The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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_Roka_

@_Roka_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

welcome back dear

i feel bad 4 riya

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anahita.095

@anahita.095

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

such an awesome and indeed a long update.every thing was well written.it was such an action packed update.that sik was so cheap.but finally he got killed.happy for that.precap sounds interesting.hope u update soon.
thanks for pm

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Wow! that was awesome! cool but brutal in a way! poor riya... she has to suffer a lot... and this sik is too cunning... unbelievable... somemore all the ETF members minus shree are injured... how would they have felt when riya had to kiss sik to save arjun... arjun would have really felt death is better than seeing this... poor arjun... riya is already in a bad state... and somemore this had to happen... that is even more annoying... hope riya will be okie... now worst... she lost her memory... that is even more sad... she remembers the brutal side of arjun and not the nice side of him...

arjun would have been more hurt now to see his love recognise him in the way he never wanted... argh! please no more torture to these couples... i totally can't see them so sad... i really hope riya will recover and she and arjun have a good life together... they deserve this after all that they have been through... can't wait to read more! please update soon! i totally can't wait to read the next update already... too eager already! Thank you for the PM.. i really appreciate it! =)

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playagame

@playagame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

wow!superb update yr...
so finally dat sik is dead...
i m so happy...
bt the last torture part by sik is rely horrible..
hw can he asked riya to kiss me in front of arjun...i hate him/..
bt bt bt arjun serve him right...
precap is excitng...
frankly while reading the updates i m sad...as sik is dead...i think dat u ended this ff... bt after reading the precap,i m so happy dat u put new twists in the story...
continue sooonnn...

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#415

hie muskaan di...welcome back!!!! hw were ur xams??

last 4 chap to mai access hi nai kar pa rahi...so i cudnt comment..

m reading this after ssooo maannnyy daaayyyss!!!😃

m so happy di...

thnx a looottt 4 d sssuuuppeerrr lloonngg uuppddaatteee...

now commenting on d update!!

oh...sik to sabse smart nikla..he fooled them with d mask and fake sik??

poor arjun..usse ladne me hi adha energy chala gya..!!😡😡

maar arjun..aur maar...!! kya dimag lagaya...salute wala...superb😊👏

ooho..riya..bechari...embarrased...hehe..chocolate n ice cream..bilkul bachchui hai..⭐️

oooww... kamina sik...he asked riya 2 kiss him...uske liye to itne gande wale slang muh me a rhe hai k kya bolu??!! yaha likh nai sakti..nai to ban kar dia jayega mereko!!

finally sik is dead...yyeaaahh!!

ooww..

precap to...she lost her memory??? nooo!!!!!!

update soon di,,,n i have pmed something 2 u..plz reply di...

👏👏👏

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Unresed at pg 51
pls check.

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#417

di i couldn't stop myself from reading the parts.
Just read the firt page.
And it left me speechless.
The concept is super. Arjun is a prince and riya is normal girl.

And then they get married.

Backstory is awesome

and the title of this fF is really fantastic. Loved arjun so much in your ff. His character as a prince bt his behavious and whta he have done. He runed away from his home, to became a police office. Loved his spirit. And then his marriage with riya. He really a very good son.
But why he is behving so cold toward riya..
There must be any reason . I will get to know wen i will read the next part.
Loved riya's passion of love towards him, and her never ending attemps to get his love for her, attracted me a lot.

But why he slapped her. And he behaved with her. Its huring di..
But i could understand there must be any reason of all thing .
Ab wahi padhna baki hai..

And the phone call.
Wo sik hi hai na??
Poor he..

Ok let me read the next part..
Will comment soon.