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aishwaria thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
promise yaad hai na aaj post karna hai 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 haan bilkul yaad hai!!!

so heres the next part..........kth duiitiii

recap:..kashish jab sunsan jaga pohanchti hai..she finds anjali and another guy with anjali.....sujal also reaches there....but a little late...jab tak woh wahan pohancha....anjali aur woh admi kashish ko mar k ja chuke the..........sujal rushes her to the hospital.........ab agaye lol

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sujal kashish ko hospital le ata hai where she is under treatment.......

akshat:...kya huwa sujal?...(phone peh)
sujal:.......kashish hospital mein hai...
akshat:..WHAT!!...sab theek to hai??
sujal:....kuch pata nahi....(his voice sounded low).....do ghante ho chuke hain....koi kuch bata nahi raha!!

akshat:..tu fikar mat kar...hum wahan arahe hain........

phone disconnect hota tha...

veena:...kya kaha sujal ne?
akshat:...woh....kashish ko hospital le kar gaya hai.....detail mein nahi bataya...

lalit:..hospital??
akshat:..mein uske pass jata ho
veena:..(almost crying)...mein bhi chalungi
lalit:...chaliye bhabie....(CG out of town hai hehe)

they all leave....
ussi waqt rishi and mehak enter....they had gone out...

mehak:..aray!..ghar peh koi nahi hai...
rishi: (holds her around her waist)...matlab....more time for romance...
mehak smiles:..rishii...

vasu:...sab hospital gaye hain....(she speaks from upar wali balcony thi na...wahan se ehehe)

rishi leaves mehak and looks up

rishi:..hospital?? (frowns)..kyun??
vasu:...pata nahi....par shayad kashish ko kuch...
mehak:..DII....kya huwa dii ko???...rishi (she looks helplessy at rishi)

rishi:....aunty...(walks near the stairs)...kya huwa hai bhabie ko??

vasu:..shayad koi accident...i dont know!!...muje kisi ne kuch bataya nahi.... (she turns away)...

mehak:..rishi humein hospital jana chahiye...

rishi:..hmmm...chalo...........(rishi calls up akshat aur usse puchta hai hospital ka naam lol...logic hahaha)

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in the hospital....

veena:..sujal beta!!
sujal was sitting on a sofa outside the OT..hiding his face under his hands.....veena ki awaaz sun k....sujal ne sar uthaya...

sujal:..mumma....
veena was also carrying rohan

veena:..kashish kahan hai??..kaisi hai woh??...kya huwa tha??....kuch bata sujal.....(she was crying and asking just too many questions lol)

sujal:...kashish (looks at the OT.....his eyes were num.....he couldnt talk much so he turned around

rohan:...maamaa (lol hehehe...ajeeb bacha hai...)
sujal looks back at rohan....he goes and touches his cheeks...

sujal:..mama ane wali hain....(manages to give a weak smile and then picks up rohan in his arms)

veena:..yeh kis ki nazar lag gayi hai humare parivar ko....(hehehe bhet k rona rone lagi...)

sujal just stands by..leaning against a wall holding rohan...close to his chest.....

itni der mein mehak and rishi arrive...and join lalit and akshat....

mehak:..akshat...di?....
akshat:...mehak...sab theek ho jayega....kashish abhi andar hai.....doctors ne kuch kaha nahi....

while akshat was speaking itni der mein doctors ajate hain bahir.....and everyone jumps on them hehehehe

rishi:...kya huwa doctor...

doctor:..ap mein se...patient ka pati??

sujal:..mein ho!!

doctor:....apse kuch zaruri baat karni thi...

sujal:...kashish kaisi hai....

doctor:....umm...

sujal narrows his eyes....itni der se woh sirf yeh sunne k intezar kar raha tha k kashish is fine...she is out of danger....

sujal:...meri baat ka jawaab nahi diya...

doctor:...dekhiye....muje bahut afsoos k sath kehna par raha hai....k.....hum apke...hone wale bache ko bacha nahi sake...(the doc looks down)

sujal looses his balance for a second

veena:..bacha??

