The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

awww awesome update
tht sik really hate him
liked how arjun was convincing sameer
loved sameer love for riya he was so worried about her tht was amazing
riyas was really frightened bt arjun was their with her nd loved the way arjun was consoling her
interesting precap
waiting for the next chapter
thanks 4 the pm
continue soon

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_Roka_

@_Roka_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

urrrggg i hate that sik hw could he do that 4 the poor riya

n arjun i don't like what he did by letting him go but i love hw he prove to her that he still love her n its not her damn fault she still pure

pravooo dear ur writing is more than awsammm i still can't believe that i read ff not for Arshi lool

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Great update! I love the way Arjun convinced Rathore and the others. It breaks my heart to see Riya like that. I hope Arjun and team get even with Sik soon! I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!

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Endless_sky

@Endless_sky

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

loved the update. i really feel bad for riya she has suffered so much at the hands of sik even though she is free she is still haunted by him. the feat still exists I loved how no matter what riya didn't lose faith in arjun she waited for him when she was kidnapped and still she trust him. sad that arjun was so mean in the past i know he had hos own reasons but still riya suffered a lot first with arjun, then sik and now her own fears. loved the update and longing forward to reading more. it will take a long time for riya to get over her fear and trauma

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Such a nice update...
Rathod's concern for his sister...
Arjun's confidence to kill Sikandar...
The flashbacks gave me goosebumps...
How can some1 be so cheap n cruel..??
But Sikandar proved himself to be one...such a jerk..
Poor Riya..
But still her Love n Trust for Arjun... never ending...
The way she hugged Arjun...
Like the Yash Chopra movie heroine...
I actually liked it... it was such a cute scene...just imagine..
Then the kiss...awww<3<3
She wanted to make sure Arjun loved her...
So now Sik will be back...
The co-ordination betn past n present is so good...
But in this chap..the Sikandar scenes were a bit too much...in my view...as I just want ARIYA...
It was amazing update..
Loved it..

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sanjanakm

@sanjanakm

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

thanks muskan di for sending me the link thank u vry much abhi aage ke chapters pade nhi hai padne ke baad reply karungi bye

sanjana

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manjusha_92

@manjusha_92

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Hi muskan,

though logged in the blog but not able to read the chapters 12,13 and 14. Could you please sent the link to manjusha92 in ifs forum

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mithramahi

@mithramahi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Muskaan...I hav read d part...
Sorry lil busy wit friends ...
Will post d detailed review soon...
In one word,its awesome...!!!!
Love you loads... 👏

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umamah70

@umamah70

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

wow awesome……👏
loved it to bits…👍🏼
when i read that flashback…i feel like killing that bloody sik…🤢😡
loved the way rathore was concerned 4 his sis riya….
when riya was scared in her own room imagining sik….the whole scene was awesomely written…👏
loved when arjun kissed riya to assure her that he still lovs her…👏

GOODLUCK 4 EXAMS….👍🏼
update soon….

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playagame

@playagame

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#220

Read ur update right now..
poor riya...
dat sik is insane man..hw did he do dis wid..he behaved lyk an animal..i hate him...
i m just dying to see him dead by arjun..
ok rathore is complaining to comm. lyk a child...awww...he is so protective for riya..he is realy so sweet...
riya is scared n arjun is trying to calm her down...wah arjun kya tarika dhunda h riya ko chup karne kya...mind blowing..
ok the precap..sik is in the palace...
dat sound interestng n scaring too...waiting 4 nxt part eagerly...
n ha woh tumhara f.b wala ques. i don't think k tumhe wo rokna chahiye..
n c'mon u r amazing writer.. n i m sure u never bored any1.. atleast not me...bye..keep writing..

Edited by playagame - 12 years ago