The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Most fav part till nw is d start of dis ch
com very understand
aww arjun manofy her wife brother wow
loved it
awesum
heart touching
kid n candy hehe
lovely
grtly writen..
shreetu too gud
arjun ji wow..!!
fab

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Loved d concern of etf fr riya..
arjun ke sath my eyes too get moist
hats off to riya fr enduring so much
her love is unconditional
precap very int
chumneshwari update..
thank u fr d outstanding ff dear
love u
hugs
tc n
all d best..!!

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maria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

14th chap was superb...poor riya...she's so scared...i wanna kill that b*****d😡how could he do dis ...i loved d way arjun pacified her...she recognised only arjun...i loved rathod bhaiya...he's so caring&loving...waiting 4 nxt chap.updt soon...😉

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

superb update...!!! am speechless...!!! its awsum...!!!

that sik arghhh hate him😡😡 wanna kill him very painfully and brutally...!!!🤢 poor riya she is so frightened of him.,...!!! she is so broken and has gone through so much...!!! how could sik do that...!!!

love sam's protectiveness towards riya...!!! he is such a caring brother...!!! glad that riya has sam arjun choree and mr raute with her for support... they are ready to go to any extreme to make her comfortable and safe...!!!

sam's convo with commissioner was nice and the way arjun manaofied him for the plan was lovely...!!!

omg riya is still in so much shock...!!! :'( she remembered everyone but couldn't recognize them...!!! it was so heart wrenching to see ki usse arjun ko phechane mai bhi time laga...!!! and she hurt self also in the process...!!!!😭😭😭but glad ek bar arjun ko pehchane ke baad she felt so safe and protected in his arms...!!!

love the way arjun made her understand by kissing her telling her that he is always with her...!!! finally usne riya ke samne usse i love you bol diya...!!!

and no this ff is not boring at all infact its very interesting...!!! am always eagerly waiting for the updates...!!!

precap is scary...!!! sik back in the palace...!!!!

hope arjun and etf usse bahut bure tareeke se maare riya ke samne so that all her fears are vanished...!!!

continue soon...!!!

cant wait for the next part...!!!

all the best for your examz...!!!!

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diya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Superb amazing job dii...

Aww who said you are boring your readers...

Your all updates seriously make us curious to know what know?

Really muskaan dii your write really Amazing...

Now im gonna talk about "Chap 14"

Once again Dii speechless...

So awsome depictions...

That Sikander uff if it was in my hands i would have murdered him upteeth times😡

Really cruel and cheap person..

Poor Riya suffered alot that sik have just digusted her mind...

The Scene when she saw light and ran towards it and that the two blocking her way but she ducked...

Then the scene she called "Arjun" uff i had goosebumps at that time imagining it...

So awsome and awwe struck it was...the way she confirmed it's him and than pleading him to "Believe" her really enchanting...

Arjun is Arjun no matter what He loves Riya alot...

Beautiful update diii continue writing...👏

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sana khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

heyyy muskaan its a fab update dear

evrythng was v.weel describe n written like always v can imagine the hole scene while reading the story completely it fells like v r watching the show actually...

truly speaking dear the whole part was actually gng on ma mind alredy i thought so ki aisa hi hoga is part mai before u updated it the way rathore reacted n d way arjun;s father support arjun n the way riya reacted...th hole part went as i expected evry thng...i found the magic u create in ur every chapter was missing in this part nt completely bt lill bit... n m extremely v. sry if any of ma words hurt u i only said wat i fell...

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Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

EEEW!!!! that sik deserves worst punishment... he is disgusting.. really.. poor riya... she has gone through a lot!!

loved how arjun manofied rathore... n how rathore pouted to comm.. lol dont know y but i find it funny.. loved rathore's concern for riya...

poor riya!!! felt really really bad for her... poor soul cant even recognize her love... still arjun proved he loves her a lot!! liked him for that..

hope he will give sik very good punishment.. looking fwd for more ariya 😉

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pooja bhattacharya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

hey
finally my net is fixed
i have read your previous work and it was amazing
read all the parts of the fading butterfly in one go

when i read the first few parts was highly pissed at arjun for treating her like that but when the reason was disclosed i felt bad for him...

ahhh sikandar what can i say about him i just wish he goes to a place which is worse than hell

riya is a sweetheart...i mean loving someone who belittles you at every opportunity he has his reasons but she does not know about them but still loves him deeply and craves for his attention and love is commendable .she is shown weak but to love some one like that you have gotta be the strongest person.

after being kidnapped by sikander that hope and the trust which she had on arjun was remarkable.

sometimes you take people for granted and only come to know of their value when you have lost them or about to loose them i think thats whats happened with arjun here till he realized riya's importance in his life it was a bit too late cause sikandar had kidnapped her.

well true lovers have to go through many hurdles so i think ariya will also be going through them...i think it would make their relationship more stronger.

the flashbacks were amazing...the characters are portrayed so well...loved rathod...he is an amazing friend and a good leader.

well i could only read the 10 parts cause the other parts are on the blog...i know my comment is short for the lovely ten parts that you have written but i am not that great with words...i just can say that your work is amazing.

i know i will be sounding selfish but i would really like an invite to your blog...please...i love reading and yours is one of my fav's so if you could please take out some time.i would really appreciate it.

Edited by shona16 - 12 years ago

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rashikhandelwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

hey! I am rely sry that i cant able 2 comment 2 every post and this is becoz of my boards i can rarely comment ina week but after exam i wil be a regular reades i want to read the last 4 part but i cant able plz send me those links so that i can read and connent on them

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wondergirl1990

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

super cop ka paln to kill sik is awesome and the way he convinced etf team & mr rawte was also fantastic ..
Sam love towards riya was just awsumm..loved Rathod's love for his sister
Poor riya…she is so frightened yaar…but the way ASR consoled her and kissed to take her

fear out was great……Sach Riya has gone through a lot go physical and mental pain,Sik is such a b…….!!riya's unconditional love for arjun is really impressive and unbelievable…loved when arjun kissed riya to assure her that he still lovs her…Plzzz update soon….n thnx f the Pm..Arshi👏