The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

dii... i commented on WORDPRESS!!

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Barunsanaya10

@Barunsanaya10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Dis felt so Gud to read it...
Poor Riya... She had to go thru such a tortur... Dat sikandar iZ trying to create misunderstanding bw our Ariya... But he don knw dat love iZ nt dat week ... :)
D way Riya iZ asking him to love him... Wat iZ she hiding?
Suspense :p
D way arjun interrogated doc was omg... Bechara doc..
Just v8ing arjun Uss bloody sik ka kya krta hai... Just wantd ki vo Tadap Tadap ke mare... Jo usne bichari riya ke sath Kia...
N plz d way Riya she don hav much tym iZ confusing me... Plz don let our Riya die... Abhi toh Ariya romance properly start bhi Nhi hua... :(

Jst overol njoyd d chap alot.. Feel Lyk reading it again n again...
Thnku for update n do continue soon :)

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iluvrainaarti

@iluvrainaarti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

that was beautifull1 omg felt like crying when arjun broke down. and when he said i lost, i was crying (i'm at school right now, luckilly no one is around me). the quote you used;the person who has nothing to loose is the most dangerous man, coz all he has, is to accomplish, that was apt for this scene. it felt like this was quote was made just for your ff! loved the Flashback of making the cake for arjun but i felt disgusted at sik's behaviour!yuck! the precap was awesome but why did Arjun let sik go??????

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Hey ...

Fantastic update ... 👏

I'm sooo glad that we got THE Prince Arjun 😉

Just love his attitude ...

The way he threatened the poor Doctor up was fab 😆

Poor Doc kinda ran for his life ... But oops Rathod was there for him 😛

Grrr ... I just hate Sik ... He is just sickkk ... The way he treated Riya and didn't even give her proper treatment was just sick of him 😡

Riya ... She's just the most selfless person

I wish she should have informed Arjun before leaving ... But then she left her house for getting the fruits just for the sake of him😲

But even she wasn't aware of what will happen ...

Arjun ... Dude seriously you really should listen to your heart ...

If he would have listened to his heart ... He might have been able to save Riya ...

Sik ... He again tried to infuriate Arjun ... But I'm glad that Kaka was there for him ...

Hahahaha ... * Evil Laugh * Sik finally got to know that Riya escaped and Sky died 😃

Awww Riya was adorable 😉

The way she wanted Arjun to confess that he loves her was so sweet 😳

Can't wait for the next chapter ... 😛

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844858

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Wow! Its great seeing someone take a stand!
I completely understand what it is like to put all out there and hardly get any credit! I sent Pmz out only once...and I got soo tired🤣
Ok! I know I'm not like one of the best readers...coz I miss commenting on few parts at times 🤪...Now days with exams coming up...I really don't even get time to read the updates...bur when I do...I try my best to comment 😊
P.S. The only reason I don't follow ur FF is coz Im 16(nanhi munhi bacchi 😆 ) and u had told kids to stay away...so acting like a good kid(for once🤪) I did 😆
But totally support you in this 👏

Edited by lola123 - 12 years ago

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Seenavas

@Seenavas

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

my darling dhamki queen

u r very rite its so nice when u get appreciation for ur work

seriously iam trying my level best to comment on all the updates in this forum.

waiting for the next update

jaldi se dedo pls

respect and prayers

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ramya_ln

@ramya_ln

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Hi Muskaan,

I'm new to this forum and have come across your ff and read all the first 10 parts in one go but never commented...

After seeing your posts, now I understand how bad you might have felt after writing such beautiful updates and didn't get any comments.. I promise that going forward I'll make sure to comment on your update..

I just love d way how arjun always cared about riya, eventhough he always ill-treated her.. Love the way how riya loved n cared about Arjun in her own innocent way.. loved riya and amit's bonding.. he is so sweet... everything is so awesome..😊😊

and I am eagerly waiting for the next updates..can u plss pm me the 11th n 12th chapters plsss I want to read them..

thanks
Ramya

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playagame

@playagame

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

hi yr
i just read ur note..
it's realy sad to know dat hw silent reader r behaving..bt don't worry u r nt cruel or unfair one..
u r a talented n amazing writer..
wel,i m a new comer too n in love wid ur story n apperiate ur hard work..i promise i'll try to coment on all the 10parts..
my coments on all the 10 parts is in my next post..

Edited by playagame - 12 years ago

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Barun_Riti_LMH

@Barun_Riti_LMH

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Hiee Muski...
I told u in my cmnt previously dat after i wil finish reading all 10 parts...i wil cmnt...*on 141 page in 1st thread*
and now am late cz of some damn net errors,dats y cudnt post my cmnt earlier...now its on page 147...

Do give a look there...
Please if u can consider me as a reader,i wil be thankful...
With love...
-riti-

PS-ask the peoples to Go to hell who r calling u names...really peoples Go n get a life...they shud be ashamed of their deeds...
U need nt to listen those bullshits...

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

superb awsum amazing update dr...!!!👏

loved it...!!!

thank god doc saved riya...!!!

love the way he threatened that doc to tell him the truth...!!

in the flashback scenes wish arjun had listened to his heart...!!! and riya she shouldn't had gone out without telling arjun..!!!😭

that sik he so disgusting arghhh wanna kill him😡🤢 how dare he do all this to riya...!!! he froced riya to hurt herself...!!!😲 and the way he was talking with arjun...!!!

hope arjun kills sik very badly and painfully...!!!

awww love the way arjun was concerned for riya and broke down on seeing her in pain...!! he loves her soo much..!!

love the way riya told him she loves him and wants to listen i love you from him also...!!

but why is riya behaving like that?😲 and her demands? is something wrong? hope everything is okay soon...!!!

and the precap😲

arjun leaving sik but why?

cant wait for the next part...!!!

continue soon...!!!