH KYUN NAHI RAHI!!! (crying...)
Kashish is standing there.....out of shock hehehehe.....thapar ke baad...she looks at sujal...whose tears falil
sujal: nahi ayega kashish...woh nahi ayega...(looking at her)
she slowly realises the fact.....ahista ahista uss ki ankhon main ansu attay hain....wh bilakne lagti hai....her tears fall.....when the full reality hits her she screams out (sititng on the bed)
kashish: MERA BACHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! SUJAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLL...MERA BACHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.....MERA BACHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA....(holding her stomach she starts crying)
Sujal holds her and she clings to him...crying...sujal is also crying.....he puts his arms around her, trying to quietn her down.....
kashish: Sujalll....Sujaalll...(breathless) mujhe mera bacha chahiye.......mujhe mera bacha chahiye....mujhe la ker do....mera bacha...mujhe kaise chor skata hai....mujhe mera bacha chahiye...(holds sujal's collar crying helplessly) sujal pleaseeee....pleaseeeeeee mujhe mera baccha la do...main iss ke baad tumse kuch nahi mangu gi....pleaseeeeeee sujal..pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeee.....mera bacha la ddoo....

woh sujal ke aggay apne haath jorti hai
kashish: sujal...main tumhare aggay haath jorti hun....paun parti hun....pleaseeee sujalll...pleaseeee muje mera bacha de do na...(starts crying even more)
Sujal just cries n cries...holding kashish...tryng to calm her down...
kashish: tumhain yaad hai sujal...aik baar pehle bhi......(sujal at once looks at her) main piyush ka bacha kho chuki hun sujal...unki akhri nishani bhi maine gawa di...aur ab tumse bhi tumhari khsuhi cheeen li main ne...kyuuuunnn??? kyuuun aissa hota hai mere saath......(she puts her head against his chest and starts crying)
sujal looks at her in shock, thinking: kia kasishh ab takk piyush ko yaad ko apne dil se nahi nikal payi???? woh aj bhi muujhe apne bachay ka qatil manti hai....
anyhow...he puts his arms around her and makes her stop crying
after some time...kashish calms down...but her tears dun stop...
sujal: kashish plz...sambhalo khud ko...tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai....
by now kashish is so limp with crying that she easily lies down when sujal makes her.....she lies down but the tears keep pouring down...
sujal sits near her...and cleans her face....kashish duznt respond.....
as she lies down, rohan stirs beside her... (barra dheet sa bacha hai....itne cheekhain sun ker bhi soya raha heheeh)
she looks at rohan....who is awake now...he starts crying...
for a few seconds he keeps on crying.....when kashish looks at him and tears sweelll into her eyes...she adjusts herself into a sitting possition with sujal's help and picks up rohan in her arms
rohan: maammmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! mmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmaaaaaaaa...(irritating bacho ki tarah ro rhaa hai heheheheh)
kashish holds her to herself...and kisses him all over his face...then slowly pats him and makes him stop crying
kashish: mama yahiin hain rohan....(kisses his forehead)
now rohan is quiet...he is quietly lying down in kashish's lap....while sujal is sitting beside...her....trying to console...he has an arm around her and her head is resting on his shoulder
a tear drops from kashish's eyes....which travels down her cheeks...
rohan sits up in her lap and looks up at her....then with his tin cute finger he wipes away kashish's tear
rohan: naaaa.......(shaking his face in a no direction)
kashish smiles despite herself...and looks at sujal.....who himself wipes her tears and kisses her forehead......she holds rohan in her arms.....and as sujal watches them, he can control himslef and he puts an arm around both of them....all three of them hugging at the same time....awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
sujal: bas kashish.....bass.....ab tum nahi rogi...
kashish looks up at him...
sujal: tum kyun roti ho kashish??? kia tumhain bhagwan ka ishara samajh nahi araha....woh kehna chah rahay hain keh beyshak humne aik bhut precious cheez ko kho diya hai....par woh jo humari zindagi ka sabse ahem hissa hai.....humara beta rohan...abhi bhi sahi salamat humare pass hai
kashish looks at him then at rohan....who is mumbling to himself hehehe....
sujal pats kashish's head
sujal: beshak woh bacha nahi raha lekin thank God kashish....humare pass rohan to hai...(kisses rohan)
kashish smiles....nods her head
kashish: yeah...thank God...thank God keh mere pass tum bbhi ho aur rohan bhi.....
sujal shakes his head saying yes u r rite...and then they all hug again...while rohan gurgles, kashish smiles and sujal is atlast content...hehehhehe


thats it......ab aggay kia ho ga...yhe janany ke liye keep readin n commmeting.....Kiran!! (kahish-rox)😉
Edited by rajeev1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hmm wow that's so sweet of u u wrote teh part again with more emotionz n this was very nice again 😊 😭 well plz cont sooon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely part dear..... 👏 👏 cont soon 😊

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