lalit looks at veena
after sharing a glance...everyone looks at sujal.....lol..as no one knew about it....

doctor:...apki wife ki condition bahut serious hai....unki inetrnal bleeding.....aur zehni sadme k karaan....recovery k chances bahut kum....

sujal:..BUSS!!! (he raised a hand in the air)....kashish ko ...kuch nahi hoga.....

the doctor looks at sujal...

doctor:...ap baat ko samaj nahi rahe....

sujal:...apko muje aur kuch samjhane ki zarurat nahi hai....

doc:..(chup ho jate hain...)..hum unhe ICU mein shift kar rahe hain......

sujal:..kya mein usse mil sakta ho

doc:..sure...par...zaida der nahi......shez very criti.....(but he doesnt finish the sentence....lol.....sujal gave him a deadly stare....)lol

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ICU....sujal walks in slowly.....as he sees kashish lying on the bed...resting....her eyes were closed...peacefully so rahi thi ...sujal came inside...the nurse was standing near by...

nurse:....(smiles)....hope she gets well soon! (yeh keh k the nurse leaves)

sujal:...hope nahi...she has to get well.....(comes near kashish and sits by)....tumne suna na kashish.....tumhe theek hona hoga.....(he holds her hand in his....).....yeh haath yunh chora k nahi jane donga tumhe......janmo janmo k saath hai humara....usse yunhi nahi tutne donga......tum suna rahi ho na kashish.....

kashish didnt respond...

sujal:....mein janta ho....k tumhe meri majudgi ka ehsaas hai.....aur mein yahan se tab tak nahi jaonga....jab tak tum apni ankhein khool k....mera yeh haath khud thaam k.....mera naam nahi leti.......mein tab tak nahi jaunga kashish!!!.......

(sujal ki ankh se ansoo girta hai....and he lightly touches kashish's tummy)....mein sab kuch kho k jee sakta ho kashish........par tumse duur hone ka khayal bhi maan mein nahi la sakta.......kashish plz.......meri baat ka jawab do.....meri taraf dekho......muje danto....mujse naraz ho jao.....par muje chor k.....(woh chup ho jata as he couldnt speak any further....his tears flowed......as he looked at kashish with love..and hope........

he kisses her hand...and sar peh haath pherta hai....

background:...jeeye to jeeye kaise... bin apke
jeeye to jeeyee kaise...bin apke
lagta nahi dil kahiiiiii.............bin apkeee.....(his tears flow down....and sujal closes his eyes in pain..)

jeeeye to jeeye kaise....bin apkeee....
jeeye to jeeye kaise .....bin apke

sujal remembers his time with kashish....the fisrt time they met in the car accident....the mouse scene..palampur...and a smile comes on his face....soon he comes out of his memory and finds kashish lying on the bed.....unconcious...

background...:kaise kaho..bina tere zindagi yeh kya hogi...
kaise kaho..bina tere zindagi yeh kya hogi...(he remembers how kashish left him...yellow kapron mein jo scene tha..before rajeev actually left the show)

jaise koi saza koi baduaa hogi
jaise koi saza koi badua hogi..(he remembers how he longed for kashish...)

mein ne kiyaaa hai yeh faisla..jeena nahi hai tere binaaaaa
jeeye to jeeye..kaiseee...bin apkeee
jeeye to jeeyee kaiseee...bin apke...
lagta nahi dil kahiiiiii.........bin apke.....

sujal apne sar kashish k kandhe k paas rakhta hai....

sujal:..laut aaao kashish.....laut aao.....(his voice broke)....mein jee nahi paunga tumhare bina...

sujal felt the bed moving...koi hila ho jaise....he looked up at kashish....he saw kashish's lips moving...

kashish:..ssujaal....


hehehe...lol....shez back ...jaan nahi chore gi na yeh

😆 ...will continue shortly...tc and thanku everyone....luv you all 😃 😃
aishwaria thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
thank god kashish ko kuch nahiin hua, u kept your promise and continue soon

tareef to karna bhool hi gayi great part yaar
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Posted: 18 years ago
ya thank god kashish is fine..but her child. 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
hahahhahahahhahaha...
HAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA...
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!!!
😆
That was FUNNNY hehehehheheh!!! lolz..i mean woh sujal and doc wala scene......iss main bechre doc ki kia ghali.....lolz....now i am sure kashish is gonna wake up and create hell of a fuss...waiting for that hehehhee.....loved it....continueee......
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part farah.... 👏 👏 👏 .cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part 👏 so kashish hospital aa gayi 😊 aur yeh vasu just too much 😡 feeling bad for sk they lost their baby 😭 and rohan is too cute 😛 but i m happy too ki kashish ko hosh aa gaya 😃 but i m afarid ki sujal kashish ko kaise batayega ki she had lost her child keep posting
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Posted: 18 years ago
farah dear... kya tragic start diya hai tumne part ko... mera tho dil hii toot gaya... bechara sujal...uska aur kashish ke bachche ko bacha nahii paye... how sad is this... me feeling so bad for sujal , kashish... unka haalat itna helpless hai... i want seriously kill anjali... sujal , kashish ke problems , unke dukh kii zimedaar woh anjali hai.. i want to beat anjali jab thak uski jaan naa nikal jaye... sujal , kashish ka bachcha soo sad... un dono ke kitne sapne , kitne armaan sirf ek hii pal mein bikher gaye... unke armaano ko khuchal diya gaye.. me feeling damn bad.. rather i could say mujhko terrible lag raha hai unke haalat ke baare mein soch soch kar.... mereko mast rona bhii aa raha hai.. me seriously heart-broken... unki yeh haalat mujhse bardhast nahii ho raha hai... lekin aisi haalat mein bhi sujal ka yeh sochna kii uske liye sabse zyada emiyath uski biwi kashish rakhthi hai.. he is being so damn supportive.. sujal ka dil ro raha hai par phir bhi he is being strong for kashish... the scene in the hospital room sujal ka kashish se baat karna... this scene was very damn touchy... dil ko choo gaya... sujal ka flashback ko sochna... kashish ka sujal kii pukaar ko sunkar hosh mein aana and she slowly whispering saying... this shows sujal ke pyaar mein kitni zyada takkat hai.... sujal ka pyaar aisa hai kii woh apne pyaar ko maut ke mooh se bhi cheen kar laa saktha hai.. each and every emotion you have shown in this part is damn amazing... it leaves a impact on the reader... and that too a very ghehra chaap... emotions potrayed really well... keep up the good work going...your writing is simply great... 👏 waise dear for the next coming parts mera guess yeh hoga kii kashish ko yeh baat jaan kar jhatka lagega kii she has lost her child... woh ek dum toot jayegi... her emotions , uska cheekna chillana , uska rona all will become uncontrollable... kashish ek tarah se frantic ho jayegi.. sujal kashish ko sambalega... there will be too much of emotional scene between sujal , kashish... sujal , kashish dono saath milkar royenge... aise mushkhil waqt mein sujal , kashish dono ek doosre ka saath kabhie bhi nahii chodenge... they will be together & face the difficulties coming their way... aur phir shayad kashish sujal ko anjali ke kartoot ke baare mein batayegi... aur uske baad sujal , akshat aur rishi ke saath milkar anjali ke shamath kii taiyaari karega.. aur haan their will be certain aasoo mein dube hue pyaar ke scenes , romantic scenes between sujal , kashish... me sure of it... ab yaara tu mereko bata mera guess sahii hai ya phir ghalat... 😃 dear ab please next part jaldi se post karna... me waiting for the next dramatic , emotional part very damn eagerly..
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ohhh she lost her baby that's so sad 😭 hope she survives it 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey finally finished reading your ff till here....lolzz 😆 ...hehehe 😆 😆 ....amazing yaar 👏 ....

continue soon!!!! 😉 😛

luv,
vandu 😉

